#1 [AR+D3] Sajda (FF) Chapters 1-4

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

Wow . . . Khushi dat was wonderful . . 😃 . . . . Why not kriya ki entry jo ho gayi 😉

& wat a superb entry 👏

I thought she would be some depressed sort of gal . . . But she's the bravo . . . . Handling missions . . . . Impressive 👍🏼

& the way u described the sudden change of interiors . . . . I was a bit shocked as it's mysterious . . . . 😳

secret mission . . . . . Rey . . . . . Dil gaya kaam se 😍

mujhe toh tension ho rhi hai ki mission ke baad kriyaansh ka kya hoga 😆

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Awsm update khushi!

Kriya and karan bonding is nice

Waiting for the next one!

Thanx for pm

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

ok now kria'll protect rey!!!thats interesting!!nice update...continue soon n dont 4get 2 pm me!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Interesting start...toh Kria secret agent & will protect Rey- what is her age? Just curious to know kyunki Rey is a student still...hopefuly as secrets unfold one by one things will b more transparent...so waiting for the next update 😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Awesome update! Kriya is a secret agent? How cool is that? Kriya-Rajveer convo was cool and spy-like. Loved when he told her to keep hush about the friendly conversation. lol Cant wait to read more!

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Amazng update...
Luvd it.. .
Kriya's a secret agent...cool!!!
N she has 2 protect rey...awesome ...
Fab intro...!!!
Waitng fr nxt part...

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

hey its awesome
loved it
kria a secret agent wow...

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

Wooaah! I loved this chapter Khushi! :)

Through out this part my eyes were glued on the screen, I guess I even forgot to blink! :P

Well, well, well it was definitely one of the best stuff I ever read on the secret agent thing.

The way Kriya was introduced and then her conversation with Rajveer and Karan was well penned. I loved all those dialogues, quite effective I must say.

So, Kriya is moving to Mumbai to protect Rey whose father called up FBI a few days back. That was a surprise!

I am really loving the way this story is proceeding.

You are undoubtedly an amazing writer! :)

So, there's one thing I want to know that why is Kriya restricted from dancing? Can you please answer that if possible.

Well penned!

I hope this comment made you happy! :)

plz update asap!

thanks for the pm