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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Here is the next update I have tried my level best to make this update extra special

I had to think a lot before penning down this part do let me know if my efforts were fruitful or not. If possible do give me big comments😳
love-Piya
PART 102



They locked their eyes and Maan intensified his pace and within a matter of seconds Geet was able to accept every long thrust that her charming husband gifted her

It went on happening again and again

Every thrust of Maan was powerful and excruciating yet for her this was a blissful journey which gave her immense happiness and satisfaction

He cradled her hips as she dug her fingers into his shoulders, as Maan successfully plunged to the deep end of her feminity

They held each other close as slowly they reached ecstacy and promised to love one another in the same fashion till the last breath of their life

After decorating their first morning after their wedding with the flowers of their love and romance Maaneet finally stepped out of the washroom

Maan scooped his Maayari in his arms as they entered their room

They towel dried one another giving birth to few more passionate moments

Both of them took their own sweet time to dress each other

Finally they were dressed and were ready to walk downstairs to meet their family for the breakfast

Dadima, Dev, Meera and Annie were already present

Maaneet take the blessings of Dadima

Dadima: Kya baat hai Geet aapke chehre ka noor ka jawab hi nahi aisa kya kar diya Maan ne ek raat mein zara ye secret hume bhi toh bataiye [Wow the glow on your face has no match, Geet what was the magic that Maan used in one night which has glorified ur beauty to such a level tell me the secret also]

Geet started blushing as she was feeling to shy with Dadima's naughty talks

Meera: Kya baat hai Geet ek sawal se hi tere chehre mein ye lali aa gayi [What's the matter Geet only one question and see the reddish tinge on your face]

Maan decided to control the situation

Maan: Meera tu chashma laga le Geet ke gaalo ka rang gulabi hail al rang toh ab aayega [Meera u should go for an eye check up the color of Geet's cheek is pink, the reddish tinge will be visible right now]

Saying so Maan placed a loving kiss on Geet's cheek taking everyone by surprise

Geet simply hid her face in his chest

Maan: Dekha ab Geet ke gaal lal lag rahe hai [Look now there is a reddish tinge on my Geet's cheek]

Geet hit him playfully on his chest whereas the other family members burst out laughing

After few seconds Annie reminded everyone that the game ritual was pending and she has decided the game that Maaneet would be playing

Everyone was excited for the game and Annie decided to explain her game in detail

Annie: Game ye hai k Maan bhai ko Geet bhabhi k baare mein 10 cheeze batani hogi jisse k wo nafrat karte hai aur thik ussi tarah Geet bhabhi ko bhi 10 aisi cheeze batani hogi Maan bhai k baare mein jisse ki wo nafrat karti hai [Maan and Geet have to disclose 10 things that they hate about each other in front of all of us this is the Game that both of them need to play]

Dadima: Ye kaisa game hai Annie? [What type of game is this Annie?]

Annie: Ye Annie special game hai Dadima kafi sochne ke baad maine iss game ko final kiya hai [This is Annie special game Dadima I have finalized this game after lots of thinking]

Dev: Par Annie iss game se tu saabit kya karna chahti hai agar tujhe koi game khelna hai toh aisa game khel jisse ke Bro aur bhabhi k pyar ki gehrayi pata chale aisa stupid game nahi jo ke nafrat ke baare mein bataye [But Annie, what are u trying to prove from this game? U should have selected a game that would have highlighted the beautiful bond of love that Bro and bhabhi share with each other and not this game which would be showcasing the things that they hate about each other]

Meera: Aur bevakoof kal hi toh inki shadi hui hai aur tere iss game ki wajah se tu inn dono k beech aaj hi jhagda karwana chahti hai kya? [Stupid they have got married yesterday and your game will lead to a fight between them today itself]

Annie: Stupid tu hogi, naa main stupid hoon aur naahi mera game samjhi tu [U r stupid, neither am I a fool nor is my game foolish did u get that?]

Maan and Geet were silently witnessing the discussion that was going on

They held each other's hand and shared an eyelock and asked one another if they should go ahead with the game or not

A smile made way to their faces as the answer that both of them got was a YES

Without wasting a single moment both of them voiced their opinion

Maan and Geet together: Hum ye game khelne ke liye taiyaar hai [We are ready to play this game]

Annie: Yippee

Dadima: Aap dono ka irada pakka hai? [R u sure about your decision?]

Maaneet nod their heads

Annie: Okay ab chuki bhaiya aur bhabhi ne Annie ki baat bina koi sawal kiye maanli iss liye main aap dono ka kaam aasan kar dethi hoon. Maine 10 cheeze kahi thina ab aap dono ko total mein 10 cheeze batani hongi mera matlab hai Maan bhai 5 galtiyaan ginwayenge aur Geet bhabhi 5 galtiyaan [Okay since Bro and Bhabhi accepted Annie's game without questioning I will be generous and will make the game simpler instead of giving me individual 10 faults now each one of u would contribute a total of 10 that means 5 faults from Maan's side and 5 faults from Geet's side]

Dev: Haan ab ye game phir bhi thik hai [I think this game is fair enough now]

Annie: Ab maza aayega aaj finally hum sabko pata chal jaayega k humare iss pyare jodi ko ek dusre ki kaunsi aadat se nafrat hai aakirkaar life ikate jeeni hai toh ek dusre ki khoobiyon ke saath saath ek dusre ki khamiyaan bhi pata honi chahiye [Wow now the funs begins as finally each one of us would come to know the things that this magical couple hate about each other as I feel it is important to know each other's faults along with each other's likings if u need to lead a happy married life]

Dadima: Ye baat toh aapne sahi kahi Annie [U have a point Annie]

Annie: Toh der kis baat ki hai chaliye start karte hai hmm'pehle kaun galtiyaan ginwana shuru karega Maan bhai ya Geet bhabi? [So what are we waiting for? Hmm' so who will start narrating the list of faults would it be Maan bahi or Geet bhabhi?]

Meera: Alternate karte hai ek baar Maan jiju aur phir apni Geet [Let's play the alternate game once Maan jiju will take the charge followed by Geet]

Annie: Done. Toh chaliye Maan bhai apni Maayari ki pehli aisi cheez bataiye jisse ke aap nafrat karte ho [Done, common Maan bhai tell us the first thing about your Maayari that u hate the most]

Maan looks directly into Geet's eyes and starts speaking

Maan: MSK ko kisi bhi baat se darr nahi lagta tha, bekhauff thi meri zindagi tumhare aane se pehle Geet par jabse tum meri zindagi mein shamil hui ho ussi pal se mujhe darr ka ehsaas hone laga [MSK was never scared of anything Geet I used to lead a very carefree life but as soon as u became a part of my life I came face to face with the emotion of fear]

Maan caressed Geet's face lovingly and continued

Maan: Mujhe nafrat hai uss darr se jise main din raat jeeta hoon, mujhe nafrat hai iss khauff se k kahi tum mujhse ruth na jau aur main apni zindagi ki sabse khoobsurat subah, apni Geet ko khona baitu'Haan Geet mujhe tumhare iss diye hue darr se nafrat ye jaante hue bhi ke tumhari mohabbat ke saamne mera ye darr bebuniyaad hai par phir bhi tumhe khone ka darr humesha mujh par hawi rehtha hai'Haan mujhe nafrat hai tumhare diye hue iss darr se haan mujhe nafrat hai [I hate this fear which haunts me every day and night, I hate this feeling of losing the most beautiful sunlight of my life, my Geet although I am aware that in front of your love my fear is baseless but yet this fear haunts me sending shivers throughout my body. Yes I hate my baseless fear that u have gifted me. Yes I hate this. Yes I hate this]

Geet was rendered speechless after hearing Maan's words

The remaining family members were pleasantly surprised whereas Annie was busy scratching her head as she was unable to decide if this was a way of narrating the faults or was it an indirect way of confessing the boundless love that Maaneet possess for each other

It was now Geet's turn to tell the first thing that she hates about her loving husband

Geet: Duniya bhar ke gamo ko apne seene mein samet sakthi thi main, har takleef ko apni muskurahat ke peeche chupa lethi thi main par aapke aate hi ye sab kuch badal gaya. [I had the capability to hide all my pains deep in my heart, I had the potential to hide my worries behind my smile but everything changed the day u entered my life]

Geet: Maan mujhe nafrat hai aapki inn mathbhari nighahon se jo mere dil ke har ankahe jasbaato ko bina mere bataye padh lethi hai, mujhe nafrat hai aapki taakthi hui nazro se jo meri ruh ko apne wafao ki khushboose mehka dethi hai, main apne gamo ko puri duniya se chupa bhi lu par aapke pyar bhari ek nigaah mujhe bebas kar dethi hai aur mere dil ki har ek baat aapke saamne kholkar rakh dethi hai'Haan Maan mujhe nafrat hai aapki inn aakhon se jo mujhe aapka gulam bana dethi hai'[I hate your magical eyes Maan that have the ability to read all the unsaid emotions of my heart with ease, I hate your eyes which look deep into my soul and fragrant it with the scent of your loyality. I may succeed to hide my pains from this entire world but I fail miserably in front of your one loved filled look and u get to know all the hidden elements of my heart successfully. Yes Maan I hate your soul touching eyes which makes me a slave of your love]

Every word of Geet made Maan realize the important place that he holds in her life

Oh he felt so proud that he was the owner of the most beautiful heart of this world

The rest of the family was awestruck with Geet's explanation

Now it was Maan's turn to tell the 2 thing that he hates about his darling wife

Maan: Rango ka shaukeen toh nahi tha par rango ki samaj zarurthi, duniya ke har ek rang ko pehchan saktha tha main par jabse kismat bankar tum meri zindagi mein shaamil hui ho Geet tab se meri nazro ko bus 1 hi rang nazar aata hai [I was never an admirer of colors but I knew all the different shades of life but the day u entered my life as my destiny I can see only 1 color around me]

Maan: Jab main tumhari taraf dekhtha hoon aur jab tum sharmajathi ho toh tumhare galo par saji apne pyar ki lali se mera dil jhoom uththa hai'haan Geet mujhe nafrat hai iss ehsaas se ke mujhe tumhari gaalo ke lal rang se mohabbat hai jo ke kuch pal ke liye hi sahi mera dhyan tumhare uss khoobsurat mann se alag kar detha hai'[When I look at u, u get red and look away thus giving my heart tremendous happiness. Geet I hate that reddish tinge of my love on your cheeks as it forces me to divert my mind from your beautiful heart for few seconds]

Annie had never expected her game to take this turn but she was now proud to have suggested this game as it was helping Maaneet to express their love for each other in a different and unique way

Geet: Apne jasbatho par kaboo kar sakthi thi main par aapki ek jhalak paate hi main kahi kho si jaathi hoon, agar gussa bhi hona chahu tab bhi aapki shararat bhari ek muskurahat mujhe momh ki tarah pigaldethi hai'Haan mujhe nafrat hai iss ehsaas se ke mere dil-o-dimaag mein bus aapka hi nasha chaya hua hai aur wo bhi kuch iss tarah k ab iss nashe ke bagair mera jee paana naamumkin hai [I had control over my emotions but as soon as I get your glimpse I go in a trance, even if I want to be angry on u, your one mischievious smile would be enough to melt my anger like a candle. Yes I hate this truth that u have intoxicated my mind and soul to such an extent that I am unwilling to come out of this intoxicated state]

Maan couldn't resist himself from placing a sweet kiss on Geet's forehead

Maan: Mujhe ye gumha tha ke main khud ko sabse acche tareeke se pehchanta hoon par meri iss galatfaimi ko tumne toda hai Geet kyunki tumhare aane se maine jaana k main tumhare bagair shayad khud ko kabhi pehchaan hi nahi saktha tha'haan mujhe nafrat hai iss baat se k tumne mujhe galat saabit kar diya kyunki iss sachayi ko jaane ke baad tumhare bagair ek pal bhi bita paana mere liye naamumkin sa ho gaya hai agar tum mere nazro se ek pal ke liye bhi ojhal ho jau toh mere adhurepan ka mujhe ehsaas ho jaata hai'haan mujhe nafrat hai uss adhurepan ke ehsaas se [I had this misconception of knowing myself completely but u made me meet my true self. Yes I hate this fact that u proved me wrong as now after learning the truth I feel incomplete without u and I can't stay away from u even for a second as it makes me feel that I may again fail to meet my true self]

Geet took Maan's hand securely in between her palms

Geet: Befikr thi meri zindagi, kisi baat ki chinta nahi thi mujhe par ab jab aap mujhe mil gaye ho mere dil mein ek aise jasbe ne karwat li hai jisse ke main pehle bekhabar thi. Geet wo ladki thi jo apni har ek cheez sabke saath baat sakthi thi par ab agar aapki taraf kisi gair ladki ne muskurakar ek nazar bhi dekhli toh main wo bardaash nahi kar sakthi'.haan mujhe nafrat hai iss jalan se jo main mehsoos karti hoon jab koi mere Maan ko apni taraf kheechne ki koshish karta hai [ I was a free bird I had no tensions but ever since I have u by my side a new feeling has originated in my heart. I was a girl who could share every big and small thing with others but now even if a girl tries to woo u with her beautiful smile I feel jealous'Yes I hate this feeling of jealousy that I go through when someone tries to gain the attention of my Maan]

Maan placed Geet's hand near his heart

Maan: Pehle kabhi khuda par yakeen kar na saka par tumhare aane se meri zindagi ki har ek baat badal gayi, ab jab dua maangne ke liye ye haath uththe hai tab zabaan par bus tumhari salamati ki baate hi sajthi hai kuch iss tarah tumne mere dil ko apne pyar se tarasha hai ke ab mera dil mere naam se nahi tumhare naam se dhadaktha hai'Haan mujhe nafrat hai uss bete hue har ek waqt se jab hum ek dusre ko nahi jaante the kaash tum mujhe pehle mil jaati toh mere dil ki dhadkane tumhare pyar se kuch aur nikhar jati [I failed to believe in God initially but my attitude changed as soon as u entered my life. Whenever I raise my hands for praying the only wish that crosses the barriers of my lips is to see u safe and sound. U have decorated my heart with so much love that my heart beats by your name. Yes I hate the time wherein we did not meet as it makes me realize that if at all we had met before then my heartbeats would have been beautified by your love to a much greater extent]

Geet lowered her eyelashes and submitted herself to Maan's soul touching statement

Geet: Ek saadaran si ladki thi main par jabse aapne mujhe apne baho ke panahon mein ghera hai yun lagta hai jaise ke main aasman mein udd rahi hoon'haan mujhe nafrat hai uss gumha se jo mujhe saadaran hokar bhi iss jag se pare hone ka ehsaas dilathi hai'janti hoon ke main mitti ki murat hoon par iss dil ko ye manzoor nahi ke wo ye sachhayi sweekar kar le uska toh bus ek hi armaan hai ke umr bhar aapki baho mein mehfoos rahe'Haan mujhe nafrat hai iss galatfaimi se jise main chahkar bhi dur nahi karna chahti [I was an ordinary girl but the day u took me in your loving embrace I could see myself floating in the air'Yes I hate my foolishness which makes me feel special even though I am ordinary. I am aware that I am made of sand but my heart fails to digest this truth as it wants to live every moment in your protected folds. Yes I hate this misconception of mine that I don't wish to get out from]

It was now time for the last thing that would mark the end of Annie's game

Maan raised Geet's face lovingly by holding her chin with his thumb

Their eyes meet and without a moments delay Geet submits herself in the loving embrace of Maan

Maaneet (together): Hume nafrat hai uss jhooth se jo hum keh rahe the kyunki sach toh ye hai ke humari mohabbat mein itni sachhayi hai ke hume ek dusre ki khamiyoon se bhi pyar hai'humare rishte ki neev itni mazboot hai ke nafrat ki talwaar iss rishte ko kabhi chunauti de hi nahi sakthi'Haan hume pyar hai ek dusre ki har choti badi baat se aur ye pyar yuhi barkarar rahega umrbhar khatm na hoga humre wafao ka ye safar [We hate the lie that we were narrating as our love is so pure that our weakness also appear to take the form of our strength. The foundation of our relationship is so strong that the sword of hatred cannot challenge the divinity of our love. Yes we are in love with every small and big thing that each one of us possesses and this love will continue to blossom throughout our life as the journey of our loyality will continue to spread its shine forever and ever]

Dadima had tears in her eyes as the entire family started applauding in happiness and showered their blessings on our beloved couple

PRECAP: Geet: "Ye kiski tasveer hai" [Who is the lady in this photograph?]

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Part 103: Page 133

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first yipppeee

awsome update
hot shower
nd how dey dressed each toher
nd everyone pulling deir legs
nd maan flirting wid her infront of everyone

tooo goooddd
anie game too awsome
how dey narrated deir positive pts infront of everyone
nd precP INTERESTING
Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
even i have tears dear
great'u always do magic with ur words dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update a lot...
5 things was beautifully described...
i love ur way of thinking and this superb thots...
i hate one thing about u is that u make me forget things around me when i read each of ur updates..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 man...
No one can think like yu
Such pure tots...
Wow
Superb
Loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

loved how u wrote it all...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lvly updt yaar
everybody teasng my geetu..😆
bt wah lvly game annie
khud game plan kr ke khud hi confuse 😆
bt annie yaar ye toh love confession game bn gya😍😍😍
mai toh fida mere maaneet pe...
😍😍😍
precap- 😕

Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
The Last statement was just Beautiful ...flawless ...great work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update di
just lovd hw they naratted every thng..
Waitng for next
that lady is maan's mom kya?
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome n beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it tooo much...

hum kya kahenge...humarein toh boltihi bandh hogaye hai inke pyar k samne...yeh ehsaas jisko sirf mehsoos kar sakte hai...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

hats off to u dear...u r tooo good to describe deir love in such an unique way...hum toh apke deewane hogaye...

continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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