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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
congrats to u,on ur 2nd ff,thx for making asr a cool guy,interesting concept pls cont soon
is karan and arjun are the same
thx fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: binimoti

i really like your story and pm me the updates but you have some printing mistake sorry if copy paste i not allowed:
Khushi Kumari Gupta: 20 year old girl, belongs to a rich and famous family the Gupta's, daughter of DK Gupta and daughter of Daljeet Gupta, sister of Payal Gupta and Karan Gupta. Also is friends with Lavanya AKA La. Works in the family business of fashion designing. Bubbly, romantic, funny and has a big secret.

Arjun Gupta: 24 year old boy, Brother of Khushi and Payal loves them more then anything in the world. Son of DK Gupta and son of Daljeet Gupta, Loving, dangerous, romantic and protective. Help his dad in the business.



Khushi then runs down stairs to the man who is also very impotent to her "PAPA!!"
mistakes are highlighted I found the last one really funny😆
P.S: its not my idea to offend you, if it has been in any sense offensive I am sorry.



Thx and i don't mind

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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
story is good though it is like fairytale ur imagination is good...i thnk u like ths type of stories
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Love the concept!!!!! can't wait to read more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Sounds Interresting

W8ng 4 the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
nice concept...
interesting...

continue soon...


thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
wow..

interesting concept..

will look forward to reading further..

many thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
love Arnav in this story =) =)
Frankly when i read the prologue it remind me Shrek sweety =) hahahaha =)
Looking forward to read the next part =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow
awesome concept and a great start
thanx for the pm
continue soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part:2

Arnav and Aakash r in the car going to GFH for the meeting. Arnav puts the music on full volume and starts to dance, "Stop dancing and drive Arnav" Aakash says looking scared "Chill man nothing will happen" Arnav says still dancing and singing!!

GFH:

meanwhile in GFH Khushi was in the meeting room getting everything ready, "There that looks better" She says and smiles.

Arnav and Aakash walk into GFH Arnav and Khushi both fell a breeze on there face. "Bhai, are u ok u seem to be in a different world" Aakash said trying to bring Arnav back to life, "Oh ummm... no dude i was just thinking how nice and 1st class this place looks" Arnav lies but still admires the place.

Arjun then walks up to Arnav and Aakash and shakes there hand "Hello u must be Arnav Singh Raizada and Aakash Singh Raizada, am i right?" Arjun says shaking there hand "Yes u r right" Arnav said. Arjun then leads them to the meeting room, "Ummm, where can i get water from?" Arnav asked "Oh i will show u, go straight and then left and u will find a room which u can get water from" Arjun says showing Arnav the way to someone's cabin but who's???

Khushi had just finished fixing the meeting room and went to her cabin, When she went in she saw that one of the pictures from the wall were on the floor, "oh god why does this picture always fall." Khushi went up to the picture and picked it up. She was trying to hang it but she couldn't reach so she got a chair, Khushi climbed the chair even though it was wobbling.

Arnav comes in the cabin and sees a girl trying to hang a picture on the wall, just then he notices that the chair is wobbling and "AHHH!!" Instead of feeling the hard ground under her Khushi felt 2 strong arms holding her, Arnav was lost in her beauty it felt like he was in a dream "Why does it fell like she is mine, she belongs to me i need her more then she needs me. Why am i lost in her. Why do i fell like her eyes, ears, hair, lips and beauty are all for me." Arnav was in a dream world. Khushi slowly opened her eyes and got the best present anyone could ever get after falling "Wow, normally when people fall they find them selves in a hospital but me... i found my self in the arms of a prince...MY PRINCE" Khushi thought to her self. The world had stopped for them. They both looked into each others eyes and RABBA VE!!!

Just then then there was a knock at the door, Arnav and Khushi both came out of there dream world into the real world. "Ma'am Arjun sir is calling u for the meeting" One of the workers said. Khushi quickly got down and fixed her self up, "Oh i am coming" Khushi said quickly. Then she turned to Arnav "Thx, if u weren't here then i would have fallen, by the way i am Khushi, Khushi Kumari Gupta" Khushi said moving her hand forward, Arnav then held her hand and shook it "It's ok and i am Arnav Singh Raizada nice to meet u" Arnav said then slowly kisses Khushi's hand. "Oh so ur from R constructions then?" Khushi asked surprised "Yep i am" Arnav says fixing his blazer.

They both then go to the meeting room, on the way there they both talk and find out allot about each other.

They both enter the meeting room and site in there seats "Here she is my princess ummm... i mean my daughter Khushi, Khushi Kumari Gupta" DK says introducing Khushi to Aakash, Aakash and Khushi both shake hands. They all talk about the deal but all Arnav could do was look at Khushi.

After an hour the meeting was finished and then deal was made.

Arnav and Aakash were going towards the car just then Arnav saw Khushi going towards her car and runs up to her, "Heyy" Arnav said quickly "remember me" Khushi smiles and answers "Yes i do we left the meeting room just some time ago" Khushi said laughing. Arnav was lost in Khushi's beauty whilst she was laughing. "Ummm... would u like to... got to... lunch with me... just lunch?" Arnav asked hopping Khushi will say yes. "Well... I'm not doing anything so...OK" Khushi said smiling.

Precap: Arnav and Khushi go on a date (Or as they say just a lunch)😊
Edited by xoxarshixox - 13 years ago

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