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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

It's true.

You remind me of a joke:

'Why was the banana alone?'

'Because it was a-kela' 🤣 🤣

LOOOL!
LOOOL
LOOOL

Do not doubt the fact that i am literally pissing myself

🤣

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: shay1990

LOOOL!
LOOOL
LOOOL

Do not doubt the fact that i am literally pissing myself

🤣

GO GET LOST.

BOTH OF YOU.

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows
Res*
JSGVSGNG FINALLLY. SHAY. -.-

THIS IS MINE.

Edited*

Oh my lord, that is absolutely amazing 😆 NK and La are just sittign there, doing whatever they have to and barely paying attention. But as soon as Khushi talks about forgiveness, La's flips the shit out. Oh and not to mention, NK and the hissy fit upon Arnav being called seksy 🤣

But on a more serious note, I actually do love what you've done here. The whole conundrum she's facing, and now she's doubting herself. Thats just so...her. Khushi cant hurt anyone more than a certain point, even if they deserve chappals and tamaatars aimed in their direction -.-

AHHH

First it was angry Arnav, now its a possessive one? MY WEEKEND IS MADE *dies*
No but really, whoosh that is just so hot. *_* But poor Akaash 😆 Bina baat ke uski phat rahi hai, and he's just doing this for Arnav. O ho! And Anjali Di adds fuel to the fire 🤣

Awww, NAANIJI! AAPNE TOH RULA DIYA YAARA -.-

AKAASH OML PLEASE JUST GIVE HIM TO ME. PLEASE?
Arnav is Khushi's, I can understand that. But mujhe mera Akaash de do na. Allah ke naam pe de do *holds hands out and begs*

LOLOLOLOL.
I feel bad for Khushi. I really do 😆 That poor chic has to go through so much waise bhi, and now she's also working with him! Bechaari. And ASR doesnt make things easier. At all.

Oh lord. Kya se kya hogaya Shay :O Poor Arnav! He was just tyring so hard and it just spoiled! BUT YOU DESCRIBE IT SO WELL. THE WHOLE THING HAPPENING WITH K IS JUST BRILLIANTLY DONE. I hate you -.-

Awwie! So poor K has broken down-this time completely. I dont blame her. There's only a certain time limit to being inhuman. We all have to return to those human tendencies soon enough.

JGKEGENGNEAGJE
Did you really just do that Shay?!
W*F? My poor K! Please tell me she learnt some martial arts or at least knows some moves? 😕

Cliffhanger ka naya matlab is you yaara -.-

JBJGBEGG
LOVED IT LIKES I LOVES YOUS.

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FIRST FIRST FIRST FIRST

Avi my bacha... Told you I'd get to you 😉

Firstly, like always, i will take this space to fully thank and appreciate your wonderful words - each and every single time you never fail to put the biggest smile on my face. Don't ever doubt that. 🤗
Your words (and everyone elses for that matter) give me the ammunition i need to plough through this story... Not that i don't love writing it that is 😆

Moving on however, it is funny hey, when NK has his hissy fit 😆 I loved writing that bit... It was so vivid in my mind at the time. I thought this chapter could do wit a bit more humour, and people like Akash/NK always help me in doing this. Obvs Akash is the main one.. Because well he is f**king amazing! And for you Avi... Akash hamesha tumhara rahenga 🤗 He's so cheeky, he's so cute.. and he's so lovable. Mera pyaara Akash

And yes, Arnav dearest has been trying ever so hard... But not hard enough 😈 He's going to feel like he's been stabbed 100 times (hypothetically) in the heart before he's up to date with Khushi's sadness. Muuuahahahaha... How i love to make our hotstuff suffer 😆

And also... Will Khushi get out of this? Does she know martial arts? Pata nahi hai... You'll have to wait till the next update 😉
On the plus side however, as per my schedule, I'm hoping the next chapter will be up even quicker... Because i'm quite excited about this one - been waiting to write it out for ages now! Hopefully it'll all go to plan

Love you Avi 😳 🤗

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Shay

@shay1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: chillygirl
Hey there
I just came across this story when I found it on avi's recommendation thread. It's simply amazing. The way u have described and written the emotions, inner turmoil and dilemma of the characters is mind-blowing. Ur writing is so gripping that my heart goes out to khushi and I feel like smacking arnav for being an ass.
Looking forward to read more now

Thank you so so much!!!

You have no idea how i actually appreciate your words 🤗
I'm so glad you're liking it, and don't worry... We all feel like smacking Arnav right now LOL 😉
Thank you so much once again (And to Avi when she reads this, thank you once again for recommending my work. You know i love you😳)

Shay X

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

GO GET LOST.

BOTH OF YOU.

LOOL ab itna bhau bhi nahin khaana chaahiye, ladki!! 😆

You know how they say:

Ab jaane bhi de jo bhi hua, usse jaane hi de ... Come on smile now! 😉

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

LOOL ab itna bhau bhi nahin khaana chaahiye, ladki!! 😆

You know how they say:

Ab jaane bhi de jo bhi hua, usse jaane hi de ... Come on smile now! 😉

Go.away. -.-

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Shay

@shay1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

LOOL ab itna bhau bhi nahin khaana chaahiye, ladki!! 😆

You know how they say:

Ab jaane bhi de jo bhi hua, usse jaane hi de ... Come on smile now! 😉

You know it's because we adore you 😳

Do i see a smile??
Yes?

Uff! Mar gaye hum... Killer smile 😉

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: shay1990

You know it's because we adore you 😳

Do i see a smile??
Yes?

Uff! Mar gaye hum... Killer smile😉

AB agar nahin hasin na, toh I swear ... SOMEBODY GONNA GET HURT-A REEEAAALL BAD 😉 🤣

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Anon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

Hey, Shay! (That rhymes! 😆 )
My comment's not gonna be as long as SOME people's *cough*the-kela-over-there*cough*, but it be something!! :')
This was a maha-update, man, in terms of both length and progress!! :O
NK and Lavanya are just too cute!! 😆
I love how La's just indifferent at first, then Khushi kinda changes her mind and BAM! La pays attention to her again!
I was sorta getting happy, TBH, that she had started thinking of forgiving him. Don't get me wrong, I definitely think that Arnav did very wrong by her, and by all means she should be pissed! Lekin, phir bhi ... Yeh dil hai ke maanta hi nahin!! 😆
HAHA!! Awww NK's so adorable!! :')
Any mention of 'Nanav' being sexy ... BEAST MODE! 🤣

AKASH IS A BAMF. NUFF SAID. 😆

And Anjali's definitely earning a couple of brownie points by helping the couple unite!

And I'm also glad Nani finally realised that it is actually a good plan ... That little moment you showed with Arnav smiling at the picture? Yeah. GAVE ME FEEELSSS!!

I could just imagine all of this playing out in front of me!! :')

YOU WRITE SO BLOODY FANTASTICALLY!!

And that pendant scene!! My GAWSH.

I feel so bad for Arnie boy nooowww!! :'(

Trying hard, but failing. Not surprised though - Khushi is equally as stubborn as he is and gives just as good as she gets!! :p

Ohhh boy. A tattoo-wala. In an alleyway.

Can't be good x___x

You said his real redemption starts from the next chapter ... Does this hint towards a 'gallant Prince Charming here to save the day' event? 😉

Brilliantly written, Shay, I loved it!! :')

And thanks for the PM!! :D