I'm so tempted to just read it now but then I won't be able to wake up tomorrow morning :( humph. So I'll read tomorrow as soon as I get to uni 😉 x
Okay I'll start from the bottom too! Because OMFG Shay! What just happened? Khushi's in danger! Nahiii! I don't like this tattooed man! Get him away! Get him away! Arnav better come to the rescue!
Okay now that I've calmed down with that one I will start commenting on the rest of the chapter 😆.
Aaah Shay what can I say this chapter was f**king brilliant! Every single aspect of it! I love how you are able to weave such a fantastic story utilising all of the characters!
This chapter had me going through such a roller-coaster of emotions! It was fantastic! From humour, to sorrow, to pain to effing fear!
So starting off with Khushi my love just grows and grows for her! Her character is so realistic and that is one of the main things that I love about this story. I love her humour and her sarcastic comments and that factor of how unashamedly she admits to the fact that one of the main reasons she can't keep herself away from Arnav is because he's so f**king handsome! Which is so true and I love how you've put that in there because let's face it if he was standing in front of me I'd probably faint a couple of times before reality strikes me 😆.
I love how you write about her torn mind, her need to just forgive him and get it over with but her sheer determination to not because she knows that he doesn't deserve it (not before the stupid fool has realised the extent of what he's actually done!). I feel so bad for her, honestly, how in the end she just really wants to forgive him and even attempts to understand his plight, tries to reason all that he has done even when he doesn't deserve that.
Some of her comments are actually hilarious! My flatmate kept on giving me this look for laughing randomly at the computer screen lol. But these comments especially,
"like he was some sort of don"
"pretentious bas***d"
and omg! Lol "he-who-must-not-be-named" 😆 these had me giggling!
And then of course NK falling into a heap of wires after La admits that Arnav is sexy lmao! Bechara NK! 😆
Omg! Have I mentioned that I love Anjali after this chapter? I've taken a sort of turn where you know at first I liked her and then I didn't and then I wasn't sure and now I like her again 😆. Aakash and Anjali's scheming is fantastic! And the way you have written it out! Love it!
And of course I love Aakash now more than anyone else in this fic! Lol I just love him! You just continue to torture Arnav in your little ways and I will love you forever Aakash! 😆 And it's really nice to read about Aakash's character being portrayed in this way, it's different. You either get the non-existent, why is he even there wala Aakash or you get the super evil one, I tend to not have him at all or he's just evil 😆. So all the more reasons to love Aakash in this fic!
Now onto Arnav, poor thing. I do now feel pretty bad for him but I still want him to suffer. He just does not have a freaking clue does he? Dude! Get into your head what has happened and maybe just maybe you'll arrive upon how to actually fix this pile of shit that you have gotten yourself into!
Now this pendant scene had me practically aw-ing at the screen. It held within it so many emotions, so much of what they felt for each other that no matter what, how desperately they refused to let go, the immense depth to their relationship that still exists. Their emotions were so completely tangible at this point, even Arnav's which he doesn't show. Despite everything, despite his decision to never think of her again, he continued to wear their pendant and despite her decision to not forgive him she still wears it too. That in itself speaks volumes. And I felt so utterly and completely sorry for Khushi here, how it must feel to have that precious memory dragged back out whilst she's fighting her battle of trying to not give into him, how completely at a lost she must have felt.
I feel so bad for her and Arnav better get on his knees and beg for forgiveness instead of offer her jalebis!
Shay Shay Shay! I will stop here because well as you know I could go on for days 😆. And I'm still so behind on my lectures! :(
Thank you so much for this amazing long update! Of course I'll end this comment off too with my immense respect for your fabulous writing! How it never fails to just grab my attention and hold it there till the very last word and how much I look forward to the next one! I still can't get over how amazingly you just make everything flow together, from one scene to the next, it just transitions so perfectly that I end up lost for words!
Now this tattooed man! He better keep his paws off! And this time round I'm going to request you to actually update quickly 😆 because I just can't wait! And Arnav's redemption next chapter? Yasss! Cannot wait!
Aaah I love you! But you know that of course 😆.
🤗 ❤️ and more ❤️ for this quick and extra long update!
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