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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

🤣 the arnav-nk encounter was simply hilarious... arnav being allergic to nk was the icing on the cake! wonder how soon nk is going to be murdered by the 'garma' arnav 😃!!! the wit and humor is so understated... arnav and the marathon while muttering under his breath was a lovely image, as was this line: Arnav singh raizada jumping over NK's news..not very probable...Arnav Singh Raizada jumping ON NK , quite probable... ...to see or not to see that's the question...

leave it to arnav to mess up big time by jumping to conclusions... he'll never learn... needs to be kicked in the shins, preferably by khushi, for bringing tears to her eyes... it will be fun to see him backpedal 😛... can't wait to see how he gets out of this mess 😆!
kudos to you on your witty writing style



thank you so much!! i am so glad u liked it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

BIG BIG THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS! HELP ME TO KEEP GOING, THEY DO...


PART - 10



When you are mad at a certain 'X' along with a certain 'Y' and if it so happens that X happens to be you yourself and Y your deadly enemy, you throw being mad at X to the winds and channel your entire wrath to the poor Y..


Let's apply this general principle to Mr Arnav Singh Raizada and NK...our dearest X and Y respectively..


So now, Arnav had decided to try killing NK in a more legal way, with his looks..


Replies were not being communicated but being barked at poor NK..who for the love of his life was maintaining a safe distance from Arnav after the mehendi fiasco..


To make Arnav mad, Khushi had set her phone to voicemail which in particular for his calls had been set to a snapping "KYA HAI??"..


After hearing this 'KYA HAI??" ten times and uttering equal number of 'unbelievables' , Arnav heaved a sigh as finally Khushi picked up...


"boliye?"


"khushi.."


"haan hum khushi bol rahe hain"


Arnav rolled his eyes..


"i know"


"toh boliye"


"woh mehend-"


"mita di humne mehendi, ab khush?"


"WHAT??WHAT THE!"


"hame samajh nahi aata aapki mushkil kya hai? Baat mano toh 'what the' , na mano toh 'what the' , kuch bolo toh 'what the', kuch na bolo toh 'what the' , kam bolo toh 'what the' , kam na bolo toh 'what the', kuch-'


"STOP!"


"kabhi kabhi unbelievable aur shut up bhi", she hastily added


"I said shut up khushi!"


"Dekha!!"


"just. shut. Up"


silence..


"tum mehendi mita kaise sakti ho?? mehendi mitayi nahi jati dammit.."


"hame pata hai! Itni akal hai humme"


"congratulations"


she fumed.. "humne design par aur mehendi laga ke design khatam kar di"


he slowly digested what he had just heard..she had destroyed her mehendi?? Damn his nonsense!!Damn NK!


"hum..hume bahaut kaam hai, hum rakh rahe hain"


call disconnected..


Arnav stood staring at his mobile with such guilt as if he had just done something good enough to end the human race..


but of course ASR being ASR all he uttered was


"DAMN NK!"

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Khushi smiled as she kept the phone down..she knew what must be happening at the other end now..serves him right! She thought gleefully as she eyed her still very much intact beautiful mehendi


It had so happened that NK had deleted Khushi's mehendi altogether from his mobile accidently in his excitement and now all he had were the hand prints of a dozen different women trying to cover all letters of the english alphabet on their hands except the 'A'..


so he called khushi and narrated his agony which helped Khushi to have a decent idea of Arnav's cause of uproar...which she had decided to use to her advantage..


NK of course, was denied another pic.. despite several 'Par khushi jis..'

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"Damn google!" Arnav singh raizada spat shutting his laptop as his umpteenth effort to search for a remedy to erase mehendi turned futile..


instead all he got to see was mushy stuff with a hundred women with their palms towards him..he made sure to note not to even accidently trip over 'www.banu_main_dulhan. com' again in life..unbelievable..

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After about an hour Arnav had reached a stage where he could as well get Khushi's hand operated to get the earlier mehendi back on it again..


"chotte!" his not so sane plans were interrupted as Anjali gave him a call..


"ya di?"


"chotte please please please"


Anjali fluttered her eyelids at him...this could no way be good news..


"di-"


"please please? Please? "


he sighed...these two women were going to be the end of him..


"what di?"


"aap hamari ye designs select karne me madad karenge?" she said pointing at the jewellery sets on the table.." bas thodi der?"


"seriously di! I don't think-"


"khushi ji ke liye select karna hai chotte!"


"please?"


"di just 15 minutes"


Anjali clapped her hands in delight, and gave him a hug..emotional blackmail zindabaad! Tears for khushi, blackmail for Anjali, they had their weapons ready for him..


With khushi being the intended customer, the agony of going through jewellery sets easened a bit for him..


Anjali suddenly picked up her cell and dialled khushi's home number


"hello buaji?hum Anjali bol rahe hain.."


for the first 5 minutes they continued to rant about excitements, rituals, shaguns, apshaguns, while Arnav gave 'unbelievables' frequently..


"are haan humne toh pucha hi nahi! Khushi ji ki mehendi sukh gayi kya?"


Arnav suddenly got very interested in the conversation...


"acha! Yeh toh bahaut achchi baat hai! Kaash hum dekh pate..par ab itni bhi der toh nahi.."


Arnav wanted to stick his ears to Anjali's mobile..what?? why were they so happy? What the..


Anjali kept the phone back..


"NANI!!"


"haan bitiya"


"nani khushi ji ki mehendi bahaut sundar utri hai, abhi abhi buaji bata rahin thi.."


"aur bahaut gehri bhi" she said teasingly nudging her elbows on Arnav's arms..


An Arnav who was presently confused beyond wits...it slowly dawned upon him...so khushi had been pulling his legs...so all that time spent on ' www.banu_main_dulhan .com' had been... "khushi kumari gupta singh raizada.." he muttered under his breath..


He went to his room and straight away picked his blackberry..


'KYA HAI?'


so she had set it to voicemail again..


"how long khushi?" he muttered as he redialed..


very long Mr Raizada...khushi picked up 20 minutes later..


"boliye"


"toh mehendi kharab kar li tumne?"


"humne kaha na aapse..."


"stop lying dammit...how dare you khushi! Do you have any idea.."


"aapne kaise soch liya hum apni hatheli par 'N' likhvaenge"


"tumhare paagalpan ka kya bharosa! Vaise bhi maine ye nahi socha tha"


Khushi made a full on 'o' with her mouth


"haaww...JHOOT!"


"maine kaha tha tumse maine aisa socha?"


"nahi par-"


"that's it"


"par aapne-"


"khushi enough"


"vaise ek baar phir soch lijiye Mr Raizada , sirf do aur din hain aapke paas..."


"what?"


"humse shaadi ke baare me..kya pata, hum sirf aapke paison ke liye shaadi kar rahen hon"


she knew he never thought that way anymore and it was meant purely for teasing..


but for Arnav , it was the tightest slap one could give him..the past immediately flooded his memories..his lack of trust..his accusations..


"you won't" he spoke...slowly..definitely..


khushi chirped on- "kya pata? Aap kaise ke sakte hain? Balki hame toh lagta hai hum shaayad isi liye shaadi kar rahen hain phirse.." she rolled her tounge in her mouth playfully...


"khushi stop it"


she sensed something serious at the other end and so she did..


"i'm keeping khushi. Who...meeting hai"


"hm.."


call disconnected..

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So how was it?? waiting to hear from you...

next update is...well, not decided which SS yet..😊😛

my other works-

OS: PERFECT!

SS:Arnav Khushi meet Sanaya Barun

FF: So you better be normal now
















Edited by saucechips - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉

Edited::
'''So now, Arnav had decided to try killing NK in a
more legal way, with his looks..'''
Awww dont kill him...give him a kissy from my behalf(on cheeks yaar🤣)cause he is the sole reason of getting the best out of you. 😉
~~~
'''To make Arnav mad, Khushi had set her phone to
voicemail which in particular for his calls had been
set to a snapping "KYA HAI??"..'''
🤣🤣

~~~
'"hame samajh nahi aata aapki mushkil kya hai?
Baat mano toh 'what the' , na mano toh 'what
the' , kuch bolo toh 'what the', kuch na bolo toh
'what the' , kam bolo toh 'what the' , kam na bolo
toh 'what the', kuch-'''''
Lo bhaiyya..khushi ne to 'what thes' ki barish kar di.wo actually kya hai na khushi 'ji'...ye 'what the' humara national anthem hai.😉 😆
Aaj mausam hai suhana,
N A gane ka hai bahana,
La la la la la la,
What the ,what the,what the.🤣

Kya raat nikli suhaani,
Ho gayi aaj ke epi ki dhulai, (this is really frustrating,i tell you.)
What the what the what the,
La la la la la la.
(i loved todays epi.)😊
~~

'''Arnav stood staring at his mobile with such guilt
as if he had just done something good enough to
end the human race..'''
my poor baby...everybody is after him... 😆

~~~
"Damn google!" Arnav singh raizada spat shutting
his laptop as his umpteenth effort to search for a
remedy to erase mehendi turned futile.. instead all he got to see was mushy stuff with a
hundred women with their palms towards him..he
made sure to note not to even accidently trip over
'www.banu_main_dulhan. com' again in
life..unbelievable..''''
🤣www.banu main dulhan . Com🤣really unbelievable... 😆

~~
"chotte!" his not so sane plans were interrupted as
Anjali gave him a call..'''
what the...Arey ye to role reversal ho gaya...khushi ki aatma arnav ke sharir mey...🤣only khushi have right to be insanely sane.🤣
~~
So the guilt is still there...ika bare mey kuch to kareka padi...hmmm. 😊

~~
So SC...here you go. 🤗 loved this. 😊
Edited by arnav_addict - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.. khushi teasing arnav.. poor arnav searching for things he would have never thought of doing on his laptop ever in his life 😛 but the ending was a bit sad.. arnav was hurt again.. its now time for khsuhi to chear him up.. continue soon plz!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it
love it
love it
just love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww.. Arnav is sad..it's time for Kushi to cheer him up her way
Edited by Josupra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Khushi pulling Arnav's leg, nice ...good update...
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww shud i feel bad for him or is he going to get "manafied" uber cutely by Khushi... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you for the pm... aww, poor nk -- he must be skulking around fearing for his life! trust khushi to come up with that voicemail for arnav 😆! "hame samajh nahi aata aapki mushkil kya hai? Baat mano toh 'what the' , na mano toh 'what the' , kuch bolo toh 'what the', kuch na bolo toh 'what the' , kam bolo toh 'what the' , kam na bolo toh 'what the', kuch-'... "kabhi kabhi unbelievable aur shut up bhi", she hastily added...👏 that whole diatribe was a masterpiece of humor!
what an understatement: but of course ASR being ASR all he uttered was, "DAMN NK!"
and khushi is wickedly naughty in getting one over asr... good for her!
🤣 anjali fluttering her eyes at arnav would have been worth seeing... more than that would have loved a glimpse of arnav's face / expression on seeing anjali's antics!
the change from humor to intensity has been well done... hope khushi will be able to allay arnav's fears and make him trust in her love for him
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey i just read your SS right from the start. Its great, hilarious and entertaining😊😊 Thank you for ur PMs too!!!

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