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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

wow amaizng plz this was amazing update soon it was too gud

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

nice update...
pls update nxt part soon.

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

And thnx for d pm...

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Nish - luvd th update - th flashback showed us Sharon as we luv her & Swayam is a cutiepie anyway - dada ho ya jawaan ... luvd ur reference to the dressing style of Swayam- pls I do want pms in future of cors 😊

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@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

thnx for the pm
btw loved the update
very cute
update soon and do pm me pls
wonderful work.

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-bitz-

@-bitz-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

aaww Nish that was cute...wat gud way of asking "Mujse Dosti Karogi" 😳 nice one..update soon and thnx for d PM :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

This was such a cute update !!! I loved the way Swayam asked Sharon Mujhse Dosti Karoge and Sharon just left him confused without giving a proper answer...Update soon, I wanna noe wat happens next !!!

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Monica..

@Monica..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

dis was really cute...

update soon

n plz do pm me 😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Wow nish, it is awesome with a capital A. Hon you are superb. What a way to start a story. Swayam and Sharon as grandparents, that means they are together for a long long time. Thanks so much for such a wonderful FF

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

I am here, finally.

Honestly, no - I won't appreciate you for how you write. But I what I will tell you is that you are a very nice storyteller. Being a storyteller is sometimes better than writing polished prose, because however good and refined they maybe, they may not have a story at all. You have your story, in time, you might wanna experiment with your writing a bit and refine it.

The concept is cool, like a couple narrating their love story to their granddaughter, really, like nice. Now, people really like what you write, I'll tell you why - you make it very easy for everyone literally to visualize it. So, even though you write this and we read it, it is more a visual delight than a delight to a reader, simply because you are a wonderful storyteller in the making. I am sure you will get the clarity and polishing for your work in time. Keep writing.

I may not comment every time, by the way but YEAH, I am following this one from you. 😳

Love,

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