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manasisharma

@manasisharma

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

loved it... continue soon... 😊

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

that was a brilliant update her last line was heartbreaking hope he begs for her forgiveness because a sorry wont cut it

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

"I could forgive you for almost everything, except for one..."

"You...You stole my heart ...and...and ...then ...stamped on it !"

...👏...😭...👏 These lines were so great! I wanted to shout bravo and cry at the same time.

Great Job!

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Loved the update. Khushi's last words were so sad😔

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

WONDERFULL...

THE LAST LINE WAS AWESOME...

UPDATE SOON

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gauri khan

@arshisangel

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Totally agreed with Khusi when she said that he didn't come to her trusting her words instead trusting d detective...Agreed that he did all dis for his di but he shouldn't be forgiven that easily...thx for d pm dear:)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

i could for give you anything but one you stole my heart and then stamped on it he trusted everyone words but her only after the detective and buaji told him did he believed he poor khushi loved the update thanks for the pm