Arhi~I Want You!~ FF *Thread 5* Part 46 p132 16/5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

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Naadia I swear I was not stalking this thread, I just happened to be first😆!! I really, really loved this update. ASR the poet, I you tell when a man want a woman he will take on any avatar. I know he is truly sorry for what he did to her but I think she is still very hurt and a bit bitter. She definitely loves him, no doubt and will love to just give in but she won't do so easily. Now Aryan seems to be on ASR side so Khushi has her work cut out for her. The gift was quite original, I really did not expect it to be a marriage proposal. I hope she says yes for the marriage so Aryan can have his real dad in his life. For a moment when they were in that secluded place I really thought a kiss was coming😳. Khushi almost gave in to him, I say give it a few more updates and she will melt once he starts ignoring her. FANTASTIC UPDATE😃

Edited by april2003 - 13 years ago

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arhilover55

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

nice update..arnav will have to try a lot harder...please update soon

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

omg loved the song ...beautiful update...continue soon...

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

awsem update arnav trying khushi no meltingupdate

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frenzyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#745

awwsum update!! that was one of the best I have read😆 loved the way maan and geet were there to support her wen khushi returned to khurana's place.. 🤗she openly showed her hatred towards asr in front of them but didnt wanna them to involve jus so nt to hurt them.. the characteristic inner nature of khushi who always values other's happiness first👍🏼 the way she spoke wid confidence over the phone denying asr of any help from his side was simply wonderfull!!😛 love the growing bond between aryan and asr.. amazing line said by khushi yet soo meaningful " I hate him but my son loves him" 👏 though she really loves him deep inside she jus cant accept him as yet.. arnav s clueless as to how to woo her back since he is messin up wid all his plans.. he gets the much needed encouragement & support from maan & geet.. the two really play cupid well..😉 one of my fav song...😆 jus love it! aryan s becoming soo attached to arnav.. he enquires abt him, feels bad that his mom hurt his fren --aww how cute wen he gives the rose.. the scenes were soo beautifully written... 🥳surprised fr a second that arnav gave such a gift.. never expected dat he wud do such a thing!! 😲ur creativity s awwwsum & its on a rocking!! love the way u weave the pieces together so that its subtle,simple,realistic and yet perfect!!👏 wen she said a simple song cant change the fact and cant have her to forgive him soo easily.. whoa her self confidence & her self respect was portrayed sooo beautifully... 👍🏼 waiting fr wat she wil do wid d box.. now that aryan has take asr's side.. 😍the precap - she slaps him?? oops!! wat have u done now asr???😲

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

Great update have to give Arnav baby credit he is trying his best but he's still got a lot of work to do 😔 😔 after all the hurt & pain he bestowed on her was unforgivable!!!!!

Your pre-cap doesn't sound promising for Arnav poor guy do feel sorry for him but totally understand Khushi's dilema!!!!!!!

Plz update soon & PM when done 😊 😊 😊 X x

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Saima

@Diaphanous

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Amazing update!!! I loved the poem he said to her, so cute!! I loved how he proposed with a mangalsutra instead of a ring. I loved it!!!! Can't wait for ur next update!!!

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

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Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Oh Nadiya...it was a sweet update...iss birthday se muje ASR ka bday yaad ayi...Khushi ka dil thoda tha us din aur aaj jodne ki koshish mein hain...aur precap! Kaunsi nai museebath hain? Luvd it...

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

I don't know what to say... its mind - blowing. I never knew I would fall in love with this fiction. Its very different yet meaningful. Love it.

Continue soon.