FF: The games we play Thread 2 (updated: page 147)

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1021

Omg... He was in the house... I am so scared. I hope all of them would be safe. Amazing update!!! I can't wait to read the next part.

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1022

Please update soon. What the creep done to all of them.

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Why does evill have so much power.😡

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1023

interesting ff

will going tio read it

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1024

Up date soon today is the 6th of July, 2012

Last update was on 20th June. We want to know what the creep did with Khushi and the rest of the family.

Fabulous FF and terrific writing - ⭐️

Please update soon.

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1025

I read ALL 83 chapters this weekend, believe it or not. Unwell and stuck in the house and nothing on TV. I figured, I'm following Shades of Grey I'll read a little of your other stuff. AND THEN BANG!!! I'm hooked and couldn't stop reading from chapter 1 on. Amazing is all I will say in your development of their relationship. Love Arnav's crazy way of thinking and approaching things. My favorite chapters were one of the early ones where Khushi turned the game on him and went to his office and got him all hot and bothered and chapter 51 after the mistress issue. And I absolutely loved when Arnav fought in his own mind about letting her leave after 6 months. Just loved it. Shyam has me scared to death, but I trust you. Can't wait to read more.

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1026

Yes. I know. I haven't commented in a long time- and I'm a horrible Horrible Stalker- but you know how it's been.😕 So, No- you don't get to blame me! 😉 Now, Let's talk about this incredibly beautiful and thrilling story you have going over here should we?😃

I have read, Liked and LOVED all the Updates till date- but since I don't want to make my comment of a whole two to three pages, I will only say- "You Are Amazing, B- and I'm proud of You!" for all the updates and only give a detailed review on the latest one😃

So, The latest Update. You know Why I haven't commented earlier on this one? Because I was hoping that you would have mercy on us and put us out of our nail-biting, on-the-edge-of-the-seat, hair-pulling, waiting-in-frustration, fearful and thrilled misery and write the next chapter telling us what happened next. But Clearly, oh Queen (😉) of Writing thrilling Updates and then Leaving your readers on the verge of madness-turned-to-stalkerish-urges with your Evil intentions of not Updating fast enough😛 You are not going to do that- so Here I am, on my knees, begging you to PLEASE Update the next part. P-L-E-A-S-E.

This Update had it all. The Love between Arnav and Khushi- so deep, that each is ready to sacrifice everything of theirs, life included, for the safety and life of the other. The longing for each other, which you have portrayed beautifully through the way she throws herself into his arms- and calls herself mad- indeed, Madly in Love with Arnav (You give me someone as sweet and I'll show Khushi Up in Madness😛) But anyways, that was beautiful.

And while we're talking about Madness- Shyam the Nutcracker is back! He's going in circles around the bend now eh? I'm telling you B- your first novel (and I get the first signed copy and a dedication in the preface) you have got to have a villain with as spectacular characterization as the Shyam you have created in here. Hey, it requires talent to create a character with such seamlessly intelligent and mad mind- and You, my friend, have done more than complete justice to it.

and the cherry on the cake? the Poem written in red lipstick on the blue tiled floor. I had goosebumps when I read it. Just. Freaking. Thrilling.

So, My dear B, will you update now? Please? Pretty Pretty Please? 😃 Oh, and Did I say I love you and that you're just Amazing? Kudos Babe!