ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th2: Ch 17-20, Epilogue - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
Happiness. Unadulterated and complete. That's what I received from reading this Fan fiction. I told you once that I am 100% sure that you are a brilliant writer because your comments were always very insightful.
And never have I been more pleased to say that I was so damn right.

Once upon a time- There were two good friends who also liked each other. In between all the affection and attraction there was also a tiny sapling of love which would have grown up beautifully.

Happily ever after- Maybe sometimes you do get those too in real life.

But there are a lot of grey patches between the 'once upon a time' and 'happily ever after'. Fate is an attention wh**e, I think. It routinely throws tantrums and puts a spanner in your work. Just like it did to Arnav and Khushi. Ten years is a long, long time. I can't even imagine it in my head clearly. Seething in all those misunderstandings. How would have Arnav felt? And Khushi?

It reminds me of this-

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HsTKEQt9Kmg[/YOUTUBE]

But the satisfaction that came when those misunderstandings that all the long years had heaped over their shoulders had crumbled was so...so sweet. It brought a wonderful possibility for them to be together as life partners even as the fate that couldn't keep them apart fumed in impotent rage.

I really like the way you weave warm beating hearts in your story so nonchalantly. I admire and envy that ease a lot. Like the way Arnav and Khushi both kept the photograph of their teenage years with themselves after all those years. The way Arnav proposed to Khushi. He wasn't comfortable doing it, he is a man of action not words, and yet he did it all because he knew it would make Khushi happy. The way Arnav looked at Khushi in the mirror when she had draped on the red saree.

The effulgence of Khushi's character and the complex depths of Arnav's love were so artfully woven in this delightful fic that I am in awe.

I don't believe in happily ever afters. There can be no one stretch of life. There will be some lows and some highs. But once in a while, just once in a while, life gives us those moments which we'll cherish forever. In those moments there lies a world of potential. In those moments everything is possible. In those moments you feel that you have received your happily ever after.

I don't know whether Arnav and Khushi will live in that moment forever but their love is strong and they know how to keep each other happy.

If that isn't a happily ever after, I don't know what is.









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Posted: 11 years ago
Have you ever failed to surprise with your writing? Man, you've a talent... and I wish I could write as beautiful as you. I don't know how but I missed this FF but I am glad that I did find... Tried to read it in one day but being a wife and mother I couldn't...
Please continue write...
Loved it.❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its beautiful story well written
Awesome update
I love it. Especially the hugging scene and past that was wonderful.
Their school life their talks thats so cute
I like it lot
Shyam and Anjali became friends...
I wish you just made someone enter like Aman and Anjali too settle...
Aditi had another plan poor Akash groan out of frustation so delete last part...
Aditi sos cute...Akash a he loves Aditi lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just finised readding this story
Its really a nice and sweet story
Very beautifully written
Loved it too much
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Posted: 11 years ago
I remember I started my 'twirling' moments on IF with this story...and its not stopped yet. Each reading, even each recalling ends in what but a twirl! *Twirls* <3
Edited by AngelTeen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved reading this story.😊
Loved how arnav calls,khushi his happiness 😊 And their chemistry was mind blowing .
I liked the way u had made Shyam khushis jiju .
Loved the concept of this story and how you have blended the angst and humor together, u are really a amazing writer.
Arnav's proposal was just like the one from a fairy tale .
I have become a fan of aditi she is so bubbly,excited,filmy and more observant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story! I'm a sucker of these genre of stories where there is a childhood friendship turning to adolescent infatuation which finally turns to matured and unadulterated love. Some people are quite lucky to experience those! Thank You for posting such a beautiful story. 😳

The Prologue of the story was great which showed the endearing friendship between Arnav and Khushi.

The misunderstanding left a bitter taste. And just for a fleeting moment, I thought all was over.

The 'jijaji' angle was deftly shown here.

The bliss of reading a positive Shyam is great!

Arnav calling Khushi as 'Happiness' is so sweet!

The supporting characters were perfect to the T. I liked how Anjali cleared the confusion.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it.

Again.

Damn it.

Nah, no damn it. This is my go to story whenever I am feeling tired, sad, hopeless, disgruntled, pained or just plain in need for some romance, so thanks a ton for writing this. <3
Posted: 11 years ago
This was an amazing read! Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh! My my... Found the story today.. Read it in a go in max 5hrs while eating Lunch too.. No words bas!
When I started reading it, it was like I am stuck to it :p
Loved it to the core!!

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