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Posted: 13 years ago
awesummm update... pm me n do wri8 soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Poppy late comments ke liye...aaj finally maine padh hi liya...interesting mode pe khadi hai tumhari story...luking forward to the face-off threat and how u handle it...but the horror angle mujhe abhi aur confuse kar raha hai😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hehe pata hai bohot din hogaye hai actually kya karu mai meow kelie likhna chahti thi Kriyaansh dance isilie postpone karna pada sry sab ko i know kitne log gussa hai mujhse i m really sorry ab chalo padho... oops ruko Happy Birthday Meow(belated wala)!!!! ok ab padhna shuru karo




Ro : *shouting* then let them see a face b/w the two groups unke team membs sab hai na yahi pe.

All the Louins gather around………

Sharon on the other hand was listening to all this from a corner she rushed to RDX sir's room

Sh : Sir I think there will be a big fight near rehearsal hall both the dancing teams are trying to have a face-off among them.

RDX : What?? I mean wait I ll make an announcement now.

Near Rehearsal hall

Music started (guys imagine the music of the song like a g6)

Nimi.Rimar,Nicky,Vish and bharat just arivved

Roshan and sid started with b-boying moves which was enough for the croud to start their cheering noises

To give an answer to them Bharat just steeped close..

*Announcement*

"All the students are requested to go to their respective classes as Principal sir has arrived with the invigilating team."

Both the teams were glaring at their opp. Team as they missed a golden opportunity to show what they are..

Whole crowd disappeared from there within seconds

Nat : Guys come on lets go and practice.

Natasha's team leaves from there..

Sharon has just arrived there leaving RDX sir's room

Sh : Guys chalo lets go now.

Rey : What was there problem mujhe kuch samajh nahi aya khud unlogo ne face-off kaha fir vo khud chale gaye what's happening here??

Bh : Rey tereko pata nahi hai na ye log thode khiske hue log hai innse dur rehna accha hai.

Vish : But kya hua tha itna suddenly face-off and all tum log to jaa rahe the na??

Sh : Guys ab hum kyu apna mood kharab kare lets go and Rey pata hai na ghar jaldi jaana hai so lets leave now. Bye guys.

Somehow Kriyaansh and Sharon leave from there and come back home Kriya was still upset after reaching home they narrated the whole incident to Swayam and Ornella Kriya went to her room Reyam, Sharon and Ornella left her as they thought that she needs some time alone.

Or : Thank god that RDX sir made that announcement at the correct time or else Kriya would have felt even more restless.

Rey : Ya I too felt the same.

Sw : ab jo hua acche kelie hua hai ab leave that topic Sharey pata hai Ornella aaj bol rahi thi ki vo kal raat ko chali jaegi.

Sharey : *looking at Ornella* What???

Or : *with a confused look* What?...

Sh : Ur leaving tomorrow night??

Or : Yup u guys will have a tight schedule tomorrow and from day after tomorrow ur calling ur group here to have ur practice and I have to go so we are going to start our practice from now itself so make ur self ready *clapping* come-on come-on.

Sw : Or you suck……

Or : well I know that now go and get ready.

The whole day they were in the rehearsal hall practicing Or was explaining them the postures and body stiffness required for every dance form, they were having fun dancing cracking jokes but Kriya was still the same she sat there watching everyone dance listening to the tips which Or was giving them at around 11 they decided to go back and have dinner but kriya wanted to stay there for some more time may be she wanted to try dancing again Rey through ishaara told Swaron and Ornella to leave and he will take care of Kriya they left them there alone Kriya was waiting for Rey to go so she still sat there but Rey did not leave she stood up to leave but Rey came in front of her blocking her way she looked at him with an expression like What???

Rey knelt down and forwarded his hand for her..

Rey : Kriya kyat um mere saath dance karogi??

Kriya : Rey mai dance nahi kar sakti *with tears*

Rey : ek baar mere saath try karo.

Kriya just nods in response

Guys I know ab jo song de rahi hu vo tum sab ka hum sab ka fav. hai sry steps agar acche nahi hai ya samajh nahi aya this is just for u meow enjoy it pehle hi bol rahi hu I m not that good at describing trying it first time.


start this song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGK-iuh5JE4

Rey gets up and plays this song and LLHH start it continues till 0:10

Again Rey forwards his hand as Kriya was looking at him she did not realize his hand Rey though his eyes signals her to forward her hand she lifts her hand slowly and places it in his hand till 0:22

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon

Holds her hand possessively kneels down and bends his head


Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon

Looks at her and gets up turning to the other side


Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Turns his head towards left seeing her from the corner of his eyes

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se

Kriya comes forward places her hand on his shoulder from back


Tum se hi sab batein ab se

Rey turns around to face her circles his left hand around her waist


Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Kriya places noth her hands on his chest while Rey pins her hair back

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon

Takes both her hands stretch back

Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon

Rey twirls her such that her back touches him and their hands crossed

Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

They sway along with the music

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se

They come back to their normal position slowly still holding hands

Tum se hi sab batein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Rey holds her by waist Kriya puts her left hand around his neck both hold their right hand and turn around looking into others eyes

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Guys imagine the lift in song Shaam bhi koi jo Kriyaansh ne kia tha same one

And the song continues with some lighter steps both always being in contact Rey making sure that she never slips or leaves his hand as it can make her think she cant dance they danced and danced even though the song completed they swayed with the sounds coming from around and the most sweetest music is there heartbeats which were like similar.

Their dance came to an end when Kriya while swaying rested her head on Rey's shoulder and drifted to sleep Rey realized that she slept so he did not want to disturb her so he lifted her in his arms while Kriya adjusted herself in sleep and took back to home where Swaron and Ornella were waiting for them when Ornella saw them in that position she was like awww… how cute they are…

Ornella opened Krisha's room door and Rey went in and placed her on bed so carefully as she was his beautiful angel he left her and came out with the others…

Or : ahem….. ahem…. What was that??

Rey : Or stop it she slept there I didn't want to disturb her sleep so brought her like that.

Sw : Hmm Or she is my sis ok.

Sh : Accha now lets sleep aaj bohot dance kia hai bohot tiring lag raha hai.

Swayam and Or leave from there and Sharey were left

Sh : ahem…. ahem….

Rey : *blushing* Shar stop it

Sh : Blushing huh chalo jake soo jao.

They too go to sleep Sharon enters her room and sees that Or was waiting for her

Sh : Or what happened u were waiting for me??

Or : hmm ya how was ur day at college

Everything which happened in the clg flashed in front of her the face-off thing Natasha's words

Or : Shar what happened??

Sh : Nthng lets sleep I am tired.

Sharon laid down on the bed facing the other side mean her back towards Or she recollects every single thing that happened

*flashback*

Na : *shouting*Hey Rey, hey Kriya

Kriyaansh looked around to find Natasha running towards them they were confused why was she coming when she reached.

Kriyaansh : Hi

Na : Hi just wanted to ask when are u guys going to start your practice vo kya hai ki Rehearsal hall share karna hoga na hume so……

Rey : No problem tum log kar sakte ho we are not starting that soon.

Roshan : And start bhi kyu karenge darte jo hai.

Na : Guys stop it Rey I am really sory they didn't mean that way.

Rey : Its ok.

Sid : Just ok aur kuch nahi…..

Na : Guys all inside the hall ri8 now mujhe yaha koi face-of nahi chahie yaha.


*flashback ends*

Face-off nahi chahie WTH ye sab Natasha ne hi start kia tha koi bhi face-off nahi bol raha tha I knew ye ladki kuch to kar rahi hai I need to know it.

Mrng

Everyone woke up got ready for their dance practice

Kr : Guys aaj mai bhi tumhe join karungi *looking at rey* kal thoda confidence aagaya tha mujhe

Rey gave a hearty smile for that.

And they started their practice it continued and continued at ni8 Ornella had to go back to London as she had some work there.

From the next day whole group started their practice having fun (guys imagine the same scenes jo D3 mai hua tha count down mere FF mai bhi 4 days left yaad hai na 3 days Or ke saath khatam ho gaya)

Finally after SAATH din they get ready with there performance……

Guys i promise now horror will be back 😉 nd that too with big update... meow hope u like it 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Unres


Thank u so much for d update and dedication Poppy...❤️

Love u Always..😃😃.

Coming to the update..

It was awesome as usual..

Loved all KR scenes.

Ur writing was so amazing.

A brief comment pakka tommorow.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome
i loved how rey [placed her on bed..
so caring
i am missing this rey
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
unres

nice part

lovd rey's possesivenes towards his angel...
Aww khuda jaane
i cn listen to this song whole day

thanx 4 d pm
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updte...
luved kriyaansh's dance very much...
thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

loved it...

thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
shravs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its awesome...

im hating natasha to core...

and u know maine kisko imagine kiya natasha ki place mei?????/

i know u got it...

hehe...

kriyaansh dance...

rey ke saath dance karte waqt bilkul restless ness feel nahi hua kya??????????😉

hehe...wah rey...ahem ahem...

hehe!!!!!!!!!

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