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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats dear for ur awesome work.
i guess u know me well so my heartiest wishes for ur new thread.
i have one spl wishes to u that i'll pm u.


COngratualtions
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

for the second thread🥳keep up the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS!!!!👏👏👏👏❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATZZZ on ur new thread l love ur work
Can't wait 4 ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo dear fr ur new thread...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey everyone 2nd thread pe 1st update wow its amazing i am too happy thnkq so much for ur lovely response nd haa joothe chappal sab allowed hai i deserve it maine aap sab ko bohot wait karvaya hai nd dont expect much horror so here u go start reading...


Sw : Accha vo chodo Tum ab puri tarah se teek ho na no pain na?
K : haa mai teek hu.
meanwhile rey comes out of the room he directly goes and sits on the sofa now time was 7 o'clock.
Sw : *whispering to sharon* aaj rey itne gusse mai kyu hai?
Sh : pata nahi generally rey gussa nahi hota hai me too wondering aaj ye aisa kyu behave kar raha hai. * rey heard it but he was not in a mood of thinking*
Sw : Chalo lets do 1 think Kriya kaise bhi use manaegi i m sure but unhe thoda sa free chod dete hai let them talk sab teek hojaega.
Sh : haa gud chalo.
Swaron leave them alone and went into their respective rooms
Kriya keeps the keys of rehearsal hall on the table and went and sat beside him he did not even bother to look at her Kriya placed her hand on Rey's hand
K : Rey i m sorry.
he took his hand back without seeing her
K : *looking at him* Rey i m really sorry mujhe pata hai mujhe aaram karna chahie tha but vo...
She was cut in b/w
R : kriya plz mai ab baat karne ke mood mai nahi hu so plz leave me alone.
He stud up and went up to the terrace
K : lagta hai bohot zyada hi gusse mai hai hmmm Kriya ghai u r going to have a tough time ab chal tujhe hi mana na padega
Kriya follows him upstairs, rey was busy looking at d crowded city.Kriya walks upto him, though he listens to her footsteps he remains unheard.
Kriya slips at d spot holding his shirt as tight as she cud as if someone kept a leg on her way.Rey holds her by d waist from tripping.
They stay in d same position trying to understand wat d other meant.Rey settles her back on d feet and took back his hands.Kriya straightens herself and she too satarted staring at the crowded city.
After some time she looks back at Rey but he was not there she looked around finally she spotted him on the tank she too went their she climbed the ladder now she was facing Rey's back he was sitting at the edge placing both his hands either side.
Kriya went near him and sat beside him he was least bothered she looked straight.
K : pata hai aaj mai bohot khush hu.
Rey was actually shocked how could she say that is ka matlab hai ki vo mujhe apna frnd bhi nahi manti use koi farak nahi padta agar mai usse gusse mai hu ya nahi
K : Mujhe farak padta hai Rey nd mujhe bohot accha lag raha hai ki mera frnd mere baare mai itna sochta hai *looking towards him with a smile*
Ab itna cute smile dia kriya ne to Rey ka gussa to thanda ho hi jaega na
R : tum na huh... koi tumse teek se gussa bhi nahi ho sakta.
K : vo to mujhe bhi pata hai.
R : mai to gusse me poochna hi bhool gaya tha tumhe abhi bhi dard ho raha hai kya?
K : nahi Rey ab to mai bikul teek hu.
R : waise ye sab kasie hua matlab kaise giri thi tum.
Sw : ahem ahem *clearing his throat*
Listening this they turn to see swayam smiling at them
Sw : agar ye rooth na aur mana na khatam ho gaya to khana khae bhook lagi hai *puppy face*
K : Haa chalo mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai *looking at rey*
they went down Kriya went to her room and rey to his room Sharon was in the kitchen and Swayam was setting the table he went into the kitchen brought th plates and kept on the table and knocked Kriya and Rey's door and went back to the table to his surprise the plates were not there on the table
Sw thinking to himself : abhi to plates lake yaha pe raakha tha... shayad sharon leke chali gayi hogi ok no problem phir se launga.
He went into the kitchen Sharon climbed on the slab (guys hope u understand vo sare cheeze jaha pe rakhte hai vo vala)to take out something she stretched her hand up hoping to reach it nd slab pe thoda oil tha she moved her feet to reach the top shelf but due to the oil she slipped.
(guys don't worry sw agaya tha). She was so scared that she wuld be falling down so she closed her eyes but she felt someone holding her she felt that she was in someones arms she opened her eyes and saw swayam.
He was lost in her she was looking too cute even in the scared expression she too was lost now but they were brought back by Kriyaansh who were shouting to serve food.
Swayam placed her down
Sh : Thnkq swayam agar aaj tum nahi hote to...
Sw : Sharon chalo khana khate hai mai plates kelie aya tha.
Sh : par tum to leke chale gaye the na?
Sw : haa par *he looked at the stand(jaha vo plates rakhte hai) he did not find them*
Sh : tum bhi na chalo.
Swayam when came out finds the plates on table he was surprised
Sw thinking to himself : aakhir hua kya tha 1 min pehle to yaha pe nahi the God mai pagal hojaunga.
They all sat had their dinner chit-chatted for some while and went to their respective rooms.
Time 10 PM
Rey and Swayam were resting Sw left side facing left and Rey right side facing study table both were thinking about something krisha were sleeping peacefully but Reyam could not.
Rey got up saw that Swayam was sleeping(actually he wasn't sleeping but he closed his eyes) he went out wanted to go to the terrace but he took the rehearsal hall keys and left to hall he didn't knw that someone was following him.
Scene Rehearsal hall :
He went in switched on the middle light of the hall (guys bohot sare lights hai but usne sirf beech vala light jo sirf hall ke middle mai hai vo on kia plz understand)
stood their for some time looking down then he looked up seeing himself in the mirror he was struggling with his thoughts
Rey : kyu rey kyu apne feelings ko control nahi kar pate ho?? *he was loud enough so the 1 who followed him heard it*
"She is ur friend..just a friend.Get it!!!Kyun ajeeb se bathe soch raha hun main.."

"Y am I feeling more wen I touched her."

"Y did u get angry wen she did something which I dint like her to do.Its her lyf..she can do anything but y r u getting angry reyaansh singhania.Y r u too protective towards her??

"Y did u feel d necessity to keep her just beside you n take care??"R u falling for her.."

"U cant behave lyk dis..behave weirdly!!!She is just a friend n swayam's sister..get dat!!"

But i cant cheat myself by saying this..

The truth is ya i am falling for her.. her beauty... her words...

A voice from behind : her cute face.
Rey : *kept an expression like he got caught*
He could not face him as he knew that he had heard everything it was swayam.
Rey : *slowly* oh god now how will i face him damn rey cant u check whether anyone was following u.
Sw : haa to rey kya bol raha tha
Rey : *hesitatingly* Swayam vo...vo
he went near him placed his hand on his shoulder
Sw : kriya so lucky.
Rey looked at him with full surprise
Sw : what??
R : Actually i have heard that brothers generally dont agree that easily.
Sw : Dont expect me to be like that. And they share a smile.
Sw : really Kriya is too lucky to have u.
R : Do u think she will love me.
Sw : Hmm expect any ans. from me coz its ur duty to make her feel for u.
R : ok lets go now its too late.
They went and slept happily Sw thinking that kriya has got a nice guy and Rey thinking about his feelings his first love.


haa haa pata hai chota tha mujhe meri baat complete to karne do bada hi post kar rahi thi par pata nahi kya ho raha hai baar baar message error aa raha hai so islie 2 parts kardia hai jaldi se padho aur comment karna shuru kar do nxt update on the way me hai but haa 10 likes to pakka chahie tabhi nxt wala post hoga...
Dont forget to leave ur comments love u all
Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*


Will unres tommorow poppy pls..

I lovedd d updt..

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update poppy.
loved it.
i dont know but i felt that someone following rey was the mistry par thank god it was swayam.
wat aa wonderful bro.
aur kria ka rey ko manana was so cute😳
update next part soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaju

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unres
wonderful update poppy.
loved it.
i dont know but i felt that someone following rey was the mistry par thank god it was swayam.
wat aa wonderful bro.
aur kria ka rey ko manana was so cute😳
update next part soon.


thnkq so much actually mujhe laga ki tum sab log sochoge i ll keep another mystery islie maine use khol dia kyu ki ek mystery next update mai ready hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tu bahot mean ho gayi hai na... Itni jaldi 10 likes... Parr aa jayenge teri FF hai hi itni aachi... N yeh plates ka kya chakkar hai... Finally swayam ko rey ki feelings ke baareme pata chal gaya n he has no problem... N rey thinking about his first love awesome dusra wala part jaldi jaldi chahiye...

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