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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey everyone this is actually a thnkq note to everyone who have liked and commented on my last update

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I got this idea because till now u all might have read that

Louian Newsletter Of the Month - 1st Edition if not here's the link go throw it

my work has been awarded as one of the popular FF in april month that too in mix writer category i have even got a gift for it i would love to share it with all of u because u guys have made it popular this could be possible only because of u i m soo soo happy i just cant express it in words . This actually means a lot to me coz this one is my first writing in my life truly before this i never wrote anything thnkq so much for ur support and ur lovely comments and likes thnkq everyone love u all here is the gift which i got





nd guys aise mai hur update ke pehle update ka status kelie ek comment res karke rakhungi nd from now on i ll reply to each and everyone tum sab ne mujhe itna happy kia to itna to banta hai na...

ab meri baari for giving u guys a gift so ye lo




Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Hey hi i got a request from 2-3 members to post the summary of all the updates till now so here it is i dont want any of u to miss even a single point so new readers kelie bhi hai ye nd it will be in 2 updates ya bohot bada aa raha hai i have reduced it but still bada aa raha hai so plz spare time nd do read it ok now i ll stop my bak-bak u start reading it...


Swayam, Kriya, Rey and Sharon are jst 'Gud Frndz' no love just they are gud friends till now Kriya-Swayam and Rey-Sharon are twins.

Smriti had to stay in Dehradun due to her job she called her friend Aashana to arrange a house. As she studied in St. Louis she wanted her children also to study there. Aashana said that they can stay in her house as she is leaving to Ooty.

Aashana starts thinking : Should i tell her about this house... No she wont believe me'' but finally she called Smriti this time she did not hear the ring but heard a voice...

The voice said i have warned you many times but still you don't get it... Do u want to loose your children for some others... Aashana soon heard her children scream through the phone hearing this she droped the phone tears started rolling, after sm time she wiped her tears and shouted loud as if asking someone I cant keep thier lifes at risk why don't u understand???? ITwhispered in her ear... I need them As she heard this voice she went into horror realising that someone other than her was present in the house. But still managed to say that she was not going to leave now her mobile rang. When she reached her mobile the name falshed Preeti it was her daughter. Her daughter informed her about her bros accident and asked her to come fast being helpless she took the luggage and gave the keys to neighbours and went away...

Next day Morning

Scene shifts to Swayam's room :

It was 6 in the morning he was swetting, he could not sleep anymore was he trying to sleep or is anything disturbing him. He suddenly opened his eyes he had an expression of fear and shock on his face, he started breathing hard he looked at his father's pic felt a bit reliefwoke up started thinking... daily you get the same dream what does that mean. Smriti came and talked to him for a while and left for office.

Scene shifting to Kriya's room :

Kriya did not sleep the whole night she was not ready to leave her mom alone here but finally Swayam convinced her and they had done all the packing

They headed to airport

Kriyaansh and Swaron sitting side by side

Kriyaansh :

Kriya rested her head on his shoulder he kept staring her this was the first time he saw her that close to him he kept on staring her but her hair was falling on her face hiding her beautiful face from him. He lifted his hand and was about to pin her hair back to its place but seeing swayam he pushed his hand back with a sudden jerk.

Swayam said Kriya could not sleep the whole night I was just checking her.

Rey realised wat he did nd felt a bit different and slept.

Swaron :

Swayam was listening songs then he suddenly felt something lighter than feather fell on his shoulder he looked at it. It was Sharon he saw her and could not blink his eye he never saw her that angelic. He was about to go to his dreamland but the air hostess brought his down to earth who was enquiring about there comforts.

as she left he again saw Sharon and slept.

They reached Mumbai at around 7PM.

As Kriya visited Aashana's house more among them so she went to hire a taxi for them. Not letting her go alone Rey accompanied her.

Kriya was searching for an empty taxi scanning all the taxis but she saw that everyone was shouting at her for something as everyone was on top of their voices she could not hear them properly the last thing she saw was a taxi heading towards her at its highest speed before she could realize what was happening Rey pulled her towards him.

Rey doesn't take her near swayam and Sharon as they would ask her why was she crying finally they hire a taxi. Before swayam could see her he asked kriya to sit in.

As Smriti informed them that the keys were with neighbours kriya went and took the keys handed it to Swayam and joined Rey to bring the luggage. Swayam took the keys from her and went open the door(swayam was accompanied by Sharon ) Sharon just moves to and fro and suddenly looks into the mirror which were beside the door she was seeing herself in it and as Kriyaansh were visible from it(I mean their reflection) she looked at Kriya's reflection which was staring at her she gave a smile but it gave back an evil smile to Sharon but at the same time someone tapped her shoulder so she turned back she saw Kriya in front of her she gasped and suddenly she saw the mirror she still saw Kriya's reflection in it with an evil smile but the actual Kriya was standing in front of her she again looked at the mirror now it was not there she left the matter and acted normal They start unpacking their luggage being very much tiered all of them fell asleep.

Next day morning

Time 6 o'clock

IT was happy seeing them and finally started speaking to itself "Finally u all are here and now the game begins"

Time 7:20

Swayam went to Krisha's room and was about to knock when he heard Kriya already saying him to come in he asks kriya whether she want coffee Swayam prepares breakfast for all of them and they rushed to the college as they are still left with some admission process.

They reached college by 8:50 and all of them went inside they were just scanning the whole college and the people present their. Kriya was ahead of them so she was walking seeing around but she bumped into Amar. They asked him the way to Office room reaching there they find everyone tensed they enqire about it and get to know that they were in search for 4 membs for completing a dance group accidentally they fit in Swaron and Kriyaansh as the 4 membs.

Note : Kriyaansh and Swaron never danced till now.

In this process Kriya rushed out of the room in anger and was walking sooo fast that she dashed into someone she lost her balance and fell back Rey was just behind her so he caught her from falling she quickly balanced herself and saw around who was it she dashed to but to her surprise there was no one. She asked Rey about it but Rey says her that he too was about to ask how did she loose her balance.

Their convo. was interupted by an old lady(one of the cleaning staff)

The old lady told Kriya about how her mom wuld want her to dance and that her mom wuld be the 1st who wuld be happy if she wuld even try to dance coz her mom is one of the best dancers of this clg. She finally agrees and convices all of them to take part.

She went to thank the old lady but she disappeared till then.

Amar introduced them to whole gang. Princi called everyone in the atrium to give some instructions and he called both the dancing teams of St.Louis to come on stage and finally announced that it was a half day and they can leave now.

While going back they have their lunch and after reaching home they dozed to sleep.

Time 7 pm :

Everyone sat on the sofa and started watching some random movie after some time swayam got up and went to the terrace soon kriya too followed him he was staring at the sky. She went and sat near him he looked at her and gave a fake smile but did not talk anything.

IT was watching them IT came near them so that IT can hear them properly...

Swayam was feeling guilty about something which will be reveled further Kriya consoles him saying it was not his fault during their convo they hear Sharon's scream inside the house. They go in and see rey tapping the door they too call out her name she finally opens the door and says that it was a cockroach but Swayam sensed that she was hiding somthng but he did not ask her.

Next day Morning 3 am :

Reyam's room :

Swayam could not sleep his eyes were closed but he was sweating and moving his head first left and then right he had an expression like this should not happen. He opened his eyes. For the first time he got a different dream he began breathing hard he looked at his father's pic but still he was feeling restless this never happened to him. IT was watching him. He got up from his bed and went straight into Krisha's room. IT followed him. he opened the door and saw Kriya sleeping and Sharon was sitting on the bed facing Kriya she was staring at her thinking deeply he noticed it went to the other side of the bed and caressed Kriya's hair and kissed her forehead and came back to Sharon.

Sw : Can we talk *forwarded his hand*

Sharon placed her hand in his and got of the bed they went to terrace *IT too followed them*

Sw : yesterday'.. I strongly believe that it was not cockroach which made u scream'.. Sh : I wanted to tell you but it was about someone may be a girl whom we know so I thought to keep it to myself because I know you care a lot for her but if I tell u'

Sw : Sharon due to my carelessness I lost my dad now I can't let anything happen to anyone close to me.

Sharon started narrating him''..

Scene shifting to yesterday after swayam and Kriya left the room when IT came down:

She didn't know what happened but something made her cry she never cried in front of Rey so she got up and was going to her room but she was not able to open the door she thought it was jammed so she went to the washroom beside Reyam's room. She had tears in her eyes but she didn't know the reason. She wanted to wash her face now she was not crying *waha pe samne mirro bhi hai* after wshing her face she looked into the mirror to see her reflection she saw'.. her reflection was still crying she was totally scared now she didn't know what was happening she started shivering and moving back with fear till she got the support of wall. Her reflection stopped crying. Now her image disappeared she saw a pool in the mirror and then a tree on which someone wrote DEATH and then a road which was empty and then a speeding truck which had no driver and then she saw a girl who was not in her senses she was walking as if she was drunk again she saw the truck and again the girl then she saw the truck speeding towards the girl seeing this she screamed closing her eyes after few seconds she heard someone tapping the door which startled her she looked at the door but she did not dare to look back into the mirror she thought not to discuss about this to anyone as they also will be tensed she made herself straight wiped her tears and gathered some strength and then opened the door.

Sh : And u know what happened after that.

Sh : *slowly as if whispering* Swayam nothing will happen to anyone I think it was just my illusion believe me nothing will happen as such.

Sw : * in a scary tone* Sharon u'. u fear for mirrors and'. and'.I'.i fear for dreams and'' and Kriya'' Kriya'. fears for accidents since her childhood so the girl'. the girl is' is'. Kri_ . No I can't let anything happen to her. I got the same dream today.

Sharon was dumbstruck she could not utter even a single word but she soon gained control over her and looked at Swayam who was just nodding his head from left to right as if saying this should not happen. Swayam told her that his dreams come to reality but sharon some how managed and brought him down.

Swayam goes to the washroom opens the doorgoes near the mirror stands in front of it he sees his own reflection but he spoke as if warning someone : How dare u scare Sharon if it repeated again I m gona break u and a small smile crept on his face now he became somewhat serious and said for your kind info this time nothing will happen to Kriya mind it. He said this and started moving but his reflection just smiled at him he did not notice it.

Scene shifts to College they enter the college go to their class have their lectures and in break time a girl came to kriya and said that some sir is calling her Kriya went with her and she lead her to some room where she could find no one the girl with whom she came pushed her into a room before she could realise what was happening someone locked her from behind. She went near the door and called out for help but for her surprise someone called out her name in that room. She started scanning the room to find out who it was but she could not see anyone around the voice again came.

The boy asks Kriya to be his friend he talks to her in dark he never showed his face to her she rejects it and asks him to open the door as soon as the door opened she joins Rey and Swarom.

They go back to their class and in lunch break everyone went to canteen ordered something ate and were about to leave when a girl came near them and takes sharon to some other room and locks her there the same thing happens to her what happened to kriya she too joins her team back.

Vishakha : T his time we are having auditions in this month actually we the auditions used to be held after the 1st term exams but this time they are having it early.

But when they went to the rehearsal hall for practice it was already occupied so they go back to the class have some chit-chat and make a plan to have fun at KRSS house.

Everyone leaves and KSRS are left they take their belongings and they start leaving swayam was actually walking back talking to them he dashed to RDX sir he was carrying a file of papers as swayam dashed him all the papers fell down *no one was present in the clg*

Sw: ohh I m really sorry sir I was actually'.

RDX : its ok leave it.

Sw : Sir what happened u look tensed.

RDX : actually I have so much work pending and I have to go out immediately there's a meeting they have called me to represent our clg and I have not even selected CS and ACS I have to do all the work.

Swayam asks him about the work and agrees to do the work along with KRS he leaves them and attends the meeting.

Swayam and Sharon go to the class and start writing other side Rey and Kriya start their work

Kriyaansh :

They go in opp. directions and start checking al the classes. Kriya while checking goes to the place where she met that stranger boy (hope u remember) the room was dark she tries to switch on the lights the switch board was a bit far from her reach she found a stool stood upon it but she slipped and felt that she sprained her ankle she cried in pain and started calling or may be shouting Rey's name but being in different directions Rey could not hear her.

Scene shifts to Rey :

Rey was scanning all the rooms but when he was going to the next room he turned his head from right to left but he blinked his eyes and looked back in shock he was startled because he saw something he did not find it again so he looked straight he saw the same old lady walking towards him he recognised her but this time she was worried she came up to him.

R : Aunty what happened u look worried?

OL : kriya fell down *pointing to that room* in that room and is crying I think she has hurt her leg.

Rey did not wait till she completed her sentence her ran to that room he saw Kriya on the floor he ran towards her he lifted her in his arms he took her near Swayam and Sharon who were sitting in the classroom.

Sw : rey what happened?

R : Don't know Swayam I saw her on the floor crying with pain I could not see her like that and brought her here.

Sh : kriya what happened tell us'

K : Guys let me speak. Ok listen I fell down in that room and I think I have sprained my ankle.

R : But how did u fall.

K : I was trying to switch on the lights as the room was dark I took a stool their and lost my balance while climbing and fell down.

Rey scolded her to be carefull and Swaron said him to leave her at home and come back.

He dropped her home came out and started the car and made his way to the clg.

Time 5:30 Pm :

Kriya was resting closing her eyes it was just 5 mins Rey left but she heard the door bell ringing she kept her legs down the bed now she did not feel any pain she went and opened the door.

kriya opened the door'.

Sm1 : Hi aap kriya didi ho na?

K : haan par sry maine tumhe nahi pehchana..

Sm1 : Arrey didi aap apni meow ko aise kaise bhool sakte ho?

K : meow *now in excitement * Snigdha tum Oh god m so sry bohot saal hogaye hai tumhe dekh ke *gives a tight hug*

She started introducing everyone di ye Shonu'. ye deetha'.ye twinkle'.ye asma'. ye cherry'.Sweets'.. Tessie'Harsha'.Nimi'manasie' and namrata ye humara dance group hai of course aap hum sab ko jaante ho to actually aapse milne aur ek baar practice karne aye hai hope u won't mind bas ek hi baar rehearsal hall use karenge pakka.

Kriya said hi to everyone and then looked at Snigdha with a confused face.

M : Kya hua didi aap confused lag rahe ho?

K : arrey meow yaha pe rehearsal hall kaha par hai ?

M : offo mai bhi na bolna hi bhool gayi didi aap sab ke jaane ke baad na Aashana aunty ne vo jo ghar ke peeche khali place tha jaha hum sab khelte the pehle uss jagah pe rehearsal hall banva dia. Aunty ne aapko nahi bataya??

Shonu & deetha : Arrey didi aap to hume andar bhi nahi bula rahe hai sari baate bahar hi karoge kya?

Kriya still confused said oh sorry andar aajao'.

Tw & Te : Didi chalo hum aapko leke jaate hai rehearsal hall tak.

They took kriya too the back door opened it kriya was shocked at the sight (waha thodasa garden type hai nd thode hi door mai ek room bada tha utna bada nahi but St.Louis ki hall se bhi badi thi) all of them went near the door but the door was locked.

Asma & Cherry : Didi ye to locked hai.

harsha & Nimi : haan di shayad aunty ne aapko koi extra chaabi di hogi na.

Sweets : Haan di aunty ne pakka di hogi aap ko yaad hai kya?

Manasie & Namrta : Di aap kuch to bolo.

K : Thnkq ab mujhe at least thoda sa bolne ka moka to dia nd aunty ne koi chaabi nahi di hai mujhe...

Meow : Di ab kya kare kal hi humara stage performance hai *with a sad face*

k : ab itna mat ban nautanki mai ek baar dekh ke aati hu.

Deetha & meow : Di hum bhi aapke saath chalte hai.

K : accha teek hai chalo.

Kriya, meow and deetha left from there.

Deetha : Di kya hum sab kelie coffee bana de aap tab tak chaabi kelie dekho.

K : Arrey its fine don't trouble urself.

D & meow: Di aap bhi na jao aur keys leke ao tab tak hum bana dete hai.

K : Accha baba ok tum log kab meri baat mante ho *both meow nd deetha smiled*

Deetha and meow goes into the kitchen and Kriya goes to the neighbours who have given her the keys

Scene Kitchen :

Meow and deetha went into the kitchen(guys ab ye mat sochna ki puri coffee ki process bataungi jst skipping it dono experts ne coffee bana dia)

meow : Deetha chalo hum cups unke paas hi leke jaate hai(i mean group ke paas nd guys unhone coffee to bana dia but ek extra cup bana dia un dono ne)

Deetha : Accha ok but Kriya di abhi tak nahi ayi.

Meow : koi problem nahi vo aati hongi hum chalte hai.

Deetha : Ok thn chalo.

They were about to leave when Meow suddenly stops and places a cup on the table al most to the edge of the table.

Deetha : Meow kya hua?

Meow did not answer anything so Deetha was about to take that cup but she felt someone was stopping her from doing that she thought accha chodo let it be Meow and Deetha left from there.

Guys beech mai bas itna maan lena ki Rey jaise jaa raha tha gaadi ruk gayi nd car mai kuch problem aa gaya tha he called nd informed Swaron abt it

Scene shifts to kriya :

K : Aunty vo Aashana aunty ne aapko koi extra key dia tha kya vo peeche rehearsal hall ka?

Nei : Nahi beta jo bhi mujhe dia vo maine tumhe de dia tha.

K : Aunty aap ek baar plz check kijie na.

Nei : shayad Aashana ji rehersal hall ke keys vo store room mai rakhti hai.

K : accha ok aunty thnkq.

While she was walking she got the thought that she didn't know where the store room keys were she turned back and went agian.

k : Sry aunty vo maine aapko phir se disturb kia actually store room ke keys kaha hai vo mujhe nahi pata tha.

Nei : Pata nahi beta Aashana ne mujhe aur koi keys nahi dia shayad vo ghar ke chaabi ke saath hi hoga.

K : Ok aunty thnkq nd sry phir se disturb karne kelie.

Nei : its ok beta koi problem nahi hai ok bye.

K : Bye aunty.

Now Kriya came back as she was expecting Deetha and Meow inside the kitchen so she directly went to the kitchen she did not find them so came out and started searching for keys (Guys jab Kriyaansh ghar aye the to rey ne darwaza khola tha so she didn't knew where he kept the keys)

she searched for a while in the hall but she did not find so she thought of going near the team. While she was going(guys she did not notice the cup)

the cup startes trembling(ya phir shacking kuch bhi bol sakte ho jab earthquake ata hai to sari cheeze hilna shuru ho jata hai vaise) as it was kept at the edge it fell down sue to that sound Kriya turned back.

Kriya thought to herself ye dono ladkiya bhi na pata nahi kya karte hai aise koi table ke corner pe rakhta hai kya.

she went to the kitchen in search of a cloth to clean it up she found a cloth and came back then she observed some strange thing (jab cup neeche gira tha to coffee jo hai cup ke open side se aage flow ho raha tha jaise hi vo vapas ayi coffee open side se close side ki taraf flow ho raha tha nd tat too under the table)the coffee went under the table she sat down to clean it when she sat on her knees and bent to see till where the coffee was spread she found the keys.

She quikly took the keys and talked to herself Thank god ye keys mil gaye chalo koi to accha kaam kia in dono ne. She smiled and took the keys (guys usne vo place clean nahi kia) and went near the store room she inserted the key in the lock (guys yaha pe imagine a tipical filmy scene jaise hawa ana shuru hojata hai and climate mai change aa jata hai nd all that) she felt it strange but finally opened it when she kept her feet inside the room she felt something different but she still continued and went in search of the rehearsal hall keys.

She looked around but she was feeling that someone else was watching her it made her uncomfortable she finally found the keys came out locked the room again and went to the back door when she was out of the house(i mean jab back door se bahar ayi thi) she felt strange like something had happened to her but she was not able to figure it out.

Tw & manasie : Di kitna time lagti ho aap jaldi chalo.

K : haa vo mai... accha chalo.

Shonu : Di keys mujhe do mai open kardeti hu.

She took the keys and opened it the room was actually dark Sweets went in and switched on the lights. The room was absolutly awesome it was big.(guys imagine the same rehearsal hall of St.Louis but a bigger one)

They all went it Kriya was just looking around and admiring the place.

Meow nd nimi : To guys shuru kare??

K : Arrey ye kya tum sab ne coffee pi lia aur mere lie bachaya bhi nahi *pout*

Cherry nd asma : Arrey di ye lo aap kelie hi to ye cup wait kar raha hai (told na un dono experts ne ek cup zyada bana dia tha nd now don't expect meow nd deetha saying her that they left a cup inside for her uske baare mai baad mai batati hu)

Kriya smiled and took the cup now all of them(except kriya started warm up excercises)

Harsha : Ok guys chalo shuru karte hai

All facing the mirror now nd Kriya watching them

plz play this song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VCLxJd1d84s

meow, deetha, manasie, shonu, twinkle, nimi standing in a line in middle of the hall nd 3 left side nd the other 3 right side

song starts now till 0:20 the 6 membs. in the middle started swaying nd doing some hip hop moves 0:21 all the girls started coming close nd did some hip hop moves

After the dance Kriya stood still she could not utter even a single word everyone came near her



this is continued in the next comment so continue reading...
Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Kriya appreciates d dance giving dem a wildcats tag n they go off after sumtym.

Everyone left Kriya locked the rehersal hall and accompnied them till the door everyone left . Kriya just colsed the door and went to rehearsal hall. After seeing their dance she really wanted to try she unlocked it nd went it she closed the door but did not bolt it she played the music went to middle of the hall and closed her eyes she started feeling the music every nerve of hers wanted to dance now her nerves were feeling each and every beat of the music she was about to take a step

when she heard someone shouting her name at top of their voice it was Rey now she opened her eyes Rey opened the rehersal hall door she saw him he was tensed (coz when he entered the house he went to Kriya's room he did not find her she saw the back door open he came out nd heard the music which brought him to the rehearsal hall)

On seeing her he calmed down but soon anger crept on his face he closed the door with a bang nd went into the house. Swaron entered the hall

Sw : Kriya kaha thi tum pehle to tumhe chot lagi hai y didn't u rest?

Sh : Kriya ab dekho rey phir se gussa hogaya hai he was really tensed tum rest le sakti thi na.

K : *a bit scared* vo mai... actually wild cats aye the..

Swaron : What?

K : Sry vo humare frnds aye the unhe rehearsal hall use karna tha to mai unke saath yaha ayi thi mujhe dard nahi ho raha hai its ok.

Sh : Kriya ab andar chalo.

Kriya nodded and followed them like a kid she was searching for Rey but could not find him he was inside the room so they went to the dinning table sat their (yahi soch rahe ho na ki jo coffee gira tha vo kya hua vaise mai bata du vo jo cup nd coffee gira tha it disappered and remember i mentioned tat whn kriya came out of the house she felt smthng strange actually vo sab kuch bhool gayi hai vo coffee ke baare mai nd all)

Sw : Accha ye batao ki tumhe kaise pata chala ki rehersal hall hai.

K : vo actually meow ayi thi aaj uske paltan ko leke.

Sh : par keys??

K : vo...vo... (guys as she forgot the coffee scene she doesn't remember how she got the keys)

meanwhile rey comes out of the room now time was 7 o'clock .Swaron was puzzled wid d behaviour of rey since he doesnt angry so soon.They leave to their respective rooms for d things to b sorted out between kriyaansh by themselves.

Kriya keeps the keys of rehearsal hall on the table and went and sat beside him he did not even bother to look at her. She said him sorry but no response he got up and moved to terrace.

K : lagta hai bohot zyada hi gusse mai hai hmmm Kriya ghai u r going to have a tough time ab chal tujhe hi mana na padega

Kriya follows him upstairs, rey was busy looking at d crowded city.Kriya walks upto him, though he listens to her footsteps he remains unheard.

Kriya slips at d spot holding his shirt as tight as she cud as if someone kept a leg on her way.Rey holds her by d waist from tripping.

They stay in d same position trying to understand wat d other meant.Rey settles her back on d feet and took back his hands.Kriya straightens herself and she too satarted staring at the crowded city.

After some time she looks back at Rey but he was not there she looked around finally she spotted him on the tank she too went their she climbed the ladder now she was facing Rey's back he was sitting at the edge placing both his hands either side.

Kriya went near him and sat beside him he was least bothered she looked straight.

K : pata hai aaj mai bohot khush hu.

Rey was actually shocked how could she say that is ka matlab hai ki vo mujhe apna frnd bhi nahi manti use koi farak nahi padta agar mai usse gusse mai hu ya nahi

K : Mujhe farak padta hai Rey nd mujhe bohot accha lag raha hai ki mera frnd mere baare mai itna sochta hai *looking towards him with a smile*

Ab itna cute smile dia kriya ne to Rey ka gussa to thanda ho hi jaega na

R : tum na huh... koi tumse teek se gussa bhi nahi ho sakta.

K : vo to mujhe bhi pata hai.

R : mai to gusse me poochna hi bhool gaya tha tumhe abhi bhi dard ho raha hai kya?

K : nahi Rey ab to mai bikul teek hu.

R : waise ye sab kasie hua matlab kaise giri thi tum.

Sw : ahem ahem *clearing his throat*

Listening this they turn to see swayam smiling at them

Sw : agar ye rooth na aur mana na khatam ho gaya to khana khae bhook lagi hai *puppy face*

K : Haa chalo mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai *looking at rey*

they went down Kriya went to her room and rey to his room Sharon was in the kitchen and Swayam was setting the table he went into the kitchen brought th plates and kept on the table and knocked Kriya and Rey's door and went back to the table to his surprise the plates were not there on the table

Sw thinking to himself : abhi to plates lake yaha pe raakha tha... shayad sharon leke chali gayi hogi ok no problem phir se launga.

He went into the kitchen Sharon climbed on the slab (guys hope u understand vo sare cheeze jaha pe rakhte hai vo vala)to take out something she stretched her hand up hoping to reach it nd slab pe thoda oil tha she moved her feet to reach the top shelf but due to the oil she slipped.

(guys don't worry sw agaya tha). She was so scared that she wuld be falling down so she closed her eyes but she felt someone holding her she felt that she was in someones arms she opened her eyes and saw swayam.

He was lost in her she was looking too cute even in the scared expression she too was lost now but they were brought back by Kriyaansh who were shouting to serve food.

Swayam placed her down

Sh : Thnkq swayam agar aaj tum nahi hote to...

Sw : Sharon chalo khana khate hai mai plates kelie aya tha.

Sh : par tum to leke chale gaye the na?

Sw : haa par *he looked at the stand(jaha vo plates rakhte hai) he did not find them*

Sh : tum bhi na chalo.

Swayam when came out finds the plates on table he was surprised

Sw thinking to himself : aakhir hua kya tha 1 min pehle to yaha pe nahi the God mai pagal hojaunga.

They all sat had their dinner chit-chatted for some while and went to their respective rooms.

Time 10 PM

Rey and Swayam were resting Sw left side facing left and Rey right side facing study table both were thinking about something krisha were sleeping peacefully but Reyam could not.

Rey got up saw that Swayam was sleeping(actually he wasn't sleeping but he closed his eyes) he went out wanted to go to the terrace but he took the rehearsal hall keys and left to hall he didn't knw that someone was following him.

Scene Rehearsal hall :

He went in switched on the middle light of the hall (guys bohot sare lights hai but usne sirf beech vala light jo sirf hall ke middle mai hai vo on kia plz understand)

stood their for some time looking down then he looked up seeing himself in the mirror he was struggling with his thoughts

Rey : kyu rey kyu apne feelings ko control nahi kar pate ho?? *he was loud enough so the 1 who followed him heard it*

"She is ur friend..just a friend.Get it!!!Kyun ajeeb se bathe soch raha hun main.."

"Y am I feeling more wen I touched her."

"Y did u get angry wen she did something which I dint like her to do.Its her lyf..she can do anything but y r u getting angry reyaansh singhania.Y r u too protective towards her??

"Y did u feel d necessity to keep her just beside you n take care??"R u falling for her.."

"U cant behave lyk dis..behave weirdly!!!She is just a friend n swayam's sister..get dat!!"

But i cant cheat myself by saying this..

The truth is ya i am falling for her.. her beauty... her words...

A voice from behind : her cute face.

Rey : *kept an expression like he got caught*

He could not face him as he knew that he had heard everything it was swayam.

Rey : *slowly* oh god now how will i face him damn rey cant u check whether anyone was following u.

Sw : haa to rey kya bol raha tha

Rey : *hesitatingly* Swayam vo...vo

he went near him placed his hand on his shoulder

Sw : kriya so lucky.

Rey looked at him with full surprise

Sw : what??

R : Actually i have heard that brothers generally dont agree that easily.

Sw : Dont expect me to be like that. And they share a smile.

Sw : really Kriya is too lucky to have u.

R : Do u think she will love me.

Sw : Hmm expect any ans. from me coz its ur duty to make her feel for u.

R : ok lets go now its too late.

They went and slept happily Sw thinking that kriya has got a nice guy and Rey thinking about his feelings his first love.

Morning 7:20AM

Door bell rings kriya opens the door she was accompanied by Sharon

Prsn : hello Gud mrng mam mai Singhania family ka manager hu.

Hearing this Sharon came front and saw him she recognised him.

Sh : Gud mrng uncle come in.

Prsn : beta vo aapke papa ne aap sab kelie ye bheja hai aap sab ab ...SAATH... ho na.

He hands her a bag and leaves. They start cleaning the house and wait for the gang to come.

Time 9 Am

Door bell again

There was an old lady the same old lady nd note Swaron never saw her she asked for a glass of water Swayam offered her nd while going she said

OL : *looking down* beta bhagwaan aapke... *looking into his eyes*'.SAATH(7)... *again looking down* kuch bura na kare.

Swayam saw her with a confusing look and was thinking what did she mean.

Time 1 PM

Door bell again

Sh : chalo iss baar mai dekhti hu. And she opens the door

All : Hiii!!!!!!!

Sh : hi guys andar aao. They come in and sat

Simmi : hum... SAATH(7)... log hi aye hai. rinni will be joining us soon *swayam again feels strange*

Rinni came with food for everyone she got the food parcelled

all of them gathered near the dining table ate happily chit-chatting, having fun, cracking jokes on others and they finally complete everyone holding their tummies fall on the sofa *coz they have ate enough*

Door bell again Time 2 PM

Rey opens the door

Prsn : *looking at the covers he brought* ji namaste rinni madam ne ye... *looking at him*... SAATH(7)... covers mangwaya tha. They took it and went in and joined others

Rinni : Guys ab ye kya kare maine to hum sab kelie ice-creams bhi mangwaya she kept them on the trolley which was in the middle

Simmi & Vishakha see other and wink they took one of the cover opened the box.

Simmi opened it and said : Guys kitni garmi hai na *everyone saw her with confused expression*

She aimed the box of ice-cream to Sharon but when she threw sharon was quick enough to get what was happening so she bent down and it directly went and hit Kriya. (guys yaha pe u can imagine the box sliding down her face which was now covered with ice cream) everyone started laughing.

Soon Vishakha aimed another one to Neha now it was Kriya's turn she grabbed another one and aimed at simmi but it hit Rey he was too happy with it but he too aimed at kriya this time it hit Sharon and the game started and ended at a point where everyone was totally filled with ice-cream (same as in food fight of D3)

All stood there laughing loud and finally got themselves cleaned up and all gathered in hall.

Kriya switched on the TV and it flashed ...SAATH(7)... khoon maaf. She then checked every channel none of them found anything interesting. *swayam again feels strange*

They decide to see a horror movie.

Movie : Insidious

After the movie they decided to play truth or dare.

First turn was Rey's he had to choose and Simmi wuld be asking him.

Simmi : Ok truth or dare?

Rey : hmm dare.

She asked him to stay in the store room alone for 7 mins *swayam again notices this time he starts thinking that from the morning he had heard it for many times*

Scene store room :

Rey entered the room his frnds locked the door he was walking looking around and suddenly he felt like he saw Kriya at a corner he moved a bit left thinking he could see her. He saw her who was pointing something he saw her hand which directed him to a clock the clock was showing time ...SAATH(7)'.. when the actual time was 5 PM.

He then thought Kriya iss room mai he looked back at her but this time she was not present he again looked around searching her but he did not find her he thought Oh god kriya kitna disturb karogi mujhe ab hur jagah tum hi dikh rahi ho.

His friends were busy making some weird sounds to scare him.

He was now staring at the clock he felt something passing from his back it was so fast that he could not trace out what it was the team decided to open the door hearing that sound he moved towards the door soon he heard a voice like someone was whispering to him '.Sirf SAATH Din'. rey looked here and there to find out what was it who was speaking to him he did not find anyone Simmi opened the door.

Rey went out of the room and while closing the door he once lastly saw the room and closed it he joined the gang who again formed a circle to continue the game.

Rey then asks whether anyone went into the store room till now Kriya says that she went and recollecting the reason they remember about the rehearsal hall.

They went to rehearsal hall had fun and the team started dancing except KRSS. Rey was still thinking about the voice.

Time 7PM everyone in rehearsal hall

Vicky : Arrey swayam time kya ho raha hai??

Sw : 'SAATH(7)' *swayam this time thinks something is wrong this time rey again thinks about what happened in the store room *

Everyone went out for dinner to hotel

While entering the hotel all went ahead Sharon walked slowly watching each and everything carefully she stood at a place seeing the flower vase another girl was standing beside her she felt that it would be one of her friends so she did not mind to see who it was the girl stood straight and keeping her body still she turned her head to let facing Sharon and said

Girl : Enjoying??

Sharon found the voice unusual so she looked at her the girl's eyes were of different colour mostly resembling cat eyes.

Girl : Sirf'SAATH' din hai.

Sharon was confused : excuse me?

Girl did not speak anything but went away Sharon just kept staring at her

They went an occupied a table gave their order and were waiting for the food when Sharon again spotted the girl who was continuously staring at her she felt uneasy so she excused herself and was going near her but the girl started walking she lead her to the washroom (plz imagine the same one as in St.Louis clg) the girl was a bit ahead of Sharon so when Sharon entered there she did not find the girl she decided to wash her hands and go back as she went near the pipe she felt the door close with a bang she looked at the door and then went to open it but ya it was locked the Girl was still inside the washroom she came out making some weird sound this was enough for Sharon to get startled she closed her eyes as tight as she could she came near Sharon till the door caught her face turned it to face her.

Girl : Sharon Singhania just remember sirf 'SAATH'din baaki hai.

Saying this she opened the door and went away this time Sharon noticed her words and she repeated 'SAATH'.din before she could conclude to what it meant Kriya called out her name.

Sharon again went near the mirror took some water and splashed water on her face and looked into the mirror this time she again found the girls reflection in the mirror who was repeating 'SAATH' din she was totally scared now she ran to the door and stopped there made herself calm and went out now she tried really hard to act normal. She went and joined others who were waiting Swayam and Rey could sense that something went wrong with Sharon. Rey was about to ask when Swayam placed his hand on Rey knee and nodded as if saying no. Rey too kept quiet they completed their dinner. Everyone started leaving.

On the way back home in the car Kriya looked out and saw some kids playing she smiled and stared at them till they disappeared she again looked back but culd not find them she sat back normally and looked out this time she found all those kids showing 7 figures to her she felt weird. She closed her eyes she felt someone whispering to her "kriya sirf '.SAATH'. din bache hai" she gasped and opened her eyes rey was staring her for past few mins he noticed it nd placed his hand on hers to comfort her.


So this is the summary of all the update till now hope u liked it nd ash i want ur comment after u read this i ll be waiting...

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
popopy ab iska reply mat kar.yeh mera res hai.

poppy mai tera kya karu.
i loved the suprise u gave u.
Summary was gud.

i was shocked wen i saw this mujhe laga ki tune itna bada update diya hai par tu tho tu hai nah.
Summary de kar chak mar gayi.
AB jaldio se update bhi de dho.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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bapre poppy dar gayi thi me itna bada update dekhake aur khush bhi hui thi bt tu to tu he ryt..
Lekin manana padega itni badi summary likhi tune sab parts ki juz fr d new readers dat was so swt of u swthrt...
Loved d whole summary... Felt gud to brush up d story again.. Ab jaldi jaldi update bhi chahiye hmmm plz... Aur suprise was wonderfull thnkz a lot fr dat hmm...
Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahaha... you noe wat poppymere saath bhi aisa hone vala hai...
my mausi nd their two sons are coming @ holidays !!!!

So,mere bhi same condition hoga...i guess !!!!
I totally understand...
Missin u lyke hell darl..
So,jaldi aana !!!!
Will be waiting...
muaaah
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Posted: 13 years ago
great surprise
thnx 4 da summary it really helps
nd thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx fr d surprise...
Summary ws vry well ritten...
It helps us...

P.S:Horror queen fresh updt eppudu istunnavu???
Nuvvu snigz truth nd dare adara...
Tanemo taarey gurinchi...nuvvemo signature...tane ichinda dare neku???
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx for the summary..
nice update👏
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Pehle congratzz tera FF has been selected the best one...
Mujhe laga tune ko update diya aur mai itni excited hogayi jab dekha toh it was a thank u note...saari excitement gayi paani mai...acha ab yeh bata update kab kar rhi hai

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