IPKKND: It's Not Right - Thread 3: Ch 34-41

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#641

Actually why he suddenly returned back from the picnic? Because Kushi rode the bike safely and he was thinking what if something happened??

The past really started like known story but indeed it was different at end..! The women, a child!

And now Dhruv is in place now. Waiting for his entry.

Thanks for the pm

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yusam

@yusam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

SSWWEEETT... THE BIKE RIDE WHER HE PUT HIS HANDS OVER HERS, AAWWW... HES SHARED HIS PAST WID HER, SHOWS THEIR LOVE GOIN TO A NEW LEVEL OF TRUST...

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Vishwa

@vish94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#643

omg! its been SOOO long since u updated this FF! i had almost forgotten about it! and even now, i only remembered a little of the last update after readint he starting of this one! the past story is all a blur in my mind!

but anyhoo, i loved it! its good to see they trust each other so much now! and the way khushi stood up for dhruv - a boy she has never seen, never met, never even heard of before this instance, is just amazing!

and arnav ... first apologising for all that he had done wrong with khushi till now and then opening up to her about his past - it shows he is ready to take this relation to the next level - n im nt talkin abt the physical next level. im talkin abt the emotional, pure part of it.

hmm.. well, waitin fr the next update!

CHEERS!

Edited by vish94 - 13 years ago

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monsi08

@monsi08

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#644

FINALLY there is some news about Dhruv 😆

But this was a great update... crisp .. fast paced.. me too eager to see Dhruv and his bonding with Khushi and how Khushi will make his bonding with Arnav...

Cheers,
Monsi

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#645

Woah...dhruv arnav's brother...interesting!!!:)
Continue soon...great update...Arnav trusting khushi...sooo cute!!!:)

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#646

This was such a touching update! :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Just caught up and wow...you have given this story, and the characters in it, a whole new dimension! It's beautiful...chapter 37 was so crucial in the development of their relationship...I honestly felt choked emotionally when Arnav said he was glad that khushi hadn't been on the front seat...that was so...bittersweet, kt was just...genius! The fact that arnav actually didnt give away all the food she had spent so long making...that was truly adorable. I didn't expect it...I only thought of how you captured the selflessness of khushi perfectly...but then u showed us how u captured the essence of Arnav too! Brilliant! It was one of the best chapters for me. And i love that they trust each other enough to share their painful pasts...it cant be easy, but trust is important in their bond, and it was done beautifully :) and Arnav apologising...it shows a lot about how much khushi means to him...when the time comes he won't be able to let her go...I could go on and on, but really should go have breakfast now before my mum yells :p truly awesome. Ps: can't wait to read what you have planned with dhruv