3-shot: Return to Me (Completed)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

that was really beautiful loved it

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chandarani1

@chandarani1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

loved the ending part!!!!!

awsome job!!!

pls write some more...

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Uswah

@uswah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

awww thts such a beautiful ending d last line is reallly sweet "She have his heart d he have her brain " its really complete them made for each other

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

beautifull update. continue soon i want to see wat happens next? hope to see some arnav andk hushi moments and thx a lot for the pm

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Thank you so much guys for loving it. I am thinking of writing a sequel now that many of you wanted a continuation ... Let's see!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: uswah
awww thts such a beautiful ending d last line is reallly sweet "She have his heart d he have her brain " its really complete them made for each other

that is exactly what i was trying to portray .. they complete each other .. one is fun, one is serious ... one has the heart when the other has the brain .. one cares, one protects .. they just complement each other so well :)

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Read it onceagain. Superb👏

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

The last part was very cute.😊

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s0n00smi

@s0n00smi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Arnav: You were the one who told me I was heartless, Khushi. And I finally found my heart in you. I have lived without a heart and I now know what is to live with a heart this lines are very nice..i wish these lines will come in serial also when arnav repent,