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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
hey i just read all the parts of ur OS at once, must say its v good. if u update do PM me, wud luv to read more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar ver interesting. pls pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
it was really emotional...can u plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKES

DAY 3

AT SHANTIVAN ( morning )

Arnav : khushii...KHUSHIII... ( he screams in the bathroom )

Khushi : kya hai..?

Arnav: get me my towel.

Khushi : am not your servant.. go get youself

Arnav: but.. tumtho meri wife.. and i thought it was yer KARTHAVYA to obey your husband

Khushi was irritated by arnav pulling her leg by her own words.

She grabs the towel and she hands over it to him.

With the towel he pulls her inside the bathroom and traps her.

Khushi : what are you doing..? leave me..

Arnav : khushi.. then he kisses her in cheeks

Khushi : aap... aap..

Tik tik dhak dhak... her breathing increases

Khushi : what you are doing..

Arnav: what did i do

Khushi : u don't know what u did

Arnav : i don't know.. can you show me again

Khushi shocked.. and just gets out the bathroom

Arnav just laughs and gets ready for office

AFTERNOON IN SHANTIVAN

Phone rings and khushi picks up

Khushi : hello

Arnav: hi baby..

Khushi : baby... who is it..?

Arnav : mein hoon.. u don't know

Khushi realises it is arnav.

Khushi : haan.. what..?

Arnav : i am very hungry. R'nt you getting me lunch..?

Khushi : eat in canteen.

Arnav : you are my wife and its your KARTAVYA.. ISNT IT..?

Khushi : fine.. i will send lunch through jai prakash.

Arnav: your partner was looking for you..

Khushi : partner..?

Arnav : oh.. your dhabba wala partner.. so you come to office with my lunch. And yea. It should be hot

Khushi : mr.shukla didn't say me anything.. hello hello... he kept the fone.

Khushi to herself .. why is he looking for me..?

AT AR OFFICE

Khushi goes up arnav's cabin and knocks the door.

Arnav : come in.

Khushi : here.. gives him the lunch.

Arnav: oh.. you.. came so fast.

Arnav: but.. i am so busy.. do 1 thing feed me the lunch

Khushi : what.. if u want to eat.. other wise..

Arnav : i thought you are my wife and its your KART.. ( khushi interrupts him)

Khushi : what do you want..? since morning..

Arnav : i am hungry.. so lets get started.

Khushi starts feeding him... arnav stares at her ..

While leaving ..

Arnav : khushi.. food was very good.

Khushi just smiles... and arnav also smiles.

They have a moment and she leaves.

Arnav: khushi..

Khushi : what..

Arnav : i love you..

Khushi just got shocked and her cheeks become red.

Arnav: khushi.. u wont say anything.

Yesterday u said. U also ... he starts to move towards her.

Khushi : what i said..?

Arnav : that u ... ( holds her by her waist.. and pulls her closer )

Khushi : leave me.. i have to go.

Arnav : then say me...

Khushi : what..

Arnav : yesterday.. that three words..

Khushi : no

Arnav: otherwise i wil.. ( bends and inches towards her lips )

Khushi : i.. i ... ahm erm..

Arnav : i.. ( inches further )

Khushi : arnavjii.. pulls him and runs away..

Arnav : khushi.. khushi..

Arnav smiles to himself.

BACK IN SHANTIVAN

Akash was discussing something to arnav. The whole family gathered in living room

Khushi didn't recover from the shock that happend in the office.

Akash : nani.. bhai... said.. we all can visit lucknow and stay in sheesh mahal for sometime

Anjali : thats a good idea.. we can take lavanya and N.K as well

Everyone agrees and khushi gets reminded about the days she spent in lucknow and payal reassures that everything is fine.

Arnav: so get ready every one.. we are going to stay for 2 days and we are leaving tonight.

Back in arnavs room

Arnav : khushi..

Khushi : what..

Arnav: i met you at lucknow... ( he pulls her closer.. and slighty presses his lips on hers )

Khushi gets thrilled .. and she didn't want him to stop inspite of being angry with him

Arnav : khushi.. how you feeling now..?

Khushi : what.. pushes him.. what.. haiyee devimayya

Arnav: relax khushi.. i am not going to eat you

Khushi : aap... what did u do..

Arnav : go get ready fast...

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TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
interesting plot...arnav gettin naughty...haha...plz do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Everyboy starts packing and gets ready to go to sheesh mahal . arnav goes to take a shower and by the time everyone leaves in akash's car. Arnav comes out

Khushi : everyone left.

Arnav ( quickly thinks of a plan ) : good then and he lies in the bed.

Khushi : kya.. we have to go. They will be waiting for us in airport.

Arnav : really... i have no mood.

Khushi : kya..

Arnav : if u want to go.. then u will have to pay me..

Khushi : how much..

Arnav: very less.. one kiss ( here pointing at his lips )

Khushi : no..

Arnav: fine.. as you say.. ( he closes the door and lockes it )

Khushi : look... u cant do like this..

Arnav: why.. by the way.. i thought u like winning.. and losing is not in your dictionary. Looks like am wrong.

Khushi : you are not wrong.. i don't lose at all.

Arnav : then go ahead. ( he folds his arms and smirks )

She takes step by step towards arnav. Her heart races involuntarily and she cant control it. Arnav notices .

Arnav: khushi,.. r u fine..?

Khushi : haan.. woh.. she takes a step forward and places her lip lightly on his lip. Arnav didn't want to push her further. He pulls her closer and cruches his lips on hers and lifts her up to his shoulder.

Khushi forgets everything .. the past.. future.. pain hurt.. everything .. just arnav and her.. that kiss conveyed a lot of feelings. She was so relived to see his arm around her.

Both break the kiss and gasp for air. They breathe heavily and khushi was too shy to meet his gaze.

Arnav: khushi.. go take the things to car . i will come.

Arnav and khushi reach the aiport.

Anjali : khushiji.. your both the cheeks are red. Kya hua..? kyun chotey .. ( everyone giggles )

Arnav: no di.. lets go.

Arnav keeps thinking about the kiss and cant wait to kiss her again. Khushi also thinks about the kiss and wonders how perfect it was

IN SHEESH MAHAL

Anjali : suniye suniye.. it is the first time with two daughter in laws in sheesh mahal. So today we are having a girls night. So all the boys take the upstairs room. We all will stay together here .

Arnav and akash : what the...!! arnav looks at akash for using his one liner.

Anjali : kya hua chotey and akash

Naniji : kya kya.. go go.. we are all tired.

Akash: oh... payal ji.. i have some work ... i mean office work.

Anjali : payal bhabi.. u didn't tell me that u are going to office also ( teases and payal blushes )

Anjali : ok ok.. we are tired. Go go.. N.k bhai.. aap bhi. And lavanya will be here with us

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AT BOYS PLACE

AKASH paces here and there.. very restless.

N.K : KYA HUA,, akash .. are you taking part in a marathon ..?

akash : after my marriage also.. i cant stay with payal ..

N.K : i swear... this is not fair.. so unfair.. sex discrimination.. we have to fight.

do something.. or maybe we all can wear saree and gate crash them

arnav : N.K .. they are not our fiances.. we are married.

N.K : we all should do something.

meanwhile shyam and mamji sleeps.. but arnav keeps thinking of the kiss and akash about payal.. and N.K thinks how to propose lavanya.

arnav looks at everyone .. arnav ( to himself ) : looks like everyone is sleeping i will go meet khushi.

he walks away.

akash ( gets up and wakes N.K ) : N.K bhai.. N.K bhai..

N.K : what..

akash : do u want to see lavanya..

n.k : la.. la.. where is she..? la.. i am in .

AKASH : lets go..

n.k : are we gate crashing.. but what about nanav..?

akash : he is sleeping.. slowly.. come

N.K AND AKASH LEAVE.

meanwhile in

GIRLS PLACE

khushi .. payal .. lavanya .. anjali.. nani.. everyone is playing damb charade.

anjali coughs..

khushi : i will get water.. HP HP

meanwhile in servant quarters..

hp : khushiji..

khushi : hp ji .. can you get us water..?

i dont know where is the kitchen.

arnav heres this and thinks this is the right time.

hp : teek hai..

arnav : hp hp

hp : aap ..chotey saab..

arnav : shush .. chup raho...

give me the water.. i will take it. and listen dont divulge that am here.

arnav nears khushi... suddenly theres a loud scream.

khushi moves from the place and sees

anjali : lavanya ji.. what happend..?

lavanya : cockroach..

everybody looks for it.

meanwhile akash and nk hide beneath the sofa.

arnav ( gets tensed ) .. cools himself .. there will be another way.

payal : khushi.. where is the water..?

khushi : oh.. i will go get it,.,

payal : u wait.. i will go.

payal comes near hp ( arnav actually )

payal : hpji.. give the water,,

arnav : oh shit.. i am screwed

payal : jii.. did you say something..?

arnav : nothing actually.. ( hands the water withought showing his face )

payal : thank you.. ek minute.. since when did you learn english..?

arnav : what ( in english )

payal : hpji,,.

arnav runs from here and stumps at the sofa where akash aND NK ARE HIDING.

khushi hears the sound and comes near the sofa..( hp also enters hearing the sound )

hp : khushiji.. kya hua..?

khushi : i dont know.. some sound came..

hp : i will see it,, ( sees akash and nk beneath the sofa.. akash signales not to say anything )

hp : oh khushiji.. some rat is inside here..

khushi : accha.. i will go get a stick.

khushi : op jiii

op: kya..

khushi : get a bamboo stick

hearing this ( n.k whispers : akash we are dead today .. akash : shut up nk

akash : hp hp.. do something.

hp nods..

op comes with the stick

op : hp.. where is it..?

hp signales and op finds out akash and nk are there.

khushi : opji.. did you find it..?

meanwhile arnav mutters.. why she is so intrested in finding that rat.. i am so restless here not able to sleep.

arnav makes a sound of cat.. distracts khushi ..

khushi : lagta hai.. dis place was a zoo before.. rat and now cats..

opji .. i will go see.

khushi looks for it and arnav holds her back pulls her towards him.

and she screams..

khushi : theif theif..

arnav : khushi shut up.. shut up..

khushi : aap..

anajli : kya hua..

khushi : kuch nahi.. woh.. cockroach..

anjali : cockroach... come khushiji... lets sleep

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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
after so long... and so short...not fair!!!! we were waiting for u like mad!!!! pls come back soon fast and with a bigger update...lol...!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Good That Arnav Doesn't Want To Push Her :) 🤗 Haha, Arnav Is So Desperate To See Her 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DAY 3 CONTINUED

as khushi goes with anjali to sleep. anjali shows khushis room . meanwhile sneakily enters khushis room and hides beneath the blanket.

khushi enters the room. she locks and changes it in to her night suit and retires for bed and finds arnav in it,
khushi : aap.. here.. when did you come.. why dint u tell me.. did u see something.. i mean i just
arnav : what .. i dint understand

arnav ( smirks )

khushi : i know.. tell me did you see.?

arnav: see what

khushi : did you see me..

arnav : khushi.. i am seeing you now also..

khushi : did you see me .. changing.

arnav : hmm.. what .. say it again

khushi : .. now tell me why are you here.

arnav : i am going to sleep.. bye gnight khushi.

khushi : but but ..
''

khushi tries to wake arnav.. but he doesnt move,
khushi also sleeps next to arnav

arnav : khushi.. u slept..?


they both sleep together

DAY 4
anjali knocks the door.. khushi finds arnav has gone. she wonders whether she was dreaming or not. meanwhile anjali tells khushi to get ready as there is a special fashion show. khushi wears a beautiful red dress.
lavanja : khushi.. u look really gorgeous... arnav will be drooling over you.
every one gets ready.. goes to the fashion show where arnav nk and akash are making arragements.

arnav was talking to a model..
khushi notices it and tries to eaves drop what they are talking.
arnav notices khushi and was lost in her beauty. he also notices her trick and tries to play with it

arnav : LISA.. U LOOK SEXY TODAY

lisa( the model ) : THANK YOU ASR .. YOU TOO LOOK HOT ( and places her hand in his shoulder)

khushi gets jealous and walks over the model.
khushi : akashji is calling you.. go.

lisa : ASR ... WHO IS THIS.. BEHENJI.

KHUSHI : you look like a begger.. who is need of money..

lisa: asr

arnav: relax lisa.. go and get ready

lisa leaves.

arnav: khushi...

khushi doesnt answer..

arnav : khushi.. i saw you..

khushi : jiii..

arnav : khushi i saw you .. last night.. you do look really nice without...

khushi : kya..

arnav : i mean without pleating your hair.. u look nice khushi..

khushi : ( confused ) : kya..

arnav : come lets go..

the fashion show starts and arnav keeps looking at khushi.

after the show.. arnav holds khushi

ARNAV: LADIES AND GENTLEMAN.. SINCE MY MARRIAGE WAS A LOW KEY AFFAIR.. MEET MY WIFE.. MRS. KHUSHI SINGH RAIZADA... MY BEAUTIFUL LADY

khushi ( looks confused ) : smiles at everyone.

khushi gets carried away mingling with everyone . after the party gets over. they go back to sheesh mahal.

khushi thinks about everything happend.. and calls arnav

arnav : hello...

khushi : ham.,. khushi

arnav : i know khushi..

khushi : i want to talk something.. come to terrace.


AT THE TERRACE

arnav comes.. and sees khushi waiting.

arnav : khushi..

khushi : what do you want..?

arnav : khushi,... i am not getting you.

khushi : i asked you what do you want from me.. first u wanted to stay away from me.. u said u never wanted to see my face anymore.. then u married me and made my life hell for someone else's mistake .. and now even u know.. what do you want more from me.. that u are doing this..

arnav : khushi..

khushi : ..no i will talk now.. u are right mr.raizada.. i am not smart as you.. because i cant understand .. what you are up to,,?
please mr.raizada leave me.. i have faced a lot in my life.. i cant take anymore..
i lost my parents and i lost my diginity respect.. i faced a lot of hatred and now.. i lost my love too...

arnav : khushi.. i will never let you cry.. i love you khushi.. i will never let you go anywhere.. its time for you to be happy.. for us to be happy..
our home.. our children.. trust me khushi.. we wil happy forver

khushi : u will never stop your game ..

arnav : please khushi i promise

khushi just runs away.
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to be continued...




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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
liked it!!!! hope they begin with the "khushi manao" track soon too...!!!! :))))

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