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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm...loved kriya's and sharon's bonding...
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Posted: 13 years ago
krisha friendship or rather sisterhood i wud call-just so good...i was actuaaly wanting something like that in the show...it was just so lively ...i could actually feel them...the gang's reaction must have been unequalled...wow...the last rey-kria part i loved it...it was a pleasure reading the last part...hmm precap sounds exciting...the dresses wer awesome...thnx for the pm and once again i wud mention-a mindblowing update...😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update its awesomeee...
loved krish's fightng and frndship😆😆...
thnks for pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
fr d note...
pleaseee...
please kriya ko koi beemari na ho...
please...
n may b she was stopi sharon frm tellin rey d actual truth...
bt jo bhi ho...
kriyaash ko waapis milvado...
n don make krisha seperate nw atleast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was amazing.luvd new krisha.kria tease sharon n sharon tease kria 😆 update it soon.i hope koi sad secret na nikla
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow deetha... dat was sooo amazinggg...

i loved your update...

it was jst freaking awesommm

loved the krisha bonding... dey came soo close to each other in jst a short span of tym...

chooo cuuttteee...



nd kriya finally said I LOVE YOU

WOWWW...

WWOOOPPPIIIEEE...

LOVED UR UPDATE...


bt i'm scared... i dnt knw tu next part mei kya karne wali hai... bt story bht ache track pe hai... plzzz plzzz plzzz... jutaas n chappals wale kaam mat kariyo... plzzz...

i dnt knw evn aftr watchin d precap wat u gonna do... bt plzzz... 4got sake...


JUTE CHAPPAL WALE KAAM MAT KARIYO... SAMJHI...



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Posted: 13 years ago
Deetha awsum is th word for it-Krisha was rocking luvd every bit of their interaction...Kriyaansh was so romantic the confession by Kria and all - scary precap tho hope all is well its so much fun to c th gang together... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all sorry for commentin late... nd cuming to the updt... reallly awesummm..!!! loved krisha's new avatar nd the atlst kria said..i love you.. nd evryone knows the truth... nd precap...wat happned to kria...hope no bad news... ---UPDATE SOOON---
Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


doori sahi nahi jaati aur paas hona muskhil pad jaati









its been two days since kriya joined the office...that day kriya was in her cabin next to reys...she was trying to make some model...some new style of decoration explained by rey she was drawing it ink bottle fell on it...rey had given her 2 hrs of tym...1 hr already cmpltd and almost the scketh was ready...kriya was fully irritated less by the fact the the skecth got spoiled and more by imagining the reaction of rey...rey went out 4r a meeting and will be back in 45 mins...she sighed and strtd to skecth again on a new sheet...after 40 mins she saw rey speaking to the manager...almost her skecth was cmplt but she need another 1/2 hr..so she went to him making herself ready 4r sm scoldings...

kr: s...sir...

rey turned back...

r: haan kriya bolo..

kr: sir wo actually jo skecth aapne banane keliye kaha uskeliye mujhe aur 1/2 hr chahiye actually 1 ghanta pehle hi khatam hone wala tha par..

rey: par uss pe ink girgayi ri8???

kr: ( with open mouth) aapko kaise...

rey: i saw it/...kk chalo take ur tym waise bhi 5 hrs hai office bandh hone mei so uske andar get it to me...kk mujhe mr. bhakshi ko karna hai...

he left to his cabin leaving behing a open mouthed kriya...

priya: kriya kya hua????

kr: unhe kaise pata ki ink gir gayi woh toh abhi aaye...

pr: nahi toh sir toh gaye hi nahi...

kr: wat???

pr: haan sir ne kaha jab wo parking lot ki taraf jaa rahe the tabhi unko call aaya ki one of the members is unwell so meeting caancel hogayi...and haan unhone dekha hoga bas...

kr: dekha hoga??? wat do u mean??? u know no one can see into my room...

guys dekho i will explain...

kriya aur rey ki cabins attached ...made of glass...par kriya sabko apni cabin se dekh sakti hai by kisiko andar ka kuch nahi dikhta and jo wall rey ki cabin se hai usse kriya ko kuch nahi dikhta...

pr: arey sir dekh sakte hain...tum donon ki cabin ki jo common wall hain na uske through...sir can see u but not vice versa...

kr:😲 kya??? ye toh galat hai aise kisike cabin mein dekhna...

pr: offo...actually na sir iss cmpany ko 6 yrs se run kar rahe hai ...humasha unka pa ek ladka hi rehta tha...u know how girls drool over him so he never took a risk of keeping a girl as pa...and haa unka PA kaam acha kar raha hai ya nahi ye dekhne keliye unhone waisa rakha...

kr: haww!!!!! ajeeb baat hai arey logon par thoda toh believe karna chahiye...

pr: par sir nahi karte...she giggled/...ab jao warna raavan ka avatar dekhna padega..

kr:yeah ur ri8...😆

kriya cmpltd her sketch and submitted as said in half-an-hour...

days passed these two made a grt team and brought the cmpany to new heights...one day...

rey in his cabin...

pr: hello sir..

r: haan priya..

pr: sir koi aaye hain aapko milne..

r: koun hai naam batao unka...

pr: ji woh keh rahe hai ki unka naam swayam shekawat hai aur doosre ka hai sharon malhotra hai...

r: acha kk behojo unhe...

swaron entered and rey told to take their seats ...rey stood and was talking while walking...

rey: so batayi mr. swayam aapko kya help chahiye ...

sw: ji actually mai shekawats dance institute ki MD hun...kuch dinon baad hamare institute mei fest jaisa kuch plan kar rahe hai so

sh: so humne socha ki aapki cmpany fest organise karne mei top most list mai hai ...so thought of giving it to u...

sw: ji...haan maamte hai ki chota fest hai par...

rey: ab bas bhi kar saale... naatak mat kar jyaada...fest ,vest sab chod saale pehle ye bata ki kahaa tha tu itne din??? haan??? do u even remember swayam ki ek saal hogaya tumhe delhi gaye hue ...and u never turned up even i begged u...aur kuch dinon se call bhi lift nahi kar raha hai...

sw: arey yaar sorry wo bas thoda kaam mei busy tha isiliye ..

rey: kaam mei ya sharon mei???😉

sh: shut up rey...u know insti ki progress low thi so ...

rey: kk par call??? he raised eyebrow...

sh: wo humne socha surprise denge...she winked...

rey: and yeah i loved it...he hugged both ...

rey: and haan ye jo story kehrahe the donon bohut sahi tha...

sw: story nahi sach hai sach mei fest conduct kar rahe hai 5 days baad...2 din ki fest hai...so contract lega??? he asked slowly...

rey: no pleading...bas bata mei lelunga...and haan iss baar fest ek dam mast hoga...new ideas new look..


sh: wah itna confident???

rey: haan ...wait a min...

he called smone...

r: cm to my cabin...

after 2 mins...

our beloved kriya entere ..
(white shirt)

kr: can i come in sir...

rey: offo ladki come in and rey yaar...

kr: oops sorry rey...

she didnt notice swaron yet...swaron are seeing them and some thing is cooking in their mind...;)

kr: haan rey batayiye abhi kyun bulaya waise aapki meeting toh 3 ghante baad hai na...and ya i think wo meeting postpone hoga...unka call abhi aaya and haan rey hame na naye contracts lena hai u know 2 weeks hogaye no contracts loss ho sakti hai and...she was looking into the file searching what to inform next...

rey was listening to her irritated...when she became silent he spoke..

rey: kriya tum itna bolti kyun ho???

kr: kya ??? mai bolti hun??? she looked at him not agreeing to his cmnt..

rey: bolti nahi bohut jyaada bolti ho... u know tumne news reader ban na chaiye..bak bak karte reh sakti ho...suits u...

kr: aww!! rey how dare u...tum mujhe aise kaise keh sakte ho...u know tum paagal ho...

r: wat mai paagal???

kr: haan tu paagal hi ho..

r: infact paagal tum ho...tumne ye socha bhi nahi ki maine tumhe kyun bulaya aur aate hi bad badana shuru...

kriya bit her tongue...

kr: sorry...she replied cutely...

r: its kk...he too smiled...

swaron smiled at each other seein them coz rey never spoke this comfortably with any girl...

swayam cleared his throat and its then when kriya noticed them...

she looked at rey...

r: oh..so ye hai

sh: we can...rey smiled...

sh: so im sharon malhotra...

kr: hi im kriya ghai reyaansh sir ki

sw: PA...we know it and BTW im swayam shekawat...

kr: oh nice to meet u...

swaron : we too...

rey: ab hogaya toh thoda kaam ki baat karle...??

swaron: sure...

rey: kriya dekho ye donon mere frnds infact best buddy's//...and swayam ki insti mei kuch fest chal raha hai so make sm plans on how to decorate...i want it to be

kr: PERFECT ri8??

rey: hmm...

kr: kk sir...

rey: arey ye dost hi hai mere...inke saamne rey bulasakti ho..

kr: hmm...kk rey toh mujhe 1 hr chahiye...u know naye ideas ko sketch karna hai...

rey: take ur tym waise maai aaj inko jaane dene wala nahi hun...so take ur tym...aur haan kya keh rahi thi??? meeting cncl?? y??

kr: woh jo humare rival company hai na uss akdu ne ab tak presentation banaya nahi ...lazy fellow...isiliye mr. bhakshi se requst ki parso keliye postpone karne ko..

rey: hmmm...kk ...

kr: then i will take a leave...she said seeing swaron and rey

sh: hey wait!!!!!!

kr: huh??

sh: woh actually ye donon bohut chipakte hai ...mujhe bhool jayenge...i will get bored ...can i join u ...i promise i wont disturb bas tere paas baitke sketch dekhungi...

before kriya could say anything rey spoke...

rey: 4r sure sharon ...i know use koi problem nahi hogi...wo tum se baat karte karte bhi apna kaam jaldi kar sakti hai...u know she is talented...i dnt think she will have any probs...kyun kriya...


kr: rey is ri8 sharon...u can join me...

krisha left the room...

sw: talanted ...i know her...hmm...acha hai beta ...acha hai...

rey: kya hai???😕

sw: soft corner 4r her haan???

rey: stupid brain ko band rakho ...she is good ...so normally baat karta hun and she really works hard man...

sw: ohh... swayam giggled as rey fumed...

krisha:

kr: so

sh: so??😕

kr: dnt think other wise ...swayam is ur bf ri8??? u love him???

sh: yep...a lot...

kr: he too???

sh: haan ...😳

kr: so can i ask abt urr first meet matlab pyaar hua kaise???

sh: pyaar kab hua pata bhi nahi actually mere papa aur unke papa bohut close frnds hai so jab mai paida hui tabhi decided ki hamari shadi hogi and all stuff u know and 4rm then i loved only him...i love him lyk anything ...and uskeliye kuch bhi karoongi...

kr: woah!!!! typical lovers ...😊

sh: jab tum pyaar karogi na tab pata chalega...

kr: pyaar??? huh...not my types...


after 50 mins krisha enterd

sw: arey das min pehle hi???

sh: rey is ri8 she is very talented...aur mujhe bore bhi hone nahi diya...

kr: thanks sharon...

rey: so kriya sketches khatam...

kr: haan rey bas thoda discuss karna hai tumse...

rey: guys dnt mind if we

sw: carry on we are fine ...

kriyaansh sat on nearby couch and started discussing while discussing both were so close to each other that if they would turn at a tym towards each other they would end up in a kiss on lips...

swaron looked at each other and then at them and smiled

finally after 20 mins of discussion they finalised ...

rey: wow kriya teri dimaag toh bohut acha chal raha hai...

kr: what do u mean rey...

rey: yahi ki u dnt have brain...

kr: huh???? she turned her face to other side...

rey: oh gussa ...sorry...

kr: sharon finally ye...

she was annoyed and tried to get up when rey pulled her back to the couch,...

kr: kya hai??😡


rey: arey sorry baba...ab gussa chodo...apne frnd se kya gussa...

kr: sorry sir aap mere boss mai aur mai aapki PA

rey: wat???? arey sorry bola na...

sh: kk aapki ye jhagda chodo aur hame ye batao ki kya finalise kiya...

kriya showed and explained them...and swaron were abt to leave


sw: by the way rey yaad haina papa ki profit aayi aur no.5 se seedha no.1 pe pohunchi...

rey: i also wished him tere jaisa nahi...

sw: so aaj humne papa keliye surprise party arrange ki ...so come sharp 7:30 kk rey and kriya i want u at 6:30

kr: mai ...??? mai kyun???

sh: kyun ki tum meri frnd ho aur tumhe aana hai...

kr: acha theek hai adress batado...

sh: chill yaar rey will pic u up..kk rey ..chal bye...

they left//..

kr: arey par...

rey: baatcutter...

kr: sorry sir par mera naam kriya hai ...

and she went to her cabin...

rey went to priya..

pr: sir kya hua??? kriya toh gusse mei lag rahi hai...

rey: arey sweeti maine toh bas kaha ki she dont have brain..

pr: aww!!!! sir ye toh galat baat hai..

rey: hmm...joke tha yaar ...chalo mujhe uska adress do...and haa abhi jo aaye the swayam and sharon they r my best buddies so unhe bhejdena kabhi bhi...no need of my permission...

pr: kk sir...and ye lijiye kriya ki adress...

evening...


rey picked kriya she was looking fab

all the way rey tried to manaofy kriya finally she smiled and they enjoyed a lot and came back...
...

one day~~~~


sh: u know swayam rey mein bohut badlav aaya hai...

sw: haan lagta hai kriya ki wajah se...i thin they love each other ...

sh: par realise nahi karte..

sw: karte nahi karti...

sh: wat do u mean..???

sw: sharon jab ham pehle din office gaye the na then

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sw: rey i think ur loving her...

rey: think nahi bhai karta hun...

sw: wat??? kabse??

rey: jisdin wo yahan aayi thi...uski attitude..uski style ...uski cuteness. tabhi gir gaya...

sw: really???? cnt believe reyaansh singhania ko first sight mei pyaar hogaya wo bhi ek ladki se...

rey: abey wat do u mean pyaar toh ladki se hi karoonga na...

sw: toh usey batadiya???

rey: nahi yaar pata nahi kaise react karegi know abhi abhi fnds bane ...i dnt want to spoil the whole relation...

sw: hmm...

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sh: wat??? rey bhi ???

sw: rey bhi matlab??? kriya bhi???

sh: haan actually usi din...

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sh: kriya ...ek baat poochun??

kr: haan bolo..

sh: galat mat samajh na ...do u lyk rey???( asked hesitatingly)

kriya looked instantly...

kr: sharon actually mai kisise koi bhi secret share nahi karti but pata nahi kyun i wanted to share with u plzz kisiko..

sh: u can trust me...not even to rey

kr: hmm...actually mai rey ko like nahi love karti hun...

sh: wat??? she almost spitted out the water she was drinking..
k..kab se??

kr: pehle din se...wo hai hi aise ki koi bhi ladki drool karti hai unpe...

sh: toh use bataya???

kr: no sharon ...mai unki PA hun...i cnt dream more...koi bhi boss apne PA se itna friendly nahi rehta par rey wo rehte hai... i dnt want to loose this relation...

sh: hmm... as u wish...

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sw: pagal hai donon ...

sh: haa pyaar karte hai par jaante nahi ...sw: i have a plan
sh: wat???

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its a sunny day kriya was in her cabin sketching something...rey was roaming here and there finally he ended up looking at kriya 4rm his cabin...

he gently carressed the glass in which she was visible sitting in her chair...

kriya after smtym felt tired and sweating...she looked here and there and opened her top most button and leaned back on her chair never realising the pair of eyes on her...

here rey was getting restless as some of her oncovered chest was revealed ...he cluthched his hands into a fist trying to cntrl himself...

he slowly looked at her face and got lost in his dream land...after 5 mins kriya checked the watch and as its tym to show him the sketch she buttoned her shirt and went to rey's cabin and as usual without knocking she entered ...as soon as she entered she saw rey still caressing the glass and fully lost in her that he never realised that she was no more in her cabin...she then saw and was shocked ...she shouted..

kr: REY!!!!!!!😡 sharam nahi aati ek ladki ke cabin me aise jhankte hue???

rey slowly moved towards her pulled her towards him by waist...

slowly went to his table and informed prya

rey: priya ...im in an imp disscussion with kriya dnt allow anyone..kk???

kriya looked at him with wide eyes...

after the call ended..

kr: ( angry tone) rey ye kya kar rahe ho chodo ...chodo mujhe aur koun si disscussion...and sharam nahi aayi mere cabin mei aise dekhte hue...

rey: never ...he strtd kissing her neck...

kr: rey...( trying hard to breath)

rey: shh...he slowly opened her top button ...

kr: rey ye kya??

rey: shhh...gng closer to her lips suddenly only mm distance...
rey: u look stunning lyk dis...

kriya blushed...

rey: tumhe pata hai tumhe aise dekhke mujhe kya karne ka man kar raha hai??

kr: kya???

he gently ushed her on to the couch unbuttoned three of his buttons and layed on her and kissed her neck...

he placed wet kisses on her neck .,jawline ,cheeks and bit the tip of her ear making her to arc herself more into him...he slowly came down and kissed her exposed chest ...she felt s if some one was cutting her skin...where ever he kissed that area burned...she clutched his hair tight and pulled him up...

kr: rey ye...ye app kya...( breathing hard)

rey: dnt disturb baby...

kr: rey...she pushed him back and got up buttoning her shirt...he pouted and looked away she came to him slowly buttoning his shirt she spoke...

kr: rey kya hua??? gussa ho mujhse...

rey stood and went 4rward...

rey: u dnt trust me...

she came 4rward ..face to face to him and said buttoning his shirt...

kr: its a lie...and u know it rey...bas its not the right tym...

rey smiled at her and slowly pulled her towards him holding her by his two arms as she just placed her hands on his chest...

rey: i love u...

kr: thank u ...

rey: u r supposed to say it back...but i think u dnt love me...

kr: rey mai aapse pyaar karti hun ya nahi aapko pata hai...she pouted...

rey: toh bataddo na ...uss din bhi nahi bataya...

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rey: ( in car) : baatcutter u look beautiful...

kr: thank u sir but my name is kriya( still in angry tone)

rey: arey sorry baba...

kriya just turned her face away...rey stopped the car near a park( deserted) ...she came out and looked around..

kr: party kaha hai...???

rey: wo park ke andar jaana padega...

kr: par shor bhi nahi hai..naahi lights...

rey: party saath baje ko ab toh sirf 6 baje hai...aur surprise party jo hai...

kr: really ???? how weird...

rey: toh chale???

kr: ji S...I...R..

she stressed sir and went in...rey sighed and followed...its infact a huge park...kriya walked through a distance and stopped finding noo sighs of a party area ...she turned and bumped into rey who was ri8 behind her...she said sorry and moved back...

kr: rey party kaha par hai???

rey: wo actually party yaha par nahi mei toh bas tumhe sorry kehna chahta tha...

he said scratching his head...

kr: wat???😡... im leaving...

rey: kriya sorry...itni choti baat pe itna gussa???

kr: choti baat???? huh...aapkeliye choti baat haina toh chod dijiye...im gng bye...

as she moved frnt rey placed his hand on her left shoulder...this was the first tym they touched each other...both felt that their knees gave off...kriya breathed hard as rey gulped the sensation...rey recovered and spoke in husky tone( cant help kriya se contact mei hai toh automatically voice mei romantic feel aajati haina rey ko😛😆)

rey: kriya im sorry...

kr: ( still breathing hard) its kk...

rey quickly came in frnt of her and hugged her in excitement...

but soon he realised and both were shocked...they were still hugging ...rey slowly pulled back to see kriya...she looked down her face with no expression..,... rey was totally lost in her...he slowly blowed air on her face ...she closed her eyes and her lips shivered...rey smiled upon knowing his effect on her...he slowly moved frward and kissed her eyelids...she clutched his collar tight...then he kissed her chin...and pulled her towards him by waist slowly...he looked at her and LLHH began...slowly he whispered I LOVE U...she blushed to core and looked down...rey was amused by her reaction...

rey: that means u accept my proposal...??( he asked excited)

she simply smiled and pushed him and strtd running...but he pulled her towards him ...she crashed into his chest...her both hands into a fist and placed on his chest as his hands surrounded her waist and she was looking down...he moved 4rward 4r a kiss...she turned left...he went left but she went ri8...and again this continued 4r 2-3 tym...finally rey cupped her face...and moved frward 4r a kiss...she was still looking down with her shivering beautiful rosy lips...he slowly placed his lips b/w hers...better to say his upper lip b/w hers and her lower lip b/w his...he slowly sucked her lip...she remained froze and didnt respond...he slowly squeezed her waist ..she breathed hard ...and thus her upper lip touched his...this was a magical sensation fr her...soon her both lips met his she lost her balance and her legs gave up...he pulled her soo close to him and looked into her eyes never leaving her lip...she finally looked into his seductive eyes ...finally got lost in his and responded kissing him back...after a long tym their lip lock kiss ended...rey slowly layed down making her upon him and then just touched her lips with his...this tym she responded quickly and took him into a wild kiss...both rolled kissing each other finally pulled back layed beside each other breathing hard and looking into the sky...after smtym rey saw her he was abt to get upon her and wanted to make love when they sensed a light on them...they looked that way and heard a whistle and a voice came...

police: koun hai waha???

kr: rey police ab kya kare??( hyper)

rey: shh...come with me...

he pulled her along with him they ran as the police chased them finally he hid themselves behind a big bush ...as soon as the police crossed they slowly escaped 4rm there and as soon as they reached the car rey drove it lyk maniac..finally after gng to a distance he stopped...both were panting less of running and more of tension...both looked back then at them and burst into laugh...

rey: ( suddenly with husky tone) : u taste too sweet...correct moment kharab kardiya uss budde ne...

kriya blushed and hit him on his chest...and hugged him resting her head on his chest...

rey: kriya maine i love u kehdiya..u dnt reply ????


kr: (s he looked at him) ye 3 words mereliye bohut precious hai ...sahi tym aane pe kahungi...

rey just smiled

rey: i will be waiting sweet heart...

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kr: sahi tym aane pe kahungi

rey: aakir kab aayega ...???( pouting)

she encircled her arms around his neck and reys hands around her waist ...their nose touching each others...

kr: dnt pout ...u look too cute...and haan jaldi hi aayega..he ubbed her nose against his ...both were smiling at each other when the door opened suddenly...both looked that way and fliched back on seeing ranvijay...he stood there fuming and back of him came swaron( swayam's plan to tell to rey's dad)

rey: d..dad ..app..

ranvijay told him to stop by showing his palm and his gaze fixed on kriya...

he walked upto her...

rv: u love him???😡

kriya was silent and looking down...

rv: shouted.: i asked do u love him???

kriya was taken aback ...she fliched back slightly...

rey: dad uski koi galti nahi hai pehle maine hi..

rv: shut up rey mai isse baat kar raha hun😡
now answer me miss.kriya ghai...

kr: ye...ye..yes sir... her eyes blurred out...

rv: wow!!!!!!!!!! aakhir mera beta pyaar mei gir hi gaya at last ...

he shouted to kriyaansh 's shock and hugged swaron...

rv: thank u guys after all tumlogon ki wajah se i atlasst got my daughter in law...he said eyeing kriya...who was gaping at them as rey...

rv gave a huge smile to her...

rv: i m proud of myself maine socha tum mere bete ko apni kaam se cool banasakti ho par tumne toh mere khadoos bete ko romeo banaliya...improud of my selection ...he tapped his shoulder..

kriyaansh ki tubelight jali and both were on 9th cloud...

kriya blushed and thus swaron greeted kriyaansh and they spoke some stuff ...finally rv said..

rv: kk kriya as u know my son is already 29 ...mai ise thoda aur responsible banana chahta hun ..so shaadi jald hi rakh lenge...

rey: kriya tumhare family kaha rehti hai...i never met them...

kriya stiffened...

kr: ( feared) rey i know it was cmng...actually rey maine apna identity chupaya aapse ...infact sabse..

all: wat???😕

kr: ji sir wo actually kuch reasons ki wajah se mujhe apna identity chupana pada i never knew ki mai rey se pyaar karoongi...actually mai kriya ghai nahi ...mai KRIYA RAIPRASH hun...GOUTAM RAIPRAKASH ki beti...

rv: aur meri dushman ki beti...😡

all looked at him shocked...most was kriya...

rv: aisa kya dekh rahi ho???? mere bussiness ki sabse bada rival tera dad hi toh hai..hum 15 yrs se dushman hai...

( guys rey's dad and kriya's dad own a construction industries..and these both always fight to be in the fisrt place...kriya never knew coz she was never intrested in construction and vagera...and yes she is LENCY...her nick name ...which her dad kept seeing her dance...and as he called her lency when he first took her to the NY insti all called her the same...)

kriya heart smashed ...tears rolled down her eyes...rv looked seriously at her...

rey: dad...toh????( he asked broken)

rv: toh kya rey...ye jo khadi hai na yahi batayegi ki toh kya hoga ab...she knews my deciosion...kyun miss. kriya RAIPRAKASH...he stressed ...

kriya got his decision she tookof her id plced it on the table and walked to wards the door ...as soon as she passed rey she stood still and turned back and hugged him tightly...rey too responded ...

kriya finally pulled back and looked at him..

kr: i love u rey...

rey was shocked...he didnt understand that he should be happy or sad...

rey: i lov...

she closed his mouth...

kr: nahi rey mat kaho i dnt deserve it...yeah i dnt deserve it ...i dnt desrve it...i dnt deserve u...

she said crying as she walked back and finally ran out...rey broke down and fell on floor...

kriya directly went to her house( itne din wo cohte se appartment mei rehti thi but now she went to her own house...)
as soon as she entered goutan stopped her..

gr: kriya mei ye kya sun raha hun tum itne din uss ranvijay ki bete ki p..a ... bani thi...beta kya zaroorat this...u know u dnt deserve to be pa ...u desrve more...

kr: lost in her thought...ri8 dad ...i dnt deserve it...i dnt deserve it...now she lost control and shouted crying...i dnt deserve anything dad...i dnt deserve HIM...i dnt deserve him...

repeating the line she ran upstairs to her room ...and locked it behind and cried hard...




ufff!!!!!!! bohut lamba ri8...i think bore hogaye...phir bhi cmnt kardo plzz...aur like bhi 😳


precap:

kr: rey kuch karo na plzz...

rey: ( sad) kriya mai kuch nahi kar sakta...u know na mai dad ke khilaaf nahi jaa sakta...im sorry kriya...i think we r not meant to be together...bye...

~~~~ call disconnected~~~~~

kr: rey plzz...plzz...kuch karo...she sat down crying...



hehe...ab dimaag ki aur fry hogi...umm...yummy ...im loving it...😈

pms on the way...😃

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Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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awsomme updat deetha it was wikked u can even say it was baad finally kriyaansh sed der confession totally awsomme yeaar precap sounds a bit scry wnder where kriya gnne oh weell waiting for next 1 and thnx for pm

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