when kriya returned ff part 19 page 115 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Nice update:-)pm me wenever u update d nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Short but sweet update and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
was awesum start...thnx 4 d pm..n lemme guess...sheetal's taking kriya 2 st.louis...kriya ka reaction dekhne layak hoga...oopss padhne layak..😆
so pm me wen u update nxt part...😊
Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Nice Sully btw don't forget to make an Index.


Hmm Kriya is gonna be hell shocked
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
heyy guyys watssupp m bk i didnt want to update 2day but then i thought u guys mght wanna read on and by seeing all the likes and comments i wanted 2 continue guys keep giving commnts lyk dis and i will update regularly am still updating eventhough i gt a exam 2mrww oh well enough of my bak bak and let me continue hope u guys lyk dis 1 2
and btw guys this ss mght turn into an ff so if u want me 2 then plz do tell me
part 2
sheetal and kriya were in the car but kriya was really bored so she strted to look outside the window whilst sheetal was driving she found the road very familier and she tought
kriya ( in mind): yeh road jana pehchana sa kyun lagraha hai mujhe then she asked sheetal where are we going plz tell me kriya kinda knew the place but she still asked
sheetal : yeh lo agayee mera colledge kriya turned around to see it and in big it was written ST LOUIS
kriya was well shokedd 😲
kriya : yeh tum mujhe kaha layi ho u knw i dont wanna join colledge specially not this one phir kyun tum mujhe yahaa layi ho
sheetal : woah woha calm down kriya i knw wat had happened with u and becuse of that u dont want to come here but kriya those friends of urs must hav gne itss been long nw so jus cum ok
( but sheetal knew they were still there but she had to lie to kriya)
shetal : toh chale andar?
kriya : she was not keen on it but sed ok lekin ek shart par ill stand in the corridor whilst you go give ur wrk in am nt cumng rght in got it
sheeatal: ok meri maaa ab chal
kriya stepped out from the car she felt a sudden change the same change she felt a year ago she was thnkng ke abhi tak colledge wahi hai kuch nahi badla tha sab kuch waisa hai
kriya: hai universe ji plz dont mke any of thm be inside plz meri help karna
sheetal : chal apni universe ji koo baad mein yaad karna andar chal
kriya : angry ha chalrahi hoon but im tellling u ill never forgive you for this😡
sheetal and kriya walked in kriya was feeling really strannge
sheetal : kriya tu yahi rukh ill go and gve my work in ok
kriya : ok but cum quik kriya was really scared from inside she didnt want ny1 2 see her jus then one of her old classmate passed by
girl : kriya omg tum yahaaa kya karahi ho god r u bk plz say yh
kriya : plz plz calm down dont say it loud no i am nt back i jus came with my friend and plz dont tell no1 plz ok
girl : no dnt wrry i wnt but plz cum bk i reaall miss u and ur dancing but u have changed
kriya : good or bad way
giel : obviously good way u look so pretty
kriya : thnnx
girl : ok ill see u around byee
and the girl leaves from there kriya was getting really scred becuse if she saw one of her classmate then her friends might be here to so she quikly rang sheetal but she wasnt piking up
kriya : plz pik up the phone quik plzzz
just then the princi was walking in the same corridor and kriya quikly turned around
kriya : plz universe ji help karna plz help me
but princi could see kriya face from the side
princi: kriya tum yahaan tum kab aayi still shocked
kriya : heloo sir woh mein meri friend ke saath ayi hoon sheetal
princi: oh yh u joining colledge
kriya : no no sir just come with her
just then sheetal comes
sheetal : hello sir i nneded to give u this my work
princi : oh yh thnx btw it was nyc sseeing u kriya wish u could cum bk
kriya : thnx sir
princi : sheetal well u see me in my office plz i need to talk and you 2 kriya come along
kriya : sir me but y
princi : just cum plz
kriya goes with sheetal hesitatingly
as soon as they both enter the office ders people already there in the office
princi : oh its gd u guys are here 2
and they all turn around but kriya is rite behind sheetal she has not entered
sheetal : heyy guys
people: heyy
just then kriya enters and evry1 is left with a shoked face
to be continued...
precap : who are they and why are the people shoked?
to knwww wait for next update
and plz tell me if i should change it to an ff??
need more then 30 lyks and every1 comments then i wll continue next update i wanna do it on page 15 so lets see if u can😆
Edited by aishasully - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome update...loved it very much
finally kria entered st.louis
and that people in the office is i guess the D3 gang
waiting eagerly for the next part
continue soon

and i will be very happy if you will convert this SS into FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
gosh even u started to ask for demands why aisha why but it was an amazing update and yaay my idea worked yaay
and yeah see i told u it is an amazing idea
and yeah also hope that it is the weaklings and dazzling she sees

and thanks for the pm

and yeah it was an amazing updaet and yeah will try to get it to pg 15
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update 2 continue n change 2 ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome update...loved it very much

finally kria entered st.louis
and that people in the office is i guess the D3 gang
waiting eagerly for the next part
continue soon

and i will be very happy if you will convert this SS into FF


yeah it was aweswome and i also loved it

and yeah finally
and i guess the same
and me too
yeah she will do i wil make sure

and yeah also i want it to be ff as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
awesome update aisha it's superb...
iam really waiting for your next update...please update fast and please make it into ff please...
and i guess it is weaklings and dazzlers...

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