Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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Tinu

@007jindal

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

haaayeee superbbb
and this lines

"JAB JO BURA KAHAA, USKA KOI
MATLAB NAHI,
JAB JO BURA KIA, USKA KOI MATLAB
NAHI,
ISS PYAAR MEIN SAHI AUR GALAT KA
KOI MATLAB NAHIN,
BAS EK CHEEZ KA MATLAB HE,
KI MEIN HAMESHA HAMESHA...

are killer...i m so dead...

lovd it

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

aww amazing one loved it

poor arnav why is everyone testing his patience

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

just loved the flow smitha its very good
thanks for the update and pm

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Sumi

@mumz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

very well written work...keep looking out for the next update...You bring the characters to life...their emotions

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Gosh...your writing always makes me cry...
Both have been through so much and they finally have their happy time...thanks for such a beautiful story...

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

WOW Smita i loved it!! 😳 i love rain and ArHi on rain is a treat😍 it was beautiful! gosh.. i hope Khushi's confusion gets clear before marriage!! 😳
and poor Arnav.. but i am sure he will end up in the function..wont he? 😆😉😛
and aww he said it finally! i was so angry in that Heer-Ranjha act that he didnt finish his line but thanks to you that you made him do that 😍
i love how you relate things with past! 😳
continue soon😍
cant wait for it 🤪

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Great update hopefully Khushi will be doubtfree on her wedding day although they are justified with the way he ttreated her before. Arnavs Heer Ranjha lines were brilliant wonder how he will get to the sangeet. Cant wait for the next updates.

Thanks for the pm