FF: Indecent Proposal [Thread 2 - Pg 162]

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Omg I'm in love with this FF... I just hoped that yu would update and Voila! Yu did!:D
Great update..absolutely amazing... Khushi was awesome...!!!!!and Arnav...*sigh* I'm speechless 😳

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iamtopper

@iamtopper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

hehehe... the last part was really funny...

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

hahah awesome part! go khushi! :)

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

I don't think I can explain any further he much I'm in love with this FF! I loved how you described their first 'encounter', it was perfect for them. And then afterwards when she slept in his arms and cried. Aww my heart went out to her!
I love your Arnav! He's fabulous and all 'I get what I want when I want' and please keep him that way, it makes the story so interesting to read as their personalities clash and they fight for control. Well Khushi fights for a little tiny wad of control that Arnav is unwilling to relinquish.
And yes the spark that is Khushi was just wonderful hahah loved how she only made herself breakfast, yesss!
Eeek already looking forward to the next amazing chapter, you've raised the bar in this chapter! And hope the busy days pass quickly! :)
Thanks so much for the update and PM, really appreciate it. :')

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Great update. So glad Khushi enjoyed her breakfast. 😆 He may control her some aspects of her life but that our Khushi has to lose her spunk. Loved the update.

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veil_of_roses

@veil_of_roses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

hahaha last part was fun...tit for tat...plz PM me...

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

I don't think I approve of Arnav's actions.. I am not talking about them having sex but about the fact that Khushi just had to go along with it without having any say. She knew what was coming but may be she could have been given more time?? He obviously is attracted to her and wants her but how could he be so clinical??

I was expecting it to happen although not on the first night of her 'employment'!! I suppose the clue is the title, it is an indecent proposal and it hardly matters whether it is tonight or in 2 weeks or 4 weeks or 4 months!!

Liked Khushi's pragmatic approach to the whole situation...

Absolutely loved her rejoinder at the breakfast table!!

Arnav bitwa you might have had your way last night but you are in for a surprise!!

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#748

loved this chapter!!!!!!

can't wait to see khushi in her full force,

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

Great chapter. Really well written.

I expected that they would 'do it' soon but i didn't expect it on the first night but it seems that neither did he. Although this deal was meant to humiliate and break her spirit, i'm glad he was gentle and took into consideration that it was her first time. He is obviously attracted to her but this proves that he has a soft spot for her too.

Felt bad for Khushi but i like her positive attitude. Loved the ending 😆 Khushi is definately going to make him go crazy. I'm glad she didn't lose her spark.