Burning in your Love (Parts 4, 5, 6, & 7) - Page 23

Ooohhh

So Mr Raizada is having problems with control...lol

An amazing update sweety

awesome!! so you are doing the wedding!! thankyuo so much...:D

smita, have i said it before? i will say it again. you are outstanding! i love the way you merge emotions, the original storyline, passion and stay true to A and K's characters as well.

Ossum possum!!!

I'm loving this, Smita!! :D :D

The concept on the whole.. And the way you wrote it, is too good :D

Thanks for the PMs. . .. :)

Originally posted by: smitar

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He said in a low voice, "Khushi, I have hurt you many times in these 13-14 months, more times than I can count. My words, my actions...I don't know why, Khushi...when I feel that you are going away from me, I lose control over myself. My anger rules me. And as you and Di have often said, when I get angry, my brain stops working. I react blindly, in reflex, like an animal ...dropping you from a height in my office, forcing a contract on you, making you do impossible tasks, assaulting you in Lucknow, taunting you after you got engaged ... I have done many things to you that I am ashamed of, Khushi ... and one of them was insulting you when you were wearing a lehenga in a boutique when you had gone shopping with Di & Lavanya.

Do you know how beautiful you looked that day, Khushi? Like a doll...like a dream come true...a fairy on earth ...and I wanted to touch you to see if you were real. But when I reached out my hand, you pulled back. I had been touching you whenever I wanted, where ever I wanted for months...you had never protested. In my mind you were mine ... to touch and hold. And when you moved away from my touch, I knew you had done it because you thought of yourself as an engaged woman. The very thought that you could put another man above me, could give another man right over you...it was the worst blow you could have dealt me. For one moment, I lost it. I don't know what I said ... it must have been something terrible... I am known for my caustic tongue...and it is never more caustic than when I am hurt...It took your tears to bring me back to my senses."...

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Khushi smiled happily, unaware that she had just pulled her lion's tail.

Awww... cant tell u how good it was Smita...

• the teasing with Rose... gave me goosebumps...
• the apology in blue is the best ... loved it so much
  
• and of course m super curious about the Red part ... ahem 😉

Cheers,

Monsi

" Do you know how beautiful you looked that day, Khushi? Like a doll...like a dream come true...a fairy on earth ...and I wanted to touch you to see if you were real. But when I reached out my hand, you pulled back. I had been touching you whenever I wanted, where ever I wanted for months...you had never protested. In my mind you were mine ... to touch and hold. And when you moved away from my touch, I knew you had done it because you thought of yourself as an engaged woman. The very thought that you could put another man above me, could give another man right over you...it was the worst blow you could have dealt me. For one moment, I lost it. I don't know what I said ... it must have been something terrible... I am known for my caustic tongue...and it is never more caustic than when I am hurt...It took your tears to bring me back to my senses.""

Lovely lovely lovely!! You should seriously write a book!!👍🏼

Wow - pls PM w update !!!