FF: A Thin Line Between Love & Hate Ch. 2 - Pg. 15 - Page 24

sorry for my lateness! Busy with exams and other crap so I might be late in catching up with your work but rest assured I will! ok I am loving this truly. You written the conflict beautifully. Khushi's bit at the end got to me-brings back memories. I love your angle on this, waiting eagerly for the next update pretty please 😳

Hey!

Awesome update... Iam loving the way it's going...
Thanx for the pm

glad to see you back here!! :)
loved the start!!

you're re-writing it? YAYYY! It's beautiful, Shreya. Continue SOON
ohh and btw, love the copyright statement!

Luved ittt! This one is different frm d usual ones whr kushi knws shyam betrayed her

hey! 😃 I'm here! to give you a lamba sa comment and make your day! first off I am so sorry that I have not commented, or anything, I have reached my pre-exam period! wooptido! SO I am sorry 😕 really 😕 but I am here, I did comment on your blog in regards to the first chapter, so I will comment on the second chapter here! 😆😃 I L O V E D it! bloody heck Nanav just likes to get ahead of things, has he ever believed her? and shyamu 😡 grr! thaat man, I am going to roast him on the barbecue then feed him to my cat, actually I don't think he would like that 😕 but yeah khushis outrage was amazingly written! 😃 and the fact that she responded to it aswell 😃 loved that, but Arnav being Arnav does not know what to say and when 😡 I love the entire structure of the chapter and its flow. I cannot wait for the next one, please do pm me I am eager for the next lot of hate&love from these two! 😆 also DON'T DELETE ME! 😳

-Aashifa 😆

interesting...waiting to see your take on it...