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Like all three parts so far! please continue 😃

It was really good! A good way to slowly introduce the plot and back sotry without giving too much away. My only criticism is that it was short. But I think I'm just being greedy. 😉

Payal is very mysterious although her intentions towards Arnav are very clear...cant wait to find out more oh and tit was so cute how he tied her sari! 😆beautiful update😃!

I love this arnav. Don't get me wrong I love the serial wala arnav too.
But this arnav is different. The way that he already is a little possessive about her, the way he dislikes payal, the way he just realised that something fishy is going on with khushi's life. I know it's not gonna happen soon but I am waiting for him to find out and also for them to fall completely in love with each other.

So payal finally has some role in the story. She sounds really twisted here. I loved the ArHi scenes. I loved the easy friendship they both have developed and was glad that khushi was not flustered or embarrased to ask arnav anything or standing in front of him in her petticoat and blouse.
As I said earlier, keep this understanding like this only and thanx for the pm

Payal being a dark character intruiges me.. and those scars.. intruige me further! Khushi doesnt know how to don a sari, I dont blame her, tough things those! I dont know how to do them either, nope sticking to salwar kameez! I like how they are so comfortable with eachother, talking, letting another do the sari pleats, sleeping so comfortably! And I wonder whether arnav is gonna try and figure out whats going on between the sisters? Im glad that he at least noted that somethings fishy! I loved when he said: Nak-chadhi! Sooo cute! And herbal- essences does that to your hair, makes it smell so fresh and pretty. And I must congratulate on your use of man-beautiful! ahahahah I used it once or twice and people look at me like im mad.. once again, I dont blame them! Lovely update! Looking forwardd to morre more moreee! :D

nice update.want to know about khushi's past

wow Arnav is helping his wiffy to wear a sari😉. kafi experienced hai. 😆Payal ko shyam ki jaggah de di wah.Please update soon ab sabar nahi hota yaar baki story padne ka.