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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Res for comment...😃

yeepieee...I am first🥳

EDITED...😃

Hafieee...First of all toh I missed u so much yaar🤗...its been so long since we talked to each other😭 ...Now coming to the update...Loved it..Written beautifully as always.👏.too dark and intense...Though I am feeling bad for Khushi but somehow also Understand Arnav's Situation😳...I just love the end...Arnav's back out is quite Surprising but I just love it...Khushi's realization is also treat to read...You are a rock star and u proved it again..Do write more sweetheart😃... Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

The ending was really nice. They both realize the unspoken part of the other. Continue soon.

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

i am here

*edited*

i was holding my breath the entire time !! i was really scared !!

i am glad he still has some good part left in him,he didnt force her!!

payal and anjali sensed that something is wrong na?? i am pretty sure they will do the needed findings now!

this devil self suited arnav very much!!

awesome update dear!! i loved it

please continue !!

and thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by crazy44 - 13 years ago

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

wow!

i loved this OS..! just saying i loved it would be an understatement..!

i have heard a lot about ur talent as a writer..but never got an opportunity to actually got through some of your work..!

and my dear, you are an amazing writer..! is that something new? :P

NO! who won't say you are amazing? you might have heard that like so many times but still i would like to say that you are a brilliant writer!

god's gift..! that's right.

i loved the way you described Arnav's emotions and the poem and the end which you wrote all by yourself was just splendid!

i am actually short of adjectives..! :)

*standing ovation! * nothing less than that is what you deserve!

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

This dark side of arnav really suits him. I totally loved the update. Want more so continue. Thanks for the pm.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

aww atleast he didn't force himself

i wonder why he's such a dark shadow

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hatathbristi

@hatathbristi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Well written.. last few lines are really nice and giving the future direction of the story...

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

it was just amazing...so well written dear...but y is he of such personality...very dark indeed...well it was just amazing..loved it immensely...thnx 4da pm dear..