About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37**

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Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Wow wonderful update...
Thanks 4 d pm

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Pissa99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

"No injury he had caused grieved her as much as the wetness of his eyes. A tear suspended on his eyelash dropped and she caught it on her finger. "

I have no idea how many times I read these two lines. These lines were just BEAUTIFUL!!

Another great update from you. I was totally in love with the part where she left her hand on top of his thigh..Aww!!

Thanks so much for the pm and quick updates...I wait for your updates everyday, reading your work make my day!

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Jahnvi Mehra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

ohh wonderful update...
i bet khushi is thinking wat m thinking..."m already convinced...n m nt leaving you...no need of another contract plzzz" 😃

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medha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

i loved khushis stand here...she spoke wat was in her mind n disd not regret it!the way Mr chopra narrated the whole thing was kinda funny to read from my pov...an another deal!i bet u cant ever take the businessman out o9f arnav singh raizada try as u might!!!

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Suchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Its beautiful.. absolutely ASR and Arnav.. very well written..

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hatathbristi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

👏Amazing updates,'I finished last 3 at one go...⭐️
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"Give me fifteen days to convince you not to leave me."
He is a true businessman n always will be...Again a deal ..to amend his misdeed and to improve and embark to the higher level of their relationship..

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Kookiemonster

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

You are like the best updater ever and now you have taken the story to anther level.

I am just loving it.

keep up the good work.

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sharanya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Awww poor Arnav thinks Khushi wants 2 leave him!!

Bechara.waiting for the next part

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Smita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Fabulous update! Just goes on to show how much Arnav & Khushi know and understand each other.

Parts that I loved:

Khushi not able to bear tears in his eyes.

Sometimes that was the role of a woman in love. To wait. - very true line!

Khushi realizing that the person who Arnav called has to b very unlucky as he would earn his wrath!

Khushi couldnt bear to see him suffer! Awww...!

That reasurring hand on thigh gesture in the car and hand squeeze in the conference room!

Mr. Chopra! I must say a very bold man to insult ASR's wife in his presence!

Arnav getting distracted at the memory of the almost kiss.

"We'll make a new contract in this same room," he prevented her from speaking by holding up his hand. "Give me fifteen days to convince you not to leave me." -This was the proverbial icing on the cake! 👏

Forgot to thank u for the pm! Thanks a ton! Continue soon..

Edited by Smita.M - 13 years ago

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

I don't think i'll ever be the first commenter :'(

I plan to stalk you for the next part! :D

*Edited*

Okay, even though I am a person who's never been in love, I still forgive Khushi for everything she did, in fact I applaud her for it. I understand that love is an emotion that makes people do things...that probably don't make sense half the time. And in this instance, a lot of people would have told Khushi to keep her pride and not forgive Arnav so easily. But the thing is (from what i gather) that Khushi has already forgiven him, she just wants him to know the pain she went through.

And by placing a hand on his thigh, she tried communicating to him, that I have forgiven you, and by looking out of the window instead at him she told him "but I am not going to take my words back".

Please correct me if I am wrong! :)

Wait, what? But she isn't going to leave him. Is she? Now i am confused. Does that mean that Arnav still hasn't understood that she just wants to share her pain? Does he think that she is still accusing and unforgiving? And that's why he assumes she is going to leave him?

Or is he making that contract to prove something to himself?

Do update soon! You have me totally, absolutely hooked to this story! :D

In fact I love all your works! :D

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago