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just read part 16 and 17...

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OMG piggy

An awsome awsome update... Just loved it to core... Very well written and emotion brought out very nicely... Really I could feel it... Geet's trick worked... He needs love to bring love in him which earlier Geet had not done in fear...

She took right step... Naan was hers and she will not share him now... She is gonna win...

First time saw human in 'mMaan. He is so touched that he remembers the small thing which he would have otherwise never remembered

Great going dear
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Thanks for the love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. If possible pls try to complete this thread as I want to post the next update in the new thread as it contains the twist which is really special😉 I promise to give u the next update as soon as this thread ends that means u can get the next update tomorrow also provided the thread ends
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PART 18

She got up happily and both of them continued chatting forgetting the limits of time as for that small moment Geet was successful in bringing back the original Maan from the personality of MSK

Both of them did not realize at what time they drifted off to sleep

Next Day

Geet opened her eyes as the refreshing sunbeams kissed her magical eyes and gave her the message of a new morning and a new hope

Yes this was the best morning of her life as after such a long time her eyes had found her paradise' Maan was sleeping peacefully holding her hand protectively in his strong grip' it seemed as if he did not wish to let her go even in his sleep

She knew that in the present scenario this thought was not a complete truth but yesterday night she had realized there is a sensitive, emotional and a love deprived Maan who is trying to hide behind the ruthless, selfish and ignorant MSK and this was the Maan whom she loved and she promised herself once again to bring back her very own Maan who was and will remain her most priceless possession

She caressed his hair lovingly and gave him a flying good morning kiss and slowly removed her hand from his strong grip without disturbing him

She goes to the washroom takes a bath and dresses herself in a simple yet elegant salwaar kameez' the X factor of her beauty was her simplicity and she complimented her mesmerizing form by taking a pinch of sindoor and placed it proudly in between the partition of her head

Geet: (thinking) Maan bahut hi jald har subah aap khud ye sindoor apni Geet k maang mein sajayoge [Maan very soon u will decorate my maang with the sindoor by your own hands daily]

She smiled at her innocent thought and kept on admiring her handsome husband for sometime

All of a sudden Geet got a mischievious idea she rushed to the kitchen and brought a huge jar of ice cold water and poured it completely on Maan's face

Maan: Tsunami Tsunami Tsunami

Geet: Haha Tsunami nahi buddu ye toh refrigerator ka thanda barafwala paani hai [Haha its not Tsunami infact it is the simple ice cold water of the refrigerator]

Without waiting for Maan's reaction Geet started laughing'she didn't even realize that Maan was in a trance yes he was completely lost in her innocent and magical laughter

She started making gestures through her hands and tried to enact how Maan had got up shouting Tsunami' oh she was looking like a pure angel whose one simple smile was enough to enlighten the day of any man

Maan did not realize when a small smile made way to his face'his hand automatically started approaching Geet but before he could touch her; Geet accidently kept her foot on the area where the water was spilled and she immediately lost her balance and landed on top of Maan on the bed

Their eyes meet and a spark was ignited

This was the first time that Maan and Geet were so close both of them could actually feel each other's warm breath on their skin

Geet was about to get up but Maan stopped her by holding her waist protectively' Geet looked into his eyes and she could see a hidden yet pure and innocent love for her in his deep dark brown mirrors

Yes this was the truth he loves her but the only problem was that he himself was unaware about this fact'Geet was trying to read the story of his heart through his eyes when all of a sudden her heart skipped a beat as Maan touched her face sensually and in the pretext of moving one of her locks allowed his finger to linger around her magical face shamelessly

She closed her eyes to live this moment completely

Maan replaced his finger with his palm and started caressing her face with utmost love ...Geet shivered as Maan's small finger touched her lower lip she was slowly getting drowned in his magical spell and same was the case with Maan he was also getting drowned in her simple and mesmerizing beauty

A voice from his heart was telling him that there is no need to stop' Geet is all yours; atleast once in your life listen to your heart u will never lose this bet' go ahead claim her she is yours and if she steps into your world your materialistic life will automatically become a paradise

For the first time in his life Maan wanted to believe his heart; he slowly started reducing the distance between their lips' Geet's chest started to move in a rhythmic fashion and her arm automatically started to move towards his neck and now she was waiting for that one precious moment which would mark the beginning of their blissful life

Maan was just about tocapture her lips when their romantic moment got disturbed due to a call on Maan's mobile' Both of them came back to their senses with this small disturbance

Geet got up immediately and turned her back towards Maan; she was holding herself responsible for this awkward situation' after few seconds Maan too got back to his wits and he received the call immediately

Geet: (thinking) Ye kya kar diya Geet badi mushkil se toh tujhe tere puranewale Maan ki jhalak dhikaye padi thi aur teri ye bevakoofi se agar Maan phir se naaraz ho gaye toh tu kya karegi? [What did u do Geet? With such a great difficulty you were successful in seeing a small glimpse of ur old Maan but with this act of yours if Maan gets angry then how will u proceed with your mission?]

Geet was totally lost in her thoughts by that time Maan had finished talking with the caller

Maan cleared his throat and tried to start the conversation but Geet was quick she turned around and splashed the remaining water that was left in the jar on Maan's face

Maan was totally shocked with Geet's actions

Geet gave a sweet smile and rushed towards the door

Geet: Ab pata chala Maan subah subah kisipar jab aap barafwala paani daalthe ho toh kaisa lagta hai ab dekhna gin ginkar badla lungi apni har sardi ka jo aapne mujhe taufe mein di thi yuhi mujhpar barafwala paani daalkar [Now did u understand Maan how does it feel when u pour icecold water on someone's face in the morning now it is time for settling scores Maan u will have to pay for each and every cold of mine that I had got due to your icecold bath]

She showed him a thumbs down and made cute gestures through her face and left the room

Maan could not stop laughing infact this was the first time that Maan was laughing whole heartedly

Maan: Pagli [Crazy girl]

He entered the washroom with a smile on his face

Geet: Maan humne jobhi waqt saath guzara hai aur aage job hi waqt saath guzarenge unn lamho ko leker naahi main kabhi sharminda honungi aur naahi aapko kabhi sharmindagi ka ehsaas hone dungi [Maan the moments which we will live together are special and I will make sure that none of us feels ashamed of our precious moments]

Geet: Maan aaj aapki aakhon mein maine apne liye pyar dekha mujhe toh ehsaas ho gaya ab bus aapko iss baat ka ehsaas dilana hai k aap mujhse pyar karte ho phir humare beech kabhi bhi koi duri nahi hogi Maan yeah aapki Geet ka vaada hai [Maan I could read the love that u possess for me in your eyes today the only thing that I have to do now is to make u realize about this love; once this realization strikes u I am sure there will be no distance between us we will be bonded for a lifetime forever]

She kissed her mangalsutra this mangalsutra was her strength in her mission to win her love'yes Maan was only hers and she will never allow anyone to snatch her love from her

She went to the kitchen to see the breakfast preparations

Maan got ready by that time and for unknown reasons he was feeling incomplete without Geet'it was strange Geet was away from his eyes for only few minutes but still he a fear of losing someone started dominating in his heart

He started searching for Geet in all the rooms and finally he felt as if someone had gifted him his life back as soon as he saw Geet in the kitchen

Maan: Geet tum kaha chali gayi thi main kabse tumhe dhund raha hoon aisa bhi koi karta hai kya? Main kitna darr gaya tha yun laga jaise maine tumhe kho diya kum se kum mujhe bata toh sakthi thina k tum kitchen mein ho? Mujhe akele chodkar jaane ki kya zarurat thi? [Geet where were u? I am searching for u from such a long time do u know I was so scared it seemed as if I have lost u forever'u could have atleast informed me that u r in the kitchen what was the need for u to leave me alone and go away from me?]

Maan spoke this entire sentence in one breath

Geet: Akela toh aap apni Geet ko chodkar gaye the Maan' main toh kal bhi aaphiki Geet thi aur aaj bhi aaphiki Geet hoon [U were the one who left me alone I am still the same Maan I belonged to u and I still belong to u]

Maan's heart cried in pain with this simple statement of Geet but Geet never wanted Maan to feel guilty hence she diverted the topic

Geet: Maan chaliye shooting k liye der ho rahi hai director sahab ka call aaya thana aur waise bhi aapki media waha pehle se maujood hogi toh hume aapke publicity k mission ko kamiyaab banane k liye waha jaana hi haina toh chale? [Maan we r getting late for our shoot Director Sir had given a call right I think we should leave as it is the media people would be waiting for us and if we need to boost your mission of gaining publicity then both of us should leave for the shoot right now]

Maan was least bothered about the publicity mission right now somewhere or the other the blindfold of his eyes was slowly getting removed he could see the hidden pain of Geet which she was trying to hide behind her angelic smile

It was never difficult for Geet to read Maan's mind she knew he was understanding her pain but right now she wanted to shower her Maan with her unconditional love and not pressurize him with the burden of guilt

She held Maan's arm with complete authority and gestured him to walk out of the house

Both of them arrive at the location for the shoot of their movie; as expected the media people were already present to poke their nose in their private life but Geet handled the situation perfectly

The director starts the shooting and everything was going on perfectly. It was now time for the lunch break

The spot boy gets lunch for Maaneet from a nearby restaurant

Maan wanted some sweet dish the spot boy could not manage to get any sweet dish as it was not available in the restaurant but instead he got honey for Maan

Maan was waiting for Geet as she had just entered her vanity van for few minutes

Maan: Jab tak Geet nahi aathi hai tab tak Honey pee letha hoon kuch thakawat dur ho jaayegi [Let me drink some honey till Geet arrives atleast a part of my tiredness would be gone]

Maan was just about to place the glass of honey near his lips when Geet hit the glass with her hand due to which the entire honey landed on the ground

Maan got angry with Geet's act

Maan: Geet ye kya batameezi hai? [What type of misbehavior is this?]

But Geet did not give him any reply infact she shouted on top of her voice and called the spot boy

Geet: Ye honey yaha kaun lekar aaya tha? [Who got this honey over here?]

Chandu: Main laya tha Mam [I was the one]

Geet: Tumhe zara sa bhi andaaza hai k tumhari ek naadani se mere Maan ki kya haalat ho sakthi thi? [Do u even realize that ur one silly mistake would have done a great damage to my Maan's health?]

Chandu and the entire movie crew was scared as this was the first time that had seen Geet in such an angry mood

Maan was also confused

Maan: Geet tum meri baat suno [Geet listen to me]

Geet: Maan aap beech mein mat boliye Geet k liye uske Maan se zyada important aur koi nahi hai aap jaante hona aapko honey se allergy hai phir bhi aap usse peene jaa rahe the aap itne laparwah kaise ho sakthe ho agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh main toh jeete jee mar jaatho na [Maan pls don't interfere in middle Maan is the topmost priority for Geet and Maan u r allergic to honey and u were going to drink it? How can u be so ignorant? What will happen to me if anything goes wrong with u ?]

Maan was shocked to hear her innocent confession' she was right she knows him better than any one else infact she knows him better than himself'

In the craziness of making money he had forgotten his very own existence and here was a girl who remembered every small thing associated with him'she knew the language of his breath as well as the desires of her heart

Geet was shouting at the entire unit for their negligence buther anger was forcing the hard selfish Maan to melt like a candle yes he was changing and he loved this gradual change in him

It took a lot of time for the unit to calm down Geet

The director signaled the entire crew to give some privacy to the couple

As soon as the crew left Geet turned around to face Maan and was just about to question him when Maan placed his finger on her lips

Maan: Geet ek baat batau main toh ye bhool hi gaya tha k mujhe shehed se allergy hai par tumhe yaad raha who bhi itna waqt guzarne k bawajood? [I myself did not remember that I am allergic to honey but this wasn't the case with u; u remember every small thing associated with me how?]

Geet kissed his finger which was placed on her lips and guided his hand towards her heart

Geet: Jo dil k kareeb hothe hai unhe ye faasle aapse dur leja nahi sakthe aapse judi hui har ek baat yaad hai mujhe aur marte dum tak yaad rahegi [Distance and time cannot separate your close ones from u; I remember each and every thing associated with u and I will never forget them till the last breath of my life]

This was the first time that Maan's heart felt cared and loved. He crushed Geet in his embrace and placed a loving kiss on her forehead as he was unable to voice the happiness and satisfaction of his heart through words

Geet knew today she was successful in breaking a major chunk of Maan's selfish nature ' Maan tightened the hug and Geet gifted him the peace of his heart by taking him in the magical folds of her love

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