OS: The Last Revealsion (Intense)

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Koeli

@Koeli

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+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: maanviluvzvirat
Aww amazing
Love how used the lines!
It was fantastic
Wish something like that happens in the show!

Its your line buddy and i was so addicted to it. I wanted to use it for arshi as i thought it totally fits in their situation. 😊

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Smita

@..Smita..

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Loved it to the core!

Very well written!👏

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Zania

@zaniax

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Brilliant os..it was really intense👏

& i Loved those dialouges specially the last part.

Thanx for d pm:)

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arshieverlastng

@arshieverlastng

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

appy u really touched my heart...ur awsome dear...the way u expressed is amazng...i dnt have words to say hw much i feel to ths os...i lovd it most than al of ur ff's.i dnt knw wat to say...i lovd it...i love u...ur mindblowng dear...

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Koeli

@Koeli

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+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ranipriyanka
appy u really touched my heart...ur awsome dear...the way u expressed is amazng...i dnt have words to say hw much i feel to ths os...i lovd it most than al of ur ff's.i dnt knw wat to say...i lovd it...i love u...ur mindblowng dear...

Oh pri thank you so much dear. this is my favourite too. i love it that you love it dear. 😳