Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

omg omg awsuuum update dear...loved it very much...wow he got her a ring and she wore red for him...wow simply beautiful n thnx 4da pm dear...

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

this was simply amazing!so beautiful...every little gesture n action so mindnumbingly significant for their relationship!

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Oh my god oh my god !!!! How just tell me how do u write it sooo BEAUTIFULLY !!! My heart seriously swells wen I read it !!! I m a die hard romantic n wen I read ur updates the smile never looses my face !!!
U dnt knw how diff it is to type dis for me nw !! I m overwhelmed wid soo much emotions !!!!
I felt nervous wid khushi, felt the admiration wid arnav , felt the pain wid both of dem n at last bt nt the least the pure JOY N HAPPINESS !!!
U r an amazinf fabulous writer !!! Just go an publish dis FF as a book n I swear I will buy all the copies !!! :)
AMAZING FABULOUS BEAUTIFUL SUPERB AWESOME LOVELY MESMERIZING ...n many more !!!!

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#854

awesome chapter!

love how you write what each of them is going through! Loved both of their surprises to each other!!

awesome.. I wonder how its going to be when khushi finally says i love you!

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#855

I loved this surprise surprise chapter it was beautiful
Khushi's surprise of wearing red and the bangles was great and all the nervousness and feelings were written exceptionally beautiful
Coming to Arnav's part it was mind blowing his reaction on seeing her the surprise he gave to Khushi abt the engagement was just wow
I just loved the whole update can't ask for anything else
Just update soonish

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

aww how romantic, that is brilliantly written. she wore his favorite colour and his bangles, aww how his heart swelled with love and pride.
cant wait for him to put the ring on her finger and i hope she confesses.
thanx for the pm and please continue soon

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#857

beautiful.. arnav is trying to right all the wrong he did..

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#858

Wow just wow

They got engaged!!!!!

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#859

aah ! the surprise update afterall ! :D

this was just beautifuuul ! Loved the beginning 'till the end, jittery Khushi waiting to go on her suprise date, both being flustered and awed seeing each other- esp. the rajkumar exceptionally 'staring' at his rajkumaari, old wounds re-opened, and then ... taaa-daahhh - the suprise: an engagemnent ring ! aaah ! Loved it tremendously !

Continueee, continueee ... ! Faab update seriously ! the red that she wore surprising him to the extent, as the ring surprised her ! are you going to continue with other rituals as well and re-doing them as her 'forever-wanted-dream-wedding' ! and Khush's confession has got to happen.. is it going to happen ?

I'm all the more exciteed ! <3

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#860

Wow! I'm in aabsolute awe of this story sweetheart! i am so glad I read this, took me some time but I finally ffinished it and i am so glad! beautiful! the surprises were lovely! I absolutely adore their sleeping arrangement, its so cute!