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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

Wow that was amazing...

Loved the whol surprise from kushis side and everyone mercilessly teasing her

Poor girl feel so bad oft hat she is been teased by all..

Ad eh way Arnav heart felt constricted looking at her in red

Wow. Nice feelings from both of them displayed to please a other

Loved it poor jewel maker

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#812

Wow, how romantic...what we cannot get on the show we are getting from you, so much love, awesome...love how she wears red and the bangles, those bangles to represent such happy times, the best part of the show...and the carriage and him fulfilling her dreams...super...

Thans for the pm. Feel bad for anjali though.

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Such a lovely update!
Thanks for the pm..

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#814

Loved Arnav's surprise. Pearls and diamonds are my favorite combination. And the pearl is reminiscent of the string he broke from her choli when they first met. Perfect.

And yes, we mothers tend to drag our girls to meet long-lost relatives before they go away for long stretches. That's your punishment for being away from mum for so long. How are we supposed to manage without you? So no complaining!!!😉

Good luck at uni.

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#815

What a fantastic Eidi you've given us with these fabulous updates, DE!!! 🤗

I've been waiting so eagerly to know what the surprise he'd planned for her was, I never imagined it would be something so simple, yet so exquisite and so fundamentally right! What a fabulous description of a woman in love!

How did you plumb into the depths of a complex, delusional mind like Anjali's and with such sympathy and understanding? You managed not only to make us understand the workings of such a mind but achieved the almost impossible- made us feel sorry for this unfortunate woman whom life has treated so badly.👏👏

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#816

👏👏thanks.awesome...lved iut...fabulous...👏👏👏

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

This was awesome! Thank you! Can't wait for the next one! 😊

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Shivani

@shivani15

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#818

FAB UPDATE

Loved it

👏

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#819

Ahahaha, I like the beginning, where Khushi is really nervous...all I can say is that what goes around, comes back to you...hence the repeated teasing of Khushi by her family members.

And when Arnav was driving, I seriously thought that they were headed to the dhabba, but you surprised me with the engagement ring. They did get engaged, but never properly.

Beautiful update!

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#820

Chapter 39

This time, she held the key which would unlock a Pandora's box of catastrophes upon the people she held closest to her heart. And the fear crippled her. Spurred by a reflex no different from snatching one's hand back from naked flame, these lines are so powerful, yet so poetic. Brilliant execution. The first part about Anjali literally gave me the shudders, I mean I admire her strenth of mind to quietly absorb the shock of who her husband really was, and yet live through it for so many days. Indeed, a very strong character.

And then Khushi's giddy happiness, the way you've described it by using those terms like, hoarde of butterflies, is just brilliant. I in fact felt so happy afetr reading that part. And then her singing Pyaar Hua, oh my, I can totally imagine her twirling about, dancing. Sigh, this part was beautiful.

Chapter 40

And the way you've described Khushi's nervousness, is remarkable. You have a knack of playing with the write words, forming up the most beautiful, yet simple sentences, yet convey to the reader what exactly the character is feeling. This story is a pure delight to read. And then Arnav complementing her, my goodness, I could've happily fainted after readin this part. Its like you gave us the crystal clear descriptions of what was going on in both of their minds, what they were feeling, exactly, so when Arnav told her she looked amazing, that scene sort of culminated brilliantly. Arnav and the playful mischeif he was pulling on dear Khushi, I'm lterally fanning my self here, *blushblush*. And then the part about the engagement, the ring, I am rendered speechless. It was just all so beautiful, so exquisite.