Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

OMG!!! Well first off thank you so much for the PM. When I got it I clapped my hands in glee like a small kid, no joke!

And I LOVE super duper LOOONG updates!!!! And this was just plan awesome! As soon as I got to the part where the coffee table shattered under the wrath of the hail I knew that was significant!

And Arnav's monologue was just phenomenal! That is EXACTLY how Arnav should be on the show! And Khushi's response to it was apt. She didn't say 'yes' but she isn't saying 'no' either!

LOVED IT!!!! Can't wait for the next update! :)

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

it was great on arnav part dat he voiced his feelings...

they were beautifully pen down...

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archana

@sarchanu

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

it was a really nice update

loved the show of emotions

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

WOW...seriously the last to parts were brilliantly written!

I was so amazed by the way you are able to depict the emotions of the characters. I really liked the scene when Khushi makes Arnav coffee and when Arnav gives Khushi's his mother's bangles.

Keep up the great work!

And also...congratulations on this second thread...you totally deserve this!

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

splendid! each scene flowed beautifully from one to the next, that was wonderful!

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Hey that was a super long update that was just superb!

So finally arnav spoke out all his feeling i'm so happy. He told all that he had in his heart.

Khushi will take time to overcome this n thats obvious but she has also started feeling. Was really when she took the bangles.

But it was really beautifully written. Update soon.