Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 - Page 46

Beautiful update! very well written..

Sorry for not reading so many of your updates before. I really liked the transition in khushi's feelings and how you had her slowly come out of her pit of sorrow and mistrust in arnav. She's finally happy and arnav finally has been able to almost completely redeem himself. I like how Payal thinks; she gave arhi on opportunity to be together

Where do you get such amazing metaphors from? FERRIS WHEEL?? That was beautiful!! Absolutely brilliant! :) It explains so much of their relationship, so well! :)

That was lovely :) I'm so happy for Khushi! She's finally as happy as she should be, glowing and sparkling as brightly as the moon and stars in contrast to the darkness of the night that was her life for some time. I can't wait to see what new stages Arnav's and Khushi's relationship reaches <3

Ahaa! And we come a full circle. With the confession and the hug. *sigh* Nafii.. you've got me day dreaming so early in the day! This was beautiful! And I love this Payal!! Her POV was brilliantly written! I mean.. All her misgiving about her sister's wedding, her genuine happiness and the way she had judged the man who is now her jethji! All her silence must count for some introspective thinking right? And that was very nicely portrayed! Haha! Even her references to Maamiji!

Arnav twirling a knife with a small smile on his face - What an image!? *sigh* Their hug and the meaning behind it was my favourite part! It was finally complete. And with the confession also having taken place, (Loved the ferris wheel reference- So typically Khushi, resenting her parents for not letting her ride it :P) they have one more teeny weeny thing left to complete.. You know something that has remained adhoora since Dilwali? :P Hahah!

And Payal I love you for wanting to take care of Di! :P *hugs*

Hope you had a blast selecting floor tiles and your net problems get resolved soon! Update super soon! :D

<3

I really loved ur FF... 😊

Great chapter totally loved it.
I am really happy to know that atlast arnav and khushi are happy in their married life with each other. I am happy to know that atlast khushi has accepted her love for arnav and given their marriage a second chance by listening to her heart. Payal is truely a great sister she understands khushi so well.

Hmmm payal will now sleep with anjali so will khushi and arnav will spend a night together with love.
Thanks for the pm. Update soon want to know ehat will happen in the next chapter.

Great chapter totally loved it.
I am really happy to know that atlast arnav and khushi are happy in their married life with each other. I am happy to know that atlast khushi has accepted her love for arnav and given their marriage a second chance by listening to her heart. Payal is truely a great sister she understands khushi so well.
Hmmm payal will now sleep with anjali so will khushi and arnav will spend a night together with love.Thanks for the pm. Update soon want to know ehat will happen in the next chapter.

nice update...loved the arnav and khushi scene...no words are needed to express what they feel...i loved payal's POV...waiting for the next update!!