~my beatless heart ~* kriyaansh * strip 2 pg11 ~

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chetna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

its way beautiful, pure n seren loved it

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chsripriya

@chsripriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

awesome amazing so so so beautiful and heart touching loved it

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh
wow upasana dii u described kriya's pov so well u r an amazing os writer dii love u for dis had tears in my eyes but i hope ki kriya d3 mein waapas aaye

awww tanx palakh !!! lov u too !!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

wow amaizng i was sheding tears readint this it was so emotional

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Puja

@puja_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Wow...it ws jst flawless n minblowing...it made me emotional...wat a beautiful descripton f kriya's POV...luvd it...
Dear...u write so well...hats off 2 u...:)

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

it was beautiful upsi... it was full of angst.. and u wrote it so well... sacchi mei baby... m speechless after reading it!!

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

This was an awesome one upi .

u made me emotional yaar.

love u for this.

it was superb one.

I'm speechless.

Continue writing.

thanks for the pm.

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d3_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Amazing OS upi di...I luved it!!:):)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

loved it...

u portrayed it so well.. beautiful... words used were awesome...

P.S: i know yeh chhota hai lekin main sach bolun ab am avoiding sad wale updates.. yaar mood depressing ho jaata hai and then sochne lag jaata hai us direction and then thoda mood off ho jaata hai thinking abt things that cudn't happen(d3 bhut mushkil se choda hai na) plus i really like kriya so can't see anything like that happening to her. cvs ne toh bekaar kar diya hai... hope tu samajh rhi hai... so ek request acche thode happy wale likha kar na.. accha lagta hai padhne mein...

and plz thodi formatting kiya kar na... kbhi-2 i think bhut baar tujhe capital letters se prob hoti hai.. did u read my latest update...

mishti meethe updates likha kar ek dum sweet-2 teri tarah😊