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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: tina_1234
aww beautiful part..thr relshp has turned sooo beautiful..plzz clera shyam's mu asap...sooo soo beautiful

It will take time before MU comes up or, is cleared.. I want their relationship to develop in the meantime.. 😆 I am so glad you liked it!

Edited by bingala - 13 years ago

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva
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Liked it? More like LOVED it.. I loved how you portrayed the subtle changes in their relationship, while staying true to their character, especially Arnav's. His concern for Khushi was heartwarming. I loved how you explained that he equally vested while they were making love, and not detached and aloof (the way he was when the game began).. Can't wait for the big blow up!! LOL

You did? Really? I thought it that it seemed a little below par... Sigh. But since you liked it, even if its a little, I am really happy! I hate and at the same time am fascinated by Arnav's ability to remain detached from everything - like he's untouched by sorrow or anything else for the matter. That's one of the first things I decided would go! 😆 here's to the big ole blow up! I hope it's worthy of the drama in my head! 🤣

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

cmon arnav u so love her, how cud u think of contract

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#714

It sounds so...magical. 😊

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#715

Khushi Is SO Innocent & Cute; I'm Sure She Is Glowing 😍

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caged23

@caged23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#716

Aww. This was really sweet. He can be such a sweetheart when he wants

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@fanAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#717

I have read the first update , amazing job . i shall be reading more tonight .

will leave my comment soon

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.Euphoria.

@.Euphoria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#718

I loved it!!
Seriously, the way you are describing Khushi's thoughts are so apt. You've really managed to keep her characterisation constant, yet you can tell how far she's come.

Love. Love. Love. It.