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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: lara3110
Loved the updates. Excellent. 👍🏼 Waiting for the next.

thank you! :takes a bow: but I'd really appreciate if you could tell me what you liked/disliked about my writing style or material or even give me suggestions. I'm trying to improve plus this thing is pretty great - I'm going to use it as an assignment for my creative writing course. :D

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farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

loved it...why is he torturing her like that?poor girl going crazy and he's enjoying every bit of it...can't wait for the next update to see how the story will unfold?

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: farheen75
loved it...why is he torturing her like that?poor girl going crazy and he's enjoying every bit of it...can't wait for the next update to see how the story will unfold?

LOL! Honestly, can you see him doing things any differently? In a more straightforward way? He will take his own sweet time getting where he has to... 😆 Arnav under any circumstance is not the nicest guy around anyway :P

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.Euphoria.

@.Euphoria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Bingala...I loved it!
Please give us more dialogues between the two..I love how Arnav manages to give these suggestive comments in innocent situations!

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: angel_eyez123
Bingala...I loved it!
Please give us more dialogues between the two..I love how Arnav manages to give these suggestive comments in innocent situations!

dialogues between them - on my list of things to do! Watch out for the puja - which I will write as soon as my professor stops looking at me funny. 😕

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Man, they have self control! Lol!

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ARSHI_FAN11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

WOW its amazing what you wrote :) I am literally stalking your post since y'day since I discovered it ;)

Pls continue soon!!!

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Kookiemonster

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

loving each and every bit of ur ff.

continue it

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

found this today and absolutely love it awesome update loved how he their both pov he desires her but also want her to come to him loved connect the dots loved the way you describe their feeling awesome please continue soon and pm