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After 2 long weeks, i was finally able to catch up with all your updates. The only problem with traveling is that i can't keep up with the forum. Anyways, what can i say, it was a delight to read your updates & the best part was that i got to read quite a few in one go. Love the idea & i'm so looking forward to where this story is headed. Thanks so much for the PMs.

What I read had me rooted enough for a full 5 minutes while I sat and thought the whole scene with a blush on my face. You rock. Sexual tension is SMOKING SEXY on this one and guess what, I love it. It leaves no space for prolonged eye locks and innocent hand brushes. Plus, it means a shorter time distance between standing romance and lying passion. Nuff said. I loves ya. MUAH <3

read all the updates in one go...it was mindblowing as usual...

Why wouldn't she wear a bra? Especially when wearing a t-shirt (could almooost understand if it was a suit or dress) but tshirt, that too a white one., hahahaha I always question weird things

just caught up with last few parts...

Waiting for more 😉 pl PM me your other work too ...

Ok onto

Ch5:

EEEP Akash just tucked KKg's hair? What the What the What the!!!! LMAO she called him bhai immediately.

ROFLMAO Diana of the many breasts!!!! HAHAHAHA

Damn the girl's got courage. She cursed at him... I am finding that I mightily approve of the modern, outspoken KKG. Love love love. And *fans herself* ASR and his thoughts sure go in the down and dirty direction very quickly.

I am torn between supporting Akash and Arnav. So torn.

Brilliant! Seriously my curiosity is piqued! Love the way you write and have potrayed the characters! Such a change for Akash! Just waiting for the next update.

Ch 6:

Its really nice that Payal is able to give pertinent advice to Khushi without mincing words or being holier-than-thou. I much prefer this Payal to the one in the drama.

Oh God, how heartbreaking for Anjali to think that finally someone in her dumbass family was thinking about her happiness for a second, her marriage and her life. That was so cruel. I really hope she lashes out at them at one point and makes her way for herself. She needs to make herself heard instead of standing back in the shadows and letting life pass her by!

I really like that you took a break from all the Akash-Khushi-Arnav triangle and focused a bit on Anjali. Beautiful, sad though it may be.

Finally,

Ch 7:

Oooh crap Anjali pitched Payal as Akash's bride. This is just turning out to be a whole awkward mess of brothers and sisters in love with the wrong counterpart. Eek. I can just picture Payal thinking "So I am about to be married to a man who possibly loves my younger sister who in turn may be in love with my brother-in-law who I wouldn't mind if he turned out to love me instead. And maybe I could have Imran on the side..." 🤪

Wow Khushi has a temper/cursing problem. Good thing the pool is so close by... although judging by what Arnav may evoke in her (passion or anger), she may well need a sea to cool her down! 😊

Absolutely fantastic progression in the story! Not too fast, not too slow, and enough time spent on each character that they all seem well developed! 👏

Thanks again for the PM's.