Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18} - Page 86

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleRain

So here is my detailed comment as promised! 😳



I love you for this looong comment. Well, no, I love you anyways. 🤗

The update is Fabulous... loved the part where Khushi takes food for Arnav on instinct... but doesn't understand her own feelings. . <3

Thank you so much! I'm still trying to keep her confused about her feelings, because it's way too fast for her to think she's in love or something :P

And the small scene with Khushi n Arnav in the moonlit room 😲 😍😍
That's awesomeness personified! 😆 Kaash, the CV's read your FF and do something of that sort in the coming tracks! ;) :P

Haha, kaash. I could be their scriptwriter! Haha kidding. 😆

Serves Anna right for dieting so much.. and troubling girls like Priya... 😈 😆 Loved the way you described her! 😛


Thank you again 😳

I'm sure Khushi is gonna wear the red dress... what with Sid indicating things and everything... I'm pretty sure about it! 😳 . .

Waise I have a doubt, There was this OS of yours.. I don't remember the title.. but in that there is some kinda dance where Khushi comes in a red dress with Aman... and it sets Arnav's jealousy track on fire! ;) 😆

Oooh so glad you remember that especially the red dress bit!

Is that the coming part? I'm not sure, coz in this they are all supposed to attend a fashion show, and there'll be ramp walk... and that part had dance n stuff. . . 🤔

Well, there is always an after-party after a fashion show 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rabba_Ve

Wow... This is what I call intense, and only ASR can do it for you.! Loved it as usual. Update soon..
Btw, congrats on the 4th thread. Is there a limit to how many pages you can have in a thread? 🥳



Yeah, I think it's around 140-150 or something like that.
Thanks so much! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pgm7

The last part was hilarious.!!🤣

Arnav your brother is making such efforts from his behalf,show them you've taken steps as well 😃
The first half oh-so-yum.! The description,the ambiance and the perfect pose which these two have permanently booked If I sound shameless blame the encounter of Arnav-Khushi.!😳

This is for the 4th thread




Haha shameless comments are most welcome! ☺️
And thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
congo for new thread
awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Fafu77

hey girl

loved the update
n a big big big big big congratz on the new thread 😃
im literally happy dancin on table ( no jokes )



Hahaha awww! I'll join you! *partay partay! dance dance!*
:P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneil92

W*F. THREAD 4? 😲


CONGRATULATIONS!

Okay. I'm book marking this. Tomorrow, this will be the ONLY FF i'll read, and comment properly. Every chapter I missed. PROMISEWA!

Love ya my sexy momma! 😳



YES YES YES!! Wooo! I will be looking forward to your comments!
Love you too bombita! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asumi

thread 4!! wow!! :) congrats!!!
great update!
what exactly happened after he asked 'why?' :P



Thank-you!! :)
Lol, he walked away :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Prach_VirMan

😆 Does that mean you are updating?



Hahahah! Sadly no, no updates till next Tuesday because I've got a crapload of homework :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileyface

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ahh i know im so late on this! but ive been woah busy! however im all caught up with all the parts that i have missed!

sighh i freakin love this ff haha! its my fav out of all your ffs! i think ive already told you this a billion times but still!

LOL i died at aman's reaction to anna's outfit!!! and i just love aman over all!!! Im wondering if he has a hint of arnav and khushi and their little existent/non-existent saviour - scandalous relationship lmao!!!

btw what happened to your other ff...you haven;t updated that!! the one set in the 1920s? i dunno if it was that year but u know which one im talking about! update thattt!!!

and omggg bring back sweetu in here and have him meet all of khushi's new pals!!! =D why didn't she bring him on the trip?!?!!??! that would have been awesome haha!

xox
hershi




😲😲
I completely forgot about Sweetu!!! 😲😲😲😲
OMG, bloooperrr! 🤣
Now I gotta think about where he was while Khushi was in NYC. 😕
And Hershi! It's okay! Glad to see you back!
I love Aman, but everyone had been hating on him ever since the fake fiance stuff happened! :(
Some people even thought he was the Shyam from IPK. 😲
Haha you mean Ineluctable Fate? I res'd for that but only have like 200 words so far! I swear, that FF is SO hard to write! i have no idea how people acted back then so mostly I'm just sort of clueless but then google is like a lifesaver lol :P
Thank you so much! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reyabear




😲😲
I completely forgot about Sweetu!!! 😲😲😲😲
OMG, bloooperrr! 🤣
Now I gotta think about where he was while Khushi was in NYC. 😕
And Hershi! It's okay! Glad to see you back!
I love Aman, but everyone had been hating on him ever since the fake fiance stuff happened! :(
Some people even thought he was the Shyam from IPK. 😲
Haha you mean Ineluctable Fate? I res'd for that but only have like 200 words so far! I swear, that FF is SO hard to write! i have no idea how people acted back then so mostly I'm just sort of clueless but then google is like a lifesaver lol :P
Thank you so much! 🤗

srry i came stalking around thinking u updted
but m really curious of ur ff ineluctable fate
and well if u really want to kno try reading the gemma doyle triology
or the infernal device books
it wud be great help if u r having problems

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