Ipkknd OS by riya seth CHAPTER 8! UPDATED!! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update hun..😃 keep working but you should start writing in full sentences..😊 it will give a smooth flow to your writings and it will help you in your studies as well..😳 loved how Arnav took care of her😉 n i hope that Arnav finds out the truth pretty soon!! thanks for the pm hunnie😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME FF👏...jst read all d 3 parts...it seems dat the truth will come out soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...

continue soon..

and thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guyzz m so sorry for the late update
so here m continuing my story

IPKKND OS BY RIYA SETH CHAPTER 4!!!! [UPDATED!]
hope u guyzz r liking my work!

chapter 4-
shyam un dono ko jhagadte hue dekh kar ye sochta hai ki ab to in dono ka rishta toot hee jayega
vo vaha se bhola bhala bankar chala jaata hai
and bahar aakar apni vo evil smile deta hai as usual
in the room
arnav- mujhe koi galatfemi ni hui hai khushi kumari gupta singh raizada
khushi- dekhiye arnav jee aapne humare saath jo bhi kiya humne vo sab saha! par aap abhi hum par bahut galat ilzaam laga rahe hai
aur haan! hum shyam jee ko pehle se jaante hai!
par hum unse pyaar ni karte hai kyoki hum pyaar to aa...
and she shuts her mouth
arnav- oh really! tum usse pyaar ni karti! mujhe yakin ni hota ki tum itna jhooth bol sakti ho khud ko bachane k liye!
mujhe vishvaas ni ho raha hai
khushi- dekhiye arnav jee hum jhooth ni bol rahe hai
humne aapse shyam jee ka sach chipaya hai
vo bhi keval di k liye
arnav- just shut up! apni jhoothi juban se meri di ka naam bhi mat lena
khushi- par humari baat aapko sunni hogi
arnav-mujhe kuch ni sunna hai
arnav tries to go outside
khushi stops him and closes the door
khushi- aaj aapko humari baat sunni hogi , aaj aap bina sune ni jaa sakte
arnav turns to other side
and says nothing
khushi- dekhiye aapko jo galatfemi hui hai use hum theek karna chahate hai
dekhiye arnav jee hum shyam jee se pyaar ni karte
hum unse sakt nafrat karte hai
kyoki unhone hume bahut bada dhokha diya tha
arnav- dhokha aur tumhe! tum to dusro ko dhokha deti ho
koi tumhe kaisa dhokha de sakta hai
khushi- bas arnav jee aapne bahut bol liya
hum kuch kehe ni rhe hai iska ye matlab ni hai ki hum chup rahenge
arnav tries to say sumthing
khushi- 1 minute ab pehle aapko humari baat sunni hogi
kuch mahino pehle jab humari aapse mulakaat hui thi sheesh mehel me aur humari jee jee ki shaadi toot gyi thi
aur jab humari t.v. par badnaami hui thi to kuch logo ne humare saath battamizi karni chaahi
par us samay hume shyam jee ne aakar bachaya
us samaya to hum unhe jaante bhi ni the! humko to ye tak ni pata tha ki vo shaadi shuda hai aur anjali jee k pati the
unhone humari izzat bachayi aur fir jab badnami se tang aakar humari amma ne hume aur jee jee ko bua jee k saath dilli bheja to vaha par bhi kaam dhundwane me shyam jee ne hee humari madad kari thi
hume laga ki vo hume 1 acha dost samajhte hai aur isliye humari itni madad kar rhi hai
aur vo humare ghar pe kirayedaar bankar aaye
unhone humare saare parivaar walo ko apni meethi meethi baato me yu ghol liya ki unhe unme kuch buraai hee ni dikhti thi
aur fir pata ni kaise kuch dino baad buajee k man me humare aur shyam jee ki shaadi ki baat ayi
humne kabhi unse shaadi k baare me nahi socha tha
humne buajee ko itna mana kiya par vo ni maani
aur aakhir me haar kar hume haa kehni pari
aur aur 1 din achaanak se pata ni buajee ko kya hua, unhone humari sagai shyam jeee k saath karwa dii!
hum unse sagai ni karna chahate the par karni pari
fir jab hawan wale din jab hume shyam jee par shak hua to humne ye jaan ne ki koshish kari ki anjali jee ke pati kaun hai aur jab hume pata chala to humne unse sagai tod dii! aur humne socha ki hum aapko bata de par fir humne ye socha ki aap anjali jee ko kitna pyaar karte hai aur hum anjali jee ko dukh ni pahuchana chahate the! aur humne to unse saare rishte tod diye the fir aapko ye ggalat femi kaise hui????
arnav thinks over it and thinks ki uske mangaitar ka naam bhi shyam tha
aur jab arnav ne usse pucha tha ki tumahare mangaitar ne kya kiya
and then he remembers when she hugged shyam and said ki anjali jee ko chor kyo ni dete
and says- mai tumahari in baato me ni aaunga
amine aaj tak tumahari jitni jhooth bolne wali ladki ni dekhi
khushi- hum jhooth ni bol rhi hai!!!
arnav- tum jo bhi kar lo mai tum pe vishvaas ni karungi
he tries to go outside
khushi- theek hai[crying and angry] , aapko humpe vishvaas ni karna hai to mat kariye!
par hum aapko vishvaas dila kar rahenge ki hum sach bol rhe hai aur hum shyam jee se ni aapse kitna pyaar karte hai[and aftr saying ki hum aapse kitna pyaar karte hai khushi and arnav both r shocked!]
arnav- wat??
khushi- hum aapko vishwaas dila kar rahenge ki hum shyam jee se pyaar ni karte aur hum sach bol rhe hai
chahe iske liye hume agni pariksha hee kyo na deni pare!

arnav goes out ignoring all these things wat khushi said

arnav shyam k kamre k paas se guzarta hai aur shyam ko kuch badbadate hue sunta hai aur fir vo uske kamre k darwaaze k paas aakar dekhta hai ki shyam muskura raha hai aur kuch kehe raha hai, arnav tries to listen to it
shyam creepwa kehe raha hota hai
aaj to arnav khushi se rishta tod hee dega aur fir khushi jee humari ho jaengi!
hmm [smiles] arnav ko to itna bhi ni pata ki khushi jee bekasoor hai, unka to koi haath hee ni hai in sab me
aur arnav ko jo galatfemi hui hai vo mere liye to acha hee hai
aakash ki shaadi ki raat bhi khushi jee kaunsa humse milna chahati thi unhe to laga tha ki vaha unhe arnav ne bulaya hai par unhe hum mil gaye
aur vo behcaari to raani sahiba ki khushi k liye hume baar baar galat kehe ri ti aur hume baar baar yaad dilwa ri thi ki hum shaadi shuda hai!
vo bechaari to raani saahiba aur arnav aur pure parivaar ki khushi chahati thi aur ab dekho badle me hume khushi mil gyi hai
khushi jee ab hum kya kare! arnav hee aapko galat samajh raha hai!
arnav gets shocked by listening to this!!!!!!
:O
he is sooo much in a mood to cry! and then listens to wat shyam is saying
shyam to himself- ab jab arnav ko ye galat femi hee hai to iska faayda mai hee uthaata hoo!
arnav ko to ye lagta hai ki khushi jee use aur raani saahiba aur pure parivaar ko dhokha de ri hai! par vo behcaari to hmm humse door hee bhaagti reheti hai!
jab unko humara sach pata chala tha ki hum shaadi shuda hai unhone to humse rishta tod diya tha aur vo to sabko bata bhi deti par shayad unhone raani saahiba ki vajay se ni bataya hoga ki unko dukh na hoo, aakhir humari khushi jee hai hee inni achi
arnav listens to all this and realizes that khushi was innocent!
and then he listens many voices saying khushi jee!!
khushi jeee darwaaza kholiye
arnav bhaag k vaha par aata hai!
everybody was there
arnav- dii kya hua
anjali- chote dekhiye na khushi jee darwaza ni khol ri hai
hum unko inni der se bula rahe hai par andar se koi jawaab ni aa raha hai!
inside the room khushi was crying soo much she thought ki humari zindagi to arnav singh raizada ne barbaad kar dii hai aur ab isme kuch aisa ni bacha hai jiske sahare hum jee sake
kam se kam humare marne k baad to unhe sach pata chalega
arnav- khushi open the door!!
koi jawaab ni aata
then arnav and aakash door ko todne ki koshish karte hai
and when the door opens everybody was shocked and especially arnav!!


chapter 4 ends here hope u liked this
sorry but no precap!

if u r liking my work then do comment and like! plzz
and i will post the next part tomorrow!
hope u r liking my work!!!
do comment and like and guess wats gonna happen in chapter 5??

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can you please add the English translations for all of the chapters
Can't wait for the next chapter what has happened to khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one hunnie..👏 keep it up dear n please update soonish😳.. im eagerly waiting for the next update to see what happens!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nicely crafted😊...so now all the misunderstandings will go in the gutter...yayyy...so curious to know what happened inside the room😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO SORRY GUYZ FOR THE LATE UPDATE!
ACTUALLY I WAS BUZY IS SOME WORK!
AND I HOPE THAT U ALL WILL LIKE IT

SO HERE WE GOES WITH CHAPTER 5

IPKKND OS BY RIYA SETH
CHAPTER 5!

SO HERE M CONTINUING THE STORY


arnav comes there aftr listening to all these VOICE!

anjali- chote dekhiye na khushi jee darwaza ni khol ri hai

hum unko inni der se bula rahe hai par andar se koi jawaab ni aa raha hai!

inside the room khushi was crying soo much she thought ki humari zindagi to arnav singh raizada ne barbaad kar dii hai aur ab isme kuch aisa ni bacha hai jiske sahare hum jee sake

kam se kam humare marne k baad to unhe sach pata chalega

arnav- khushi open the door!!

koi jawaab ni aata

then arnav and aakash door ko todne ki koshish karte hai

and when the door opens everybody was shocked and especially arnav!!


when they opens the door!

khushi was lying on the floor with blood around her!!

arnav was totally shocked!

everybody was shocked!!

arnav's eyes were full of tears!! after seeing all this!!

he comes near her and says- khushi! khushi! wake up! wake up!!!

and then everybody comes there, shyam was also shocked and was feeling so angry from inside cause he was thinking that khushi jee had done all this because of arnav!

arnav- khushi!! khushi! wake up!

khushi wasn't responding! , her body was full of blood! and when arnav saw her clearly, he saw that she had cut her nerve of her hand!!! [O! SHIT!!!]

anjali- chote , ye kya hua!![in crying, and surprised mood]! ye kaise.. tum jaldi se khushi jee ko doctor k paas lekar jaao! jaldi

arnav takes khushi in her arms!! and fastly runs to the hospital!!

in the car!!

this time! aakash was driving!

payal was sitting next to aakash and arnav was sitting in the back! and khushi was in her arms![awww]

during the whole journey! arnav said- khushi! u can't leave me! u can't leave me alone! plz wake up!

he was crying!

plz wake up once!

i swear! i will not say anything to u! i will not hurt u! i will not do anything bad to u! whatever i will say, i will do that but plz open ur eyes once!!

plz open ur eyes!

he was regretting madly!

he was thinking about the hurting he caused to khushi, even there wasn't any fault of khushi!

he hurted her so much

he married her , he hasn't gave love to her which she deserves, her talked to her rudely!

he hurted her so much!

in his mind he was thinking that all this is his fault!

he doesn't deserves khushi's love and he doesn't deserves a beautiful, cute and bubbly wife and so careful wife like her!

and then he sees her!

she was just breathing hard like she was about to dead!

she was unable to breath!

arnav- aakash, plz drive fast, sumthing bad is happening to khushi! she isn't unable to breathe

payal- yes aakash jee plz drive fast

aakash drives so fast! and then they reaches the hospital!


in the hospital


arnav met a doctor and said to him - plz doctor, its an emergency! my wife ...

doctor sees her, that her body is covered with blood and she wasn't unable to breathe!

doctor- we have to urgently do the operation, its too late! there r very less chances of her survival[:((]

arnav- what?????? no ways!! khushi' can't die!! no way doctor! do anything but save my khushi!!!! at any cost!!!

doctor- i will try my best !

they takes her to the OPERATION THEATER!

khushi's face was so innocent that time!

when arnav saw her innocent face, he realized how much he hurted this lady!!



everybody comes there!

anjali- chote, how this happened! khushi jee isn't so weak tht she has to cut her nerve!!

tell me chote, what happened between u and khushi jee!!

i m definitely sure that u must have said harsh words to her!!

arnav was thinking that how much she had hurt khushi!

he wasn't listening to anybody!

he was regretting and he just wanted that khushi back!

and he said in this mind that if khushi will not b okay or if she will die then , he can't forgive himself!!!! (:(()

buajee- arnav bitua!! tell me wat happened!!!!!!

amma- tell!

nani- chote!! don't shut ur mouth like this!! i wanna know y khushi bitiya had done this!! she had taken a very big step cus a girl who is very bubbly and remains happy and controls every situation, whether it is very sad or not!! she can't take this step!!

tell me wat happened between u and khushi bitiya!

arnav was just crying and crying!! and just thinking about past days!

shyam- saale sahab! she can't take this step!! u must have forced her to do so!

this time! arnav didn't reacted at all! because he was lost in khushi's thoughts!!

arnav goes near the OPERATION THEATER DOOR! and sees khushi from the mirror!


she was deep breathing!!

doctors put a mask type on her mouth!

arnav was unable to control himself!! he was unable to c khushi like this!

he just ran away from the hospital!! and he took his car and was driving so fast! and he suddenly stops the car!

and comes out and yells -KHUSHI!!

I AM SO SORRY FOR WHAT EVER I HAD DONE WITH U!

I CAN'T C U IN PAIN!

I AM SOO SORRY!

I KNOW I HAVE DONE SO MUCH BAD THAT U CAN'T FORGIVE ME!

BUT PLZ COME BACK!!

IF SUMTHING WILL HAPPENS TO U, I CAN'T FORGIVE MYSELF THEN!!

PLZ COME BACK!

GOD! I HAVE NEVER ASKED ANYTHING TO U!

I HAVE NEVER SAID ANYTHING TO U!

EVEN I DON'T BELIEVE IN U!

BUT TODAY KHUSHI MADE ME BELIEVE IN U!

IF U R IN THIS WORLD THEN PLZ SAVE KHUSHI!! IF U R REAL THEN PLZZ SAVE KHUSHI!!!

I HAVEN'T WISHED ANYTHING! BUT TODAY M WISHING FOR MY LOVE! MY HEART, MY SOUL!! I WILL DIE IF SUMTHING WILL HAPPEN TO KHUSHI!

PLZ SAVE HER!!


THUNDER AND LIGHT!!

RAIN STARTS!



arnav goes back to the hospital and asks to the doctor! in crying way- how is my khushi!!

doctor doesn't replies

arnav- doctor! tell me!

doctor- there r very less chances of survival but we r trying our best!


arnav comes near the family

everybody asks - what the doctor was saying, even this time mami jee was also concerned because khushi has made a deep corner in her heart!

she was also so concerned!


arnav- the doctor was saying that...


everybody- what???

arnav[yells] that there r very less chances of survival of khushi!!!

all because of me!!

all because of me!!

and sits down on the floor[and cries]

this day had come because of me!


dii now i can't control myself!

i am sorry to tell u but jija jee![angry mood]

anjali- wat

arnav- all this had happened because of him!!

he is the main reason!

everybody was shocked!


anjali- chote!! what r u trying to say, what he had done!

arnav tells everybody the whole truth! that how shyam came in khushi's life and how arnav misunderstood khushi! and how arnav married her! and how much pain he gave her! and how he came 2 know the whole truth about shyam!

and he told them that khushi was trying to prove her innocence but he didn't believed her!

and thats y she done all this!


anjali was too shocked and everybody was shocked!!

payal- arnav jee y did u blackmailed khushi about my marriage!

omg! khushi done all this for me and i?? i said so many bad things to her

buajee was also regretting

anjali- no, he can't do this! she goes near shyam and says- is it true????

shyam was trying to handle the situation but arnav doesn't let him to do so!

anjali slaps him!!

anjali- yuck! u were my husband on whom i trusted so much!!!

u r not a human being!! u r a beast!!


everybody was bashing shyam

but anjali left him and came near arnav

anjali slapped arnav too [ o shit!! O_o}

anjali- chote i haven't hoped this from u! u disappointed me!

our mom haven't taught this!! to us!! u have done such a big mistake!

u have done so many bad things to that poor lady!!

she wasn't saying anything to u bcus u blackmailed her!!

u can't b my brother!!

do u even know wat u have done???

u have destroyed sumbody's life!!

u have destroyed khushi jee's life! even there wasn't any mistake of her in it


arnav was listening to all this because he knew that it was his mistake

shyam was trying to say sumthing but arnav bashed him!

shyam- arnav! i wanna c khushi jee once!

arnav- shut up! don't take my khushi's name from ur bloody mouth!

shyam- oh! well! if this is ur khushi[ showing him khushi!] then u wouldn't have done this much worst to her!

arnav doesn't says anything!

he just regrets!


CHAPTER ENDS!


precap for chapter 6-

arnav- doctor , how is khushi now??

doctor- m sorry!

everybody was socked!!

arnav- wat?? no no no! !!!!!!!!!!! no ways!!!!



SO SHARE UR VIEWS ABOUT THIS CHAPTER AND GUESS THAT WATS GONNA HAPPEN IN CHAPTER 6??


hope u liked it!!







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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc updt !
continue soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I liked the part where Anjali slapped Shyam... and Arnav (he needs one too to get some things straight in his head).

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