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hatathbristi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the both ending... but the original one is more logical...
but emotions bhi ajib hote hain... Logic hi nehi samajhte...

well done dear...

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Ajita Spencer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveFairy2013
😭aww... not happy that you ending it this way but I understand that we can't always have a happy ending...😭 because we live in reality not fantasy-land .

broke my heart... 💔but it was beautifully written... great job!!👏

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Ann

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Posted: 13 years ago

Love the ending too =D

But i love the second part of chap 5 which s on pg 48 more than the first one =D

extremly brilliant and superb =D continue with this one dear =D

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purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved both the endings! Your ending was heartbreakingly beautiful! The alternate was beautiful, but in a resolved, fairytale-ish way! Thanks for the pm. and please update your other works!

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Ajita Spencer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sini1234

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swathi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Luvd the both endings..very well written...thank u so much for the second one...

Edited by Ipkkndworld - 13 years ago

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unknown.

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Posted: 13 years ago

love is indeed powerful

amazing ending :)

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LAKSHMI

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Posted: 13 years ago

first of all it was too awesome..first time in my life i was crying after reading the os..
loved it..superb

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Nameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

haha so sweet of you to post two endings!!

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e_enigma

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOL. I loved the ending.

The alternate was nice. But the original had a lot more impact. Though I love all your work.

Anyway...oh man. Too good.

Thanks for the pm

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