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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ccuteaangel

lovely lovely OS, I have actually started writing something similar with Khushi's reactions to finding out about Arnav, now Im going to scrap it :p


Wonderful OS though, i like how Khuhsi reacted xx



Nooo, you should post it if you want to! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Lovely! Love how khushi said 'then you dont know me at all' - because really, does he? He didnt give her a chance to explain, neither did he look into himself and question, this is khushi, would she ever do such a thing? Great OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Wowie! This was incredible and you played the emotions well on Khushi and Arnav! I love this so much that you better do continue... please :). Thanks for the Pm!
Sanju:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
yeah, i would like to ask arnav this too
"do u really know your kushi?"

the cute, happy, adorable, little on the crazy side kushi...


pls update more.
this can't be an OS...its too good!

and tks for the PM... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
ahhh beautiful...inloved each and every part...pls continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Beautifully written!

The way you have described the emotions and feelings of Arnav and Khushi was magnificent !

Love the bit where Khushi tells Arnav that he doesn't know anything about her! :P

This OS was spellbinding! really enjoyed reading it :)

Thanks for the PM lovey xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Thanks for the PM. Nice OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Brilliant work dear!! Intense & emotional part, loved it. Thnks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
This was sooo sad!!!! 😭

Awww poor Khushi!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
beautiful as always.. i love your writing.. loved the start..

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