SS/FF: Changing relations (part 3 updated)

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

pls don't make asr too clod blooded as to think that even his sister is with him cos of money...loved the way u described the winter and summer co - existing part...do update as soon as u can...

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suger1993

@suger1993

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rennie
pls don't make asr too clod blooded as to think that even his sister is with him cos of money...loved the way u described the winter and summer co - existing part...do update as soon as u can...

I just noticed i wrote besides instead of except 😳 thanks for pointing it out 😉

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suger1993

@suger1993

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: pri12
awsomeee...continue soonwa...hello hi bye byee

HAHAHA that cracked me up 🤣🤣 love mami

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suger1993

@suger1993

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: crazy44
i loved the concept!
and make it a arrangd marRiage, nt exactly forced marriage! khusi is Has marry him as she is adopted , and ths is a best way to pay for the kindnes that they did by adopting her! kinda of like this! i am not very gud at ths,just gving u a suggestion!
buT write what uVe plannd , the original plotline ! i love your writings, they make me crave for more! .
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"What happens when two different people meet? Can winter and summer co-exist? Will an ice cold heart ever be able to melt and let the sun shine through?" i loveD ths paragraph :)
i cant wait to read the start,!
continue soon..

awww i'm glad you liked it 😃 yeah i get what you mean i was thinking something like that 😉

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suger1993

@suger1993

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: indy12
Character sketch: you nailed it

Forced marriage - am not too keen...I don't like the idea personally because it gives out a bad message to viewers...don't make it a forced marriage but some kind of arranged one where the characters agree on getting married (not necessarily out of love - at first 😉)

yeah i get where you are coming from😳 it's more like she was blackmailed to marry him in some way 😳

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

loved the concept awaiting the start loved it thanks for the pm

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Sounds great...continue soon :) :) :)

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

sounds interesting cant wait for part one

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princessnida

@princessnida

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Sounds very exciting!!

But, why would a rich businessman like Arnav agree to marry Khushi randomly? And what would force Khushi into marrying him? Maybe I understood it wrong. But the first few lines gave me the impression that it was like child marriage, but then it didn't sound like that as I kept reading.

Okay now I'm ranbling! Lol. Make them have an arranged marriage maybe? And then show them fall in love despite being like summer and winter?

I'm excitd regardless!!!