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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY GUYS JUST LUK AT THE FIRST PAGE TOO...I HAV UPDATED THE CHARACTERS, SO THAT U FEEL COMFORTABLE WITH READING.
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DOSTI VS PYAAR

The next day janvi's father came to drop her in the school, at that time, she introduced krish to her father but he didn't respond properly as he doesn't like boys. Krish can identify it so he left soon from the place. The whole day krish was upset. Krish was absent on the next day. The day after when he came, janvi enquired abt it to him, he said that he went to shimla with his father. She too didn't ask anymore. Then he was saying to sameer, yesterday he went to a movie, he also told not to say that to janvi, because she'll scold him as he didn't attend the practical class the previous day, sasha heard it and informed to janvi. She was very angry, she became furious, and scolded him. He asked sorry. But she was not convinced, because he LIED to her. The reason he gave was she might mistake him, but what she thought was why he couldn't be truthful to his friend. She refused to talk with him and left home with anger. She was continuously speaking abt that to her sister. And her sister too agreed that he only made the mistake. But sasha felt so much that she was the reason for the fight and decided to convince her, so she phoned her and said "hey janvi, y u r getting angry? It's quite natural. He is fond of hrithik movies, u knows that very well, though'.. Okay leave that, he missed the practical class in a hope that u'll teach him, he made a mistake, I agree but u can forgive him know, to err is human, he is ur best friend dear, so plz talk with him, this is my request!", janvi replied "but'..", sasha stopped her and said "no buts'., think it over and talk with him tomorrow, bye" and she too said bye and slept. Krish couldn't sleep that night, he missed her very much. When he closes his eyes, only her angry eyes are coming before him, he could understand the seriousness of what she said abt the three persons whom she hates much in her life. The next day krish came and asked sorry to janvi, she started beating him, and asked "will u repeat this again idiot" and he replied "no dear, I am extremely sorry" with a childish look holding his ears. She too smiled. Sasha was very happy. The evening janvi explained everything to her lovely sister geet, she teasing her that "I know didi, this only will happen" they both slept. Krish too was very happy and he thought he shouldn't miss her in his life because the way how she taught him the practical was very impressive, so much care and affection in it. He got non-stop thinking abt her.
COMING UP: SECOND FIGHT???
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Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update... waiting for next one...
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amazing part buddy ;D <3
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Awesome part loved it continue soon!
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amazing post...truly awesome...👏

keep it up..👍🏼

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DOSTI VS PYAAR

A few days passed, the students all did their practical exams very well, and one day boys were playing in the class by throwing the girls' pen pouches, she saw it but she passed quickly as her biology teacher caller her, after meeting her she came to class, she found her pouch lying down, she ran and took her pouch, the pen which she gave to krish for writing the exam was found broken and leaking, she got furious, and started scolding krish and said that "do u know the value of this pen? This means a lot to me. Only through this pen, we are friends now, how sentimentally I was having this u know, no feelings at all" she started crying by seeing that pen. Sasha tried to convince her, but couldn't. Sameer advised her not to be too sensitive. But she didn't hear any of their words. The next day their class teacher brought applications for a scholarship exam, they all gave name for it; they were given one week time for the preparation. The whole week she didn't speak to anyone in the class, she remained upset, krish tried to convince her, but she didn't even see his face, on the day of the exam, it was krish's birthday, she knows that very well, it was holiday for all the classes except 10th, kavya came to drop his brother, he came in uniform, as it was a rule, so nobody knows that it was his birthday, sasha and sameer went and spoke with kavya but janvi didn't, krish showed that it was janvi to his sister. The bell rang, the students were leaving to exam hall, she was coming behind him, suddenly a voice heard "hey'..", krish knew that it was janvi, but he didn't turn, then she called louder, "hey'.krish" he turned and walked towards her, she said "happy birthday" without any interest, but he smiled to himself, and said "oh my dear janu, thank u very much, so sweet of u, nobody remembered my b'day, u r the only person who wished me here". "I wished u just as a classmate". "Look here, all are my classmates, nobody wished me", he smiled again. "I don't have time to argue with u, move". "All the best dear, do well" he moved aside. "I don't need ur wishes" left the place very fast and entered the exam hall; she was seated in the first bench and krish in the last bench. The supervisor was giving instructions, something persisted her to turn back, she turned back and krish smiled at her, she turned front suddenly. Students wrote their exams and left home immediately. Sasha phoned up janvi and said her that it's not krish who broke the pen, its sameer, today only he said to me. Janvi felt guilty. The next day she came and asked sorry to krish. "U could have told me earlier know, it's my mistake, I am sorry, extremely sorry da, I feel guilty to face u". "hey janu, don't feel for it, I didn't mistake u, even a pen given to me means a lot to u, I can understand ur friendship, I am very happy to get a friend like u" they both smiled. Sameer gave a new pen to janvi and said sorry, "y u didn't say abt this to me" asked janvi. He replied, "I was saving my pocket money to get a pen for u, so only I didn't say" all smiled. Sasha was very happy to see her friend happy. They had a very good time. They became very thick friends.

COMING UP: VAISHALI???

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Edited by JANAGI - 13 years ago
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VAISHALI entry... thats great yar... waiting for the update. when is our Rahule entry.??????
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nice update ya...👏👏👏

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