OS: Suhag Raat on Holi!- UPDATED Pt. 3 Pg 30 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
loved it!! 😆 pls do contune. part 2 is a must!! *gutter mind woke up* 😉

pls PM me.. pls pls.. its jus awesome.. loved the phone msg.. nice dialogue!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Funny and sexy. Best combo. Great work. Loved her cuteness throughout. Is there going to be a follow up?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was so cute...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Drunken khushi was so cute. Poor arnav. Ha ha. It was fab. Please do continue and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...u shud definately continue...plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...u've done a brilliant job here.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DO CONTINUE...N PM ME PLX!
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love it...pls carry on! lol
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No comments for you. You are the reason why I lag behind in my work.

CV's please try and learn a lesson here. This is how you blend comedy into a hot passionate scene. The tom foolery that you pass for comedy does not cut it and makes you look like idiots in front of some mere forum writers here. If you don't have your own brains/ideas please beg , borrow, steal it from Nancy, you have my permission.
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mashallah, I rofled really bad 🤣🤣

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