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surbhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: golu_1677
wonderful part. Now pls dont so much time to post the next part just cant wait for it. sply after reading that sujal did all this for a bet. Pls cont soon

aww thnx dii 😃 me glad u liked it !!

i will seriously try and cont soon 😊

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#202

hi surbhi
just read yr ff n its fab 👏
hope sujal doesnt mean wt he just said abt da bet
n hope sujal cms 2 knw tht he luvs kashish
cont. soon

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nandini

@rajeev4u

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Posted: 18 years ago

#203

hey ur fan fic is rally cool, plz cont soon 😊 😊 😊

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surbhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#204

CONTINUING.....

VIZ- lekin ek baat bata...ki yeh sab tune kiya kaise...i mean how did u make her fall for u......she hated u naa !!

SUJAL- easy easy....very easy....sujal grewal ke liye koi bhi kaam mushkil nahi hota...
KRISH- yeah right !! u two (pauses...and sighs) juzz go to hell....

and he walks away...when sujal shouts
SUJAL- thnx waise tumhara refernce lunga....(and laughs)
VIZ- soo when are u going to tell her everything

SUJAL- bata dunga ek baari woh mujhse i love you toh keh de !!
then they change the topic of the discussion but everything else is heard by kasak who came to meet krish....she gets upset and angry on her bro and his deeds...she storms away from there

in her room kripa is lying on her bed...and remembering her conversation with vroom...with tears in her eyes she remembers
KRI- kya baat hai kaafi khush lag rahe ho !! aisa kya ho gaya
VR- baat hi kuch aisi hai !!

KRI- plzz batao naa taaki main bhi khush ho jaaun...bolo naa

vroom remains silent a bit...and then says
VR- promise me that u wont tell this to anybody....pakkka promise kar
KRI- acha baba theek hai me wont tell this to anybody !! lekin bol toh sahi !!

VR- i am in love
kripa's heart skips a beat or two...she mumbles some words out...
KRI- ki...kis...kisse

VR- kashish se aur kisse !!
all the glitters in her eyes vanished and tears replaced them....but vroom didnt see that...he was full of joy, happiness....he didnt manage to see the tears in kripa's eyes....

KRI- usne.....kaha tumse kuch
VR- aisa laga toh sahi...joh indirectly woh bolna chahti thi aaj party mein !! that was truely magic !

kripa has 'WTH' kinda look on her face...she cant believe that even after knowing that she was in love with vroom....kashish did this !! like any other human being she had nothing but anger and hatred for kashish !!
VR- i guess i shud give some time to her....and then !! (and turns to face kripa...who wasnt there) arre yeh kahan chali gayi....

back to present......a tear runs down the right cheek of kripa....she hides her face in the pillow...and silently cries...

kasak comes in her room.....only to find that her big sis is sleeping....kasak thinks

KASAK- aaj ho kya raha...wahan mummy so rahi hai...yahan yeh soo rahi hai....naa hi krish mila....kashish bhi ghar par nahi hai....and then bro !! sachi gud for nothing toh the hi.....ab aisi shartein bhi lagane lage !! damn
she goes in her room...

IN THE EVENING !!
everybody is sitting the hall....when kashish comes !! sujal looks upto her gives her a smile !! and she also smiles back !!

kasak comes there and goes towards kashish...giving an evil smirk to sujal
KASAK- kashish i want to talk to you !! plzz zara upar chalo !!
KASH- nahi yaar i cant come...i have to do my packing

ANU- packing kaisi packing !!
KASH- woh uncle..darsal i have to leave for........(sujal cuts her)

SUJAL- kyu jaana hai !! no u arent going anywhere !!
KASH- woh actually kuch urgent kaam aagaya hai !! usi silsile mein..and my presense is indispencble !!

SUJAL- this isnt fair !! (and gets up and goes away thinking)
SUJAL-(thinks) yaar yeh kya ho gaya...ab yeh chali jaayegi toh aur time lag jaayega bet khatam hone mein...dammit...

PRER- but jaa kahan rahi hai !!
KASH- woh london !! kaaafi lambi trip hogi !!
ANU- ab kaam hai toh.....u can go !!

kashish goes in her room....starts her packing !! on the other hand sujal was lying on his bed...with his guitar..and looking at the door continously....he was sure that before leaving kashish wud def. come inside to bid him goodbye...in a nice style....but he was wrong

kashish in her room..was packing everything in haste...coz before going to the airport she has some imp.work in the office also....and both the airport and the office...were on the opposite side....

sooo after packing...changing clothes....looking at herself in the mirror for a second or two....she goes out...she stops in front of sujal's room...was about to go in when her cell rings and she starts talking and leaves !!!

sujal after an hour or so....gets up...and goes down...everybody is sitting there...
SUJAL- mama kashish ???

PRER- woh toh chali gayi...usne kaha toh tha...
SUJAL- aise kaise ??(gets angry) bina mujhse mile ??
he stamps his feet...and goes upstairs....

ANU- what was that ???
PRER- i guess sujal didnt like kashish going away !!
ANU- ohh...so maybe he and kas....(kasak cuts)
KAS- dont even think abt that....we all know sujal bro very very well !!

sujal is abt to get into his room...but sees kashish's room's door open....he goes to there and without thinking anything....enters her room !!

he glances right and left...takes a deep breath...and goes out of the room

after 2 days..the whole grewal clan was sitting and having their breakfast....when sujal says
SUJAL- i am going to london today !! i have some work there

ANU- and what abt here....dont u have any work here
SUJAL- dad....for the time being i am not doing any concerts...and i am content in doing the playback singing...and i have finished my work soo plzz dad...lemme do what i want to do !!

ANU- lek....(prerna cuts him)
PRER- arre anurag plzz....jaane do naa use he wanna go to london just let it be !!

ANU- fine....
SUJAL-(gets up) thankzz mom
he goes
ANU- prerna tum hamesha uski hi side leti ho this isnt fair
PRER- ohh come on dont behave like a child...ki 'mama mama aap hamesha uski side leti ho'

ANU- ok fine...(and makes a puppy face)
PRER- uff...arre i am saying that kashish is there....and i guess he wants to go and meet her...thats it!!

but prerna was wrong....sujal didnt even knew that kashish is in london....before she cud tell the name of the place where she was going....he stormed off to his room....sujal is going to london to attend a party thrown by the person who launched him....so he had to attend that party !!

At the airport....sujal is having coffee with viz....
they were talking.....and viz was constantly teasing sujal abt kashish

VIZ- waise are u sure naa ki....she loves u....i mean aaj 2 din se zyada hogaye...and she didnt even call u once....(and then after seeing sujal's puppy kinda face....he bursts out in laughter) awwww my smarty...sab kuch kiya...which is required to woo a girl....but i dont think so ki woh tujhe ek time pass se zyada kuch samjhti hai....uske liye uska kaam...uska office..tujhse kaii zyada imp hai !! shes a focused girl u know...and much diff. from the rest of the lot !!

SUJAL- viz will u shut up !! dont irritate me further....mujhe london chain se jaane de.....i just want to relax....aur itna mat soch kashish ke baare mein...
just then vroom joins them
VRO- hey ! sorry i am late (hugs sujal)

SUJ- no probs...
VRO- acha btw yeh kashish gayi kahan hai....sujal tujhe toh pata hoga naa

SUJ- mujhe kyu pata hoga...i dont know where has she gone...neither i care
viz coughs....and seeing that sujal hands him over his coffee mug....
SUJ- ek cup coffee aur pile....gala saaf hojayega....

In the Flight.....
sitting on the chair...sujal was thinking of kashish....
SUJ- viz was right....neither she turned up in my room..to bid me good bye...nor has she called me...yeh ho kya raha...am i thinking rather too much....(grits his teeth) aisa toh kabhi nahi hua...(changes his position) uff i dont wanna think much abt it....lets go to the party enjoy it.....have a break...and then after coming back to india i wud talk to her !!
and thinking this he dozes off

ok thats it for this edition....wud TRY and cont. soon... 😛

take care guyzz

with love,

sur 😊

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surbhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#205

double post !!

Edited by lklk - 18 years ago

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#206

Its been ages c'mon cont yar

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KulBin

@KulBin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#207

OMG...... 😕
yeh kya ho gaya..... 😳
sujal ne ye sab sirf ek shart k liye.... 😡
oh no muje to laga tha ki use wo sahi mei pasand aane lagi hai... par ye kya....... 🤢
oh no.... ab kya hoga yaar???? 😭
nywys waiting for the updates...
plz dear cont soon.... 😊 ur stry is gng gr8... 👏

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@anni_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#208

Very g0000000d fic plzzzzzz do continue asap..
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anu

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