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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

Hey rachita thanx for the PM and for updating so fast.
It was seriously an overdose of yellow. It felt like their room had overnight been engulfed by pnuemonia.

Arnav has started on the right track for winning back khushi but he still has to go a loong way to earn her forgiveness completely.

I am happy that u brought back the hindi dialogues. Yay!!

Though the things that khushi said hurted a lot but were really necessary to break the wall of ASR that has been trapping arnav for so long.

Great update once again. Lookin frwd to next part

Take care
Surabhi

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Loved the update, as always.. I'm glad Khushi finally told Arnav everything.. And I loved the idea of the starry sky.. So sweet.. Thanks for the PM.. :)

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

That was absolutely wonderful!!

Everything Yellow! WOOHOO!!

Pooh bear telling from the start! Anger, is a letter away from danger!

Incredible update!

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

wow wow wow!
it was simply beautiful!
the update was YELLOW :P
khusi's jaws must have dropped in the floor, mine definately did ;)
i am loving how he is trying his best to repent what he did!
they are just too adorable!
karan , oh my my why dont i have a brother like him! hes so protective, so loving and caring!
i love the way the story is progressing!
actUaly i loveD every thng aBouT ths chapter!
cant wait to read next :D

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illusiveworld

@illusiveworld

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: chillygirl
Hey rachita thanx for the PM and for updating so fast.
It was seriously an overdose of yellow. It felt like their room had overnight been engulfed by pnuemonia.

Arnav has started on the right track for winning back khushi but he still has to go a loong way to earn her forgiveness completely.

I am happy that u brought back the hindi dialogues. Yay!!

Though the things that khushi said hurted a lot but were really necessary to break the wall of ASR that has been trapping arnav for so long.

Great update once again. Lookin frwd to next part

Take care
Surabhi

You are welcomeee :)

HAHA! Oh my god, that totally made my day - "engulfed by pneumonia" :P

But I agree, it was definitely too much yellow. I just wanted to show that Arnav really doesn't have an idea of how to romance. He can only do everything in extreme - whether it's love or anger!

Arnav definitely has a veryyy long way to go before Khushi can totally be his :)

I brought the Hindi dialogues back JUST FOR YOU! So don't worry, all the emotional dialogues will be in Hindi.

Mhmm, Arnav needs to break the wall around him & only Khushi can do so.

I shall update in 3-4 days :)

- Rachita

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illusiveworld

@illusiveworld

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Loved the update, as always.. I'm glad Khushi finally told Arnav everything.. And I loved the idea of the starry sky.. So sweet.. Thanks for the PM.. :)

Aww I'm so happy you liked the chapter!

I had tears in my eyes writing that last dialogue but they needed to make peace with their past.

Yayyy! I wanted Arnav to not just hang stars like Khushi's old room. After all, it's ASR. He must do things in his style ;)

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illusiveworld

@illusiveworld

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
That was absolutely wonderful!!

Everything Yellow! WOOHOO!!

Pooh bear telling from the start! Anger, is a letter away from danger!

Incredible update!

Yayy! I'm so happpy you liked it :) Thankk you!

Hehehe! Yelllowww to the power :D

Omg I LOVE that quote. If only I had known it before, I would have used it in the dialogue :P

If you allow, I'll use it some other time & give you credit ;)

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illusiveworld

@illusiveworld

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: crazy44
wow wow wow!
it was simply beautiful!
the update was YELLOW :P
khusi's jaws must have dropped in the floor, mine definately did ;)
i am loving how he is trying his best to repent what he did!
they are just too adorable!
karan , oh my my why dont i have a brother like him! hes so protective, so loving and caring!
i love the way the story is progressing!
actUaly i loveD every thng aBouT ths chapter!
cant wait to read next :D

TeeHee! "The update was YELLOW" :P

I don't think I'll ever be able to take that much yellow anymore.

At one point, I included a dialogue by Khushi saying "Arnav, don't you think this is getting a little too much?" with a crooked eye.

But then I gave Arnav the doubt of benefit :P

I agreee! Karan is <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

I want every girl to have an elder brother like Karan!

I'm glad you liked ittt :)

I shall update soon!

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Wow!superb!!i love you khushi.arnav should realise his mistakes.i won't blame khushi.and that obituary!hilarious.so pm before comment,you are first.kudos to you!!continue soon,dear