You are the Music in Me(AR) Thread#2 Link - PG150

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey, it's a very nice concept.. Please continue soon and do PM me

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jannat4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hey Madura ...😊
sorry for commenting so late well i m nt well toh didnt got time to cum online and edit my comment but nw i m here...specially to edit my comment here..
Awesum concept...👏
i must say a very good start..
loved d way u portrayed Riddhima's emotions at d end..
I'm loving the story line already...
""U will forget me Riddhima, my memories will be buried somewhere deep down in your heart as the time passes and u will forget me"" i loved dis line😛
dear you have written it beautifully...
can i suggest u something ?? i dnt knw everybody felt like dis or not but its jst my view make d title of FF only starting frst letter capital as d title is INCOMPLETE u knw seeing d name i thought dis ff is incomplete..i knw dumb of me...u can make "Incomplete" or *~* InComplete*~*{AR FF} jst my lame suggestions..😳 no offense its totally upto u, u wnt to change it or nt..😊
phewww a very long comment...😳
do add me to ur pm list...
Waiting for the next part eagerly.

lots of love
Jannat

Edited by jannat4ever - 13 years ago