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Posted: 13 years ago
di i read parts 13.14.15 and 16 in one go..they were just awesome.
shyam is much smart haan. bloody snake.
i felt like killing anjali there. how dare she? arghhh...
bechara arnav. he has become a sandwhich between his di and wife.but i1 thing i missed was their welcome hug. ek hug toh banta tha na di . chalo koi nahi.
all parts were just superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 17 :

Khushi was worried, she was alone in the darkness, she couldn't see anything where was she ?? Who brings her there ?? All this question were taunting her but finding a answer to all this question was really hard.
Suddenly she heard a big noise, she gets scared Hey Devi Maiyaa...yeh shor kahain se ??...Hey Devi Maiyaa raksha karna !!!
K : Koi hai ??!!! Suniye ?!!!! Hamari madat kijiye !!!! Koi Hai ?!!!!!
Khushi didn't knew but the person who just came inside was the person who brings her there.

On the other side, Arnav was driving his car, he was getting crazy Khushi kahain ho ?!!!! Pick up the phone damn it !!! Pick up the phone but Khushi wasn't replying...Arnav decides to go where he has see her for the last time, he left from SHANTIVAAN without telling anything to anyone, but all matter for him right now was : KHUSHI.
When he reach there, he park the car and start running on the right on the left, his eyes desperatly looking for Khushi but he didn't find her...KHUSHI KAHAIN CHALI GAYI HO ?? He was afraid for her...it was all his fault, he shouldn't leave her alone, even if she asked him for that, what should he do.

Suddenly an idea came in his mind, he went back to the car where he left his mobile, he search in his phone but couldn''t find anything there, he was maybe the only one husband in this whole world who doesn't have a picture of his wife, so he decides to go back to Khushi's house, for sure Buaji or Aunty have a picture of Khushi.
He reach the house, ask Buaji for a picture, Amma asks him why he need Khushi's pic so he told them that he need it, so they told him to take one from Khushi's room, Arnav went in the room and seeing the stars hanging on the top of the bed bring tears in his eyes, he touch the stars and remind of what Khushi always said : Hamare Amma or Babuji taare ban gaye hai...
He wipes his tears away and search for a picture, suddenly he found one picture, she was looking beautiful on it and her smile...her smile was just amazing, seeing that smile makes him forget all his pain for a while, jab se shaadi huyi hai tab se maine Khushi ke honton peh aisi smile nahin dekhi, jo dil se ho, me usse kabhi Khush nahin rakh paya, hamesha dukh deta raha usse, galat samajta raha...Lekin Khushi aaj me wada karta houn, jiss din tum mujhe wapaas mil gayi ussi din se tumhe itni khushian dounga, itni khushian dounga ke tum bhool jayogi ke koi gham tha tumari zindagi mein..Khushi...yeh Arnav Singh Raizada ka wada hai, tumhare pati ka wada hai.

Arnav left from the room, he takes his car and went again on the same road where he saw her for the last time.
On the other side, Khushi was crying...she was soo afraid suddenly a voice stops her :
S : Kya hua Khushi ji aap itni pareshan kyu hai ??? Apko yeh ghar pasand nahin aaya ??
K : shocked Shyam ji !!!!! Aap !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S : Hain hum !!! Kya hua ?? Itni ehran kyu hai aap humein dekh kar ?? Kisi or ka intezaar ho raha tha kya ??
K : AAP...YEH AAP HUMEIN KAHAIN LE AAYE ?!!!! Choriye humein !!! Humein jane dijiye !!!
S : Aree Khushi ji yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap ? Abhi se le aaye apko or abhi se jane de ?? Nahin Khushi ji nahin...ab aap hamari hai sirf hamari...iss liye to apko saab ki nazron se door kardiya humne.
K : AAP !!! ARNAV JI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARNAV JI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
S : Jitna chilana hai chilaye Khushi ji !! Lekin yahain hamare ilava koi apki chike nahin sunh sakta, rahi baat Arnav ki to woh apko kabhi dhoond nahin payega, kyuke woh janta bhi nahin ke aap hamare paas hai.
Acha hai, Arnav ko saza mil jayegi apko humse door karne ki koshish ki thi usne aap se shaadi karke, to lo bhai humne apko wapaas pah liya.
K : Shyam jiii bhagwan ke liye humein jane dijiye !!!!

Shyam leaves from the dark house, but before leaving he asks a guy :
S : Nazar rakhna inpeh, yeh hamari jaan hai, dheyane rakhna ke woh yahain se hile nahin.
? : Ok Boss !
Khushi's tears were falling on her cheeks, what can she do ??? Arnav jii kahain hai aap ??
Suddenly Arnav stops...Khushiii, he felt as if he heard her voice, Khushi's voice..but how is it possible ?!!! His heart was beating faster as everytime Khushi was near of him DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK, his heart was calling her...Khushi plz samne ajayo..Arnav close his eyes and saw Khushi's face immediatly he opens his eyes shouting ; Khushiii !!!
But she was nowhere, he keep running and asking everyone if they saw her but none of them was abble to reply as they saw many girls in a day passing.

On her side, Khushi was thinking Hey Devi Maiyaa hamari madat karo, kaise nikle hum yahain se...phone !!! Lekin hamara phone to hamare paas nahin hai...kahain hai ?? Shayad gir gaya hoga...ab ???
The Guy Shyam left( we will call him Arjun), Arjun was tired first he had to kidnap that girl and now his BOSS has order him to keep an eye on her, he was missing his wife and wanted to go back home but he couldn't Shyam had promise him a lot's of money if he did well his job and he needs money to pay the hospital where his son was admitted, his son needs expensive treatment and his job as Alwayi( sweets shop seller) was not enought. He came near to her and say :
A : Hey !!!!!! Rona band kar !!!!!!
K : Aap plz hamare haath..
A : Nahin !!!!!!
K : Acha...kripa karke humein paani piladijiye hamara gala sukh raha hai...bhagwan ke liye thoda sa pani...
A : Theek hai..pani se kuch nahin hoga...

Arjun brings some water and makes her drink, after Khushi asks him :
K : Bhaiyaa ji, humein ek phone karna hai...
A : Hey !!! Bewacoof samajti ho kya humein ?? Jo tumhe phone denge or phir tum police ko bhoolalo ??? Itne bewacoof nahin hai hum !!!
K : hey devi maiyaa Bhaiyaa ji humein police ko phone nahin karna baas hamara phone yahin kahin gir gaya hai, hum uss peh phone karna chahte hai dekhne ke liye ke kahain gir gaya hai..
A : Isse kya hoga ?? Tumhe phone ki zaroorat nahin hai !!!
K : Humein nahin lekin apko to hogi na ?
A : Matlab ??
K : Ab dekhiye na, agar aap hamara phone apni biwi ko denge to woh kitni khush hogi ?? Hai na, or jab bhi apko unki yaad ayegi to aap bhabi ji ko phone karke unse baat bhi karsakenge, jaise iss waqt apko unki yaad arahi hai, hai na ??? Ab agar bhabi ji nahin to apni...woh kya kehte hai..Girl friend ko phone karna aap..
A : Hain...lekin Mr. Jha ne kaha ke woh humein itne paise denge ke hum ek naya phone lepayenge apni biwi ke liye..to apka phone kis kam ka ??
K : Are bhaiya ji, jab tak apko paise milte hai tab tak aap hamare phone se kam chala dena...
A : idea itna boora bhi nahin hai...theek hai lekin number hum khud milayenge...
K : ab kaise karenge Arnav ji phone... Theek hai to suniye...
Arjun start calling then...WRONG NUMBER :
A : Are number galat diya hai aap ne !!!
K : Humne sahi number diya hai !! Aap phone lagana nahin jante to hum kya karsakte hai ???!!!!
A : Acha ??!! Ruko !!
Arjun start calling again but WRONG NUMBER :
A : Theek hai aap khud phone karke dekhle Wrong number hi ayega !!
K : Hum kaise milaye hamare haath...
A : Rehne do !!!
K : Hey Devi Maiyaa Bhaiyaa ji hum nahin bhagenge aap hamare haath kholde, hum phone dhoond kar dete hai apko, or vaise bhi bhagne ki koshish karenge to aap humein asani se pakar lenge to kya fayida ??
A : hmm..theek hai...

Arjun makes Khushi's hand free and give her the phone, he keeps an eye on her for being sure that she won't call the police, Khushi takes the phone and start typing the real number, saying the wrong number to make him believe that he did the mistake, when Khushi hears the ring, she took a deep breath Arnav ji phone uthaye !! Phone uthaye Arnav ji...Phone uthaye...Arjun was looking at her :
K : Baj raha hai !!!! Aap dhoonde na !!
A : Kuch sunha nahin deh raha hai !!!
K : Aree bhaiya phone vibrate setting peh hai, to sunhayi kya dega apko ?? Aap ek kam kijiye aap dhoondiye, hum phone ko bajne dete hai jab tak aapko phone na mile..
A : Theek hai..

Unaware of the trick Khushi was doing he starts searching around for her phone, Khushi was praying inside Devi Maiyaa...she tried 3 times Arnav's phone but he wasn't picking up when she hears the voice message :
Arnav Singh Raizada here i am busy right now leave a message and i will call you back as soon as i am free...
Khushi was about to leave a message when Arjun' voice near of her :
A : Areee Phone band kardiya kya ???
Khushi cuts the call and tried her own phone :
K : Nahin bhaiyaa ji bass cut karke phir kar rahe hai, aap dhoonde...
Khushi was calling on her own phone...

FAR FROM THERE, Chalo Maiyaa ke bhavan bhavan bhavan Chalo Maiyaa ke bhavan bhavan bhavan...
Arnav was running, he stops...this sound...this tone...it seems like...he reminds of the first time he called Khushi and heard this ringtone( when she starts working for him, the day it was Payal's birthday) :
A : YEH TO KHUSHI KA PHONE HAI !!!!!
He starts running, using the phone ringtone to know if he was far or near of the phone : Chalo Maiyaa ke bhavan bhavan bhavan Chalo Maiyaa ke bhavan bhavan bhavan
A : Where is he damn it ???!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chalo Maiyaa ke bhavan bhavan bhavan Chalo Maiyaa ke bhavan bhavan bhavan...

Suddenly Arnav stops IT WAS THERE Khushi's phone was there, he picks up and said :
A : Allo ???? Allo ??????
On the other side, Khushi couldn't talk Arjun was next to her so she said :
K : Gunda ji apko phone mila ?!!!!
Arn : Khushiii ????
K : Aap bhi gunda ji kamal karte hai !!! Humein agwa asani se kardiya lekin ek phone dhoond nahin pah rahe ??? Kamal ke gounde hai aap..
Arj : Nahin mil raha !!! Yahain peh nahin hai !!!
Arn : Khushiii kahain peh ho Khushi ??? Kisne agwa kiya tumhe ?? Khushiii
K : Ab gunda ji itne bare ghar mein me kahain kahain dhoondenge aap...or phir itne andhere mein...jab humein kuch dikhayi nahin de raha ha..apko kya dikhayi dega ?? Waise hum hai kahain ??
Arj : Pata nahin...Boss ne humein iss jaga ka naam nahin bataya..

Suddenly they heard a big noise :
K : Apke boss M. Jha wapaas arahe hai, aap phone ko choriye, apna phone wapaas lijiye, or hamare haath baandhe isse pehle ke woh dekh le..
Arn : SHYAM !!!! You B******* Khushi darna mat !!! Me tumhe dhoond lounga...Khushi...
Khushi cut the call, she quickly delete her number, Arjun tied her hand again, he took his phone again and Shyam made his entry.

Arnav was frustrated..Khushiii...Shyam's kidnap her...he won't leave him...he won't spare him...how dare he ?!!!! ENOUGHT !!!! IT WAS ENOUGHT !!!!!!!!
This time, Shyam will pay for his since, this time ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA WILL MAKE HIM PAY FOR ALL THE PAIN HE GIVES TO HIS DI AND TO KHUSHI !!!
Khushii...pagal..mushkil halat mein, mujhe phone karke itna saab kuch batadiya...pagal hai...lekin shayad Arnav singh raizada se ziada smart hai...Arnav smirk thinking about his pagal Khushi.

END OF THE PART

Edited by IPKKNDForever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow great wrk
loved reading it
GOOO arnav ...i just want him to defeat shyam 😡
thnks for da pm also

xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
BRILLIANT PART! Shyaam u r so dead 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
luved it
khushi is smart
looking forward to see the next update.
arnav saving khushi and fighting for her. beating up that shyam
thx a lot for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part continue soon and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
good job!!!! I'd love to see shyam pay for his sins! Can't wait!! thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow luved it do continue soon...khushi'x part was cute...continue soon will b w8n!! 😊⭐️👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
can u post an index with page numbers of all the parts...,


i want to read it from the beginning plzzz
Posted: 13 years ago
Lekin Khushi aaj me wada karta houn, jiss din tum mujhe wapaas mil gayi ussi din se tumhe itni khushian dounga, itni khushian dounga ke tum bhool jayogi ke koi gham tha tumari zindagi mein..Khushi...yeh Arnav Singh Raizada ka wada hai, tumhare pati ka wada hai.

OMG...if he says this line in the drama...I would faint out of happiness...wah kya line hai👏
Khushis antics saves the day😆...love the way she fools the guy, after all he was hired by the biggest fool of all time🤢

This time, Shyam will pay for his since, this time ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA WILL MAKE HIM PAY FOR ALL THE PAIN HE GIVES TO HIS DI AND TO KHUSHI !!!

Go Arnav...FINALLY DUDE

Khushii...pagal..mushkil halat mein, mujhe phone karke itna saab kuch batadiya...pagal hai...lekin shayad Arnav singh raizada se ziada smart hai...Arnav smirk thinking about his pagal Khushi.

Khushi has always been the clever one even though she acts silly sometimes, and you Mr.ASR act clever but can be so dumb ( sorry frustrated due to his behaviour in today's episode)😳
TFS and the PM...looking forward to the next update😊




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