OS talking to the moon part 4 page 31

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vaidehi1995

@vaidehi1995

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

all i can say is BEAUTIFUL, just so many emotions

l love how khushi talks to her parents and her mother in law

i love your writing style and do send me a pm

thanks and keep it up!!!

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Anjali

@anji_22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Dis is not fine..

Pls continue...

Good job..

Waiting for u r post😲

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

That was amazing!!! Loved the way she was talking to his mom!!! Cont ASAP :D Eagerly awaiting to read the next and if you have a pm list, do plz pm me :)

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

wow so beautiful...update soon :)

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Kiran

@ILuv-LoveStory

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

It was sooo emotinal...poor soul..😭

plzz PM when u update new part!!

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Great start..let's see how he makes up for his deeds!

Pls continue soon...

-Sona

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Malnaray08

@Malnaray08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Thot u will be updating soon 😊 pl update...

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renee

@renee27

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

beautiful OS...its page 14...update already...waiting to read what happens next...:))) PM me when you update next...:DDD

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700983

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

that was simply beautiful
the words just touched my heart n i could really feel the emotions they were going through
u done a really good job in writing that