OS : Arnav hears the truth...Completed !!!

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PrashT

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

OMG!! Priya.. wht shld I say???😉
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Loove u fr this post Priyaaa😳😳😳😳

Im juz speechless now.. Im completely in love with ur OS😳😳

Simply amazing OS!!!👏 continue with another OS.. plzzz😃😃😃😃
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I hope this happens😳😳😳😉😉😉

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700983

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

really nyc
loved it
tnxx 4 not makin arnav die n 4 the pm

Edited by Fafu77 - 13 years ago

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: prash_t
OMG!! Priya.. wht shld I say???😉
😉
Loove u fr this post Priyaaa😳😳😳😳

Im juz speechless now.. Im completely in love with ur OS😳😳

Simply amazing OS!!!👏 continue with another OS.. plzzz😃😃😃😃
👏
I hope this happens😳😳😳😉😉😉

Thanxxx so much dear for liking it...feels so nice when friends like it 😊😊

time constrained in the week...will do another surely if something comes to mind 😊

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natashaa46

@natashaa46

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

😭hey awesome OS, honeypriya 👏

i loved it n have a strong feeling (mostly HOPE) tht this is the way actual truth n situations r gonna come around 😊

beautifully written ...cud really go along Arhi ...wid their journey (though a short one😆 ) ...but i totally want these lines to be in the show when truth comes out (well i'm totally sure CVs do this or hoping they cud give us smething even better 😕)

the part whic i like is more frm khushi's POV coz arnav will surely be SORRY frm the bottom of his heart ...n khushi will be the 1 (dont go to the path - y its alwaz the girl who understands 😆 )

to understand his situation (caught b/w mother-like sister & the only girl he ever opened his hear to ) ...so khushi will speak n say - ""You thought I love that guy...you thought you'll put every thing right...you dragged me and got married...you tried to hurt me and in return hurt both of us equally every day...yes you thought right...oh no, then suddenly you saw...you got to know wat the truth was...and you storm out...and get yourself almost killed...Right Mr Raizada every decision you only make...is there anything left...oh ya kindly say where do I fit in all this at the moment"

... and "" Only this much you had to say...you took so much time...all that I waited for since...and forgiveness ??? haven't you punished yourself enough..havent we suffered enough...is it always necessary for us to leave...to part..dont we deserve a family...for once cant we be together for always...dont u get I love you too..."

Well ...i loved the entire talk but as we know khushi ...she'll surely forgive arnav on the lines tht he along the way too got hurt n suffered coz she (HIS khushi) was suffering 😭

plzzz continue writing 😊

Edited by natashaa46 - 13 years ago

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Nandalala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Ohhh, Maverickkk...😍 Ok, I digress...

Priya, you are a woman after my own heart...watching movies & multi-tasking on the comp...hehehehe... Loved your extended OS...But, yaar, yeh toh sirf trailer hai!!!!! Yeh dil maange a full length, 35mm+ feature film next time--hospital ke baad kya, kya hua!😉 I'm getting inspired by the Academy Awards to be aired later tonight!😃I agree with the others: the scenarios you've described here would make complete sense if incorporated into the storyline. I want the reveal to be just between ArHi...One should hear it from the other's mouth; no third person interference. Again, a cathartic moment for Arnav--brilliantly portrayed by you...And loved that Khushi remained in her spirited state even in the hospital...she never takes any prisoners (except, maybe the one?), does she?!😆

This was a much needed elixir shot to my work-only weekend, & to the the discussions going on here...The forum is still reeling from supposed atyachaar aftermath...waxing poetic about all thats come & yet to come...I so don't want to get pulled into it...

I read that you've written other fictional pieces...could you send me the links to them (at your convenience?)...Would love to read them! Keep writing, yaar...It's soul therapy!

Anj😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Nandalala
Ohhh, Maverickkk...😍 Ok, I digress...

Priya, you are a woman after my own heart...watching movies & multi-tasking on the comp...hehehehe... Loved your extended OS...But, yaar, yeh toh sirf trailer hai!!!!! Yeh dil maange a full length, 35mm+ feature film next time--hospital ke baad kya, kya hua!😉 I'm getting inspired by the Academy Awards to be aired later tonight!😃I agree with the others: the scenarios you've described here would make complete sense if incorporated into the storyline. I want the reveal to be just between ArHi...One should hear it from the other's mouth; no third person interference. Again, a cathartic moment for Arnav--brilliantly portrayed by you...And loved that Khushi remained in her spirited state even in the hospital...she never takes any prisoners (except, maybe the one?), does she?!😆

This was a much needed elixir shot to my work-only weekend, & to the the discussions going on here...The forum is still reeling from supposed atyachaar aftermath...waxing poetic about all thats come & yet to come...I so don't want to get pulled into it...

I read that you've written other fictional pieces...could you send me the links to them (at your convenience?)...Would love to read them! Keep writing, yaar...It's soul therapy!

Anj😊

thanxxx a ton Anj😊 on a run will come bck nd update comment...

btw gonna miss academy awards...off to work..boo hoo...hope Mr Crystal is little soft on the audience 😉

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hina

@mid-night-sun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

it was truly amazing

beautifully written

well done👏

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UltimateBarun

@UltimateBarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Finally I read it!! completed it!!

it was awesome Priya,,, I am waiting for that big sorry,,, ever since he apologised to La, in such an emotional scene!!

I know the sorry to khuhsi is gonna be the scene of the decade!!!

Thanks for incorporating that in your OS!!1

GREAT JOB!

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: UltimateBarun
Finally I read it!! completed it!!

it was awesome Priya,,, I am waiting for that big sorry,,, ever since he apologised to La, in such an emotional scene!!

I know the sorry to khuhsi is gonna be the scene of the decade!!!

Thanks for incorporating that in your OS!!1

GREAT JOB!

thanxxx Zoha...

seriously the day he says sprry even the bashers will have tears in their eyes for sure...cant even imagine how he'll go thru the suffering...hope Khushi understands him then and not be mad at him too much !!!