Mohabbat Yun..last part PG 132

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

wow a news FF...!!!!!!!!
Congo Cascade
Awesome concept. ilovedit except one thing.why umade nupur1 year older than mayank...l???ol lol lol... r ai m kidding pyaar main age doesnt matter- aur 1 saal tou kuch bhi nehi..:D

btw r prologue was too tough to digest..so krypa karke update thora easy tarah se likhne ki koshish karye plz...
love ya
take care

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Thanku all for ur support and love..and welcoming the new ff…

The strt is more about there intro may sound a bit quick…

Hope u like it..

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Fiza janiii
By GOD what an update
it was amazing part sweetu
Mayurs argument was just wonderful...bapre both of them r very intelligent ...hehehe both of them r workaholic -sirf kam aur kam
maynk and nupur got hyper-but thanx GOD they controlled their anger.
and loved nupur a lot.
veryyy nice part cascade
awesome start
keep it up

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Anila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Awesome part API...

i loved it lodsss...

t apko pata hain jab hum yeh parh rahe the toh na humne isse "Gear uP" se confuse kar liya tha i mean i was like arey Nupur ka intro toh kuch part baad ane wala tha abhi kaise aya🤔 n den yeh Mayank pehle itna Sareef tha kya???!!!

🤣🤣🤣 phir yaad aya arey yeh toh dusra wala ff hain woh Thori Urdu wali ff...😆😳

accha chalo thik hain jo ho gaya so ho gaya...

bt i loved d 1st part...

so Mr.Sharma ko ORDER ki adat nhi han!!!!

dont worry Nupur ne Bismillah toh kar diya hain na abhi agey se yehi hona hain...😆😉😆

waiting for d next part...

loved it lodsss

love u API...🤗🤗🤗

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Wonderful update

Loved mayank-nupur first meeting n their little argument.

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arhi_maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

VERY NICE UPDATE !! DO CONTINUE SOON!! :)

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Nice start di...seems like a corporate based story...

lets see how and when love knocks at their heart doors..

description was good,liked all details you added.

cont soon.

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

awww fiza
just perfect ...

love dis workoholic duo ...

nupurs thought about love is just like me .

pinch to nupur

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mayuloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

amazing. two strong headed person collide

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maria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Beautiful update Fiza...you have written it well..

i Loved Mayur first meeting..

loved it

continue soon

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